A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting Out as a Rogue Cultivator in the Chaotic Star Sea

While talking about how difficult it is for casual cultivators to survive, I don't want to join a sect because I am afraid that I will have to bear the obligations after joining a sect. Why, I just want to free up the sect's benefits but don't want to pay for the sect. So why not let Qidian give you money directly? You said you don't want to write a book, but you still want money. What about Qidian?

It is enough for the protagonist to practice one skill. Because there is no point in practicing two kinds of exercises. Like a miscellaneous repairman. Moreover, practicing two exercises will definitely consume more resources and energy. It's not like the more you practice a skill, the more powerful it becomes. Have this skill. You might as well practice spiritual consciousness and physical skills. Come on, fellow practitioner Jingqishen. Get some more powerful magic weapons. Pull configuration up. It's no better than practicing two exercises. Obviously the previous book did not have this poisonous point. You do this kind of fancy stuff in this book. Just like the two Qingyang Jue level skills combined, can they be compared to the Brahma Saint's True Demonic Skills? So what's the point. And it's not like mortals don't have multi-attribute skills. You practice two exercises with different attributes. Just to cause trouble for myself and readers🔨😆🔨😆

You are so good at water. You are still practicing Qi when you are 48. Use water hard and strive for 1000 chapters to break through the foundation and 5000 chapters to form pills. That would be in line with your status as Shui De🌟jun's son, Shui De Emperor.

This is another book with a reasonable but self-righteous setting. Let me tell the author that even if your protagonist only practices "Geng Jin Jue" during the Qi training period, but he has the dual spiritual roots of gold and water, then he will definitely have water-attribute auras in his body, and you don't need to practice the water-attribute "Guishui Jue". This should be the first book from Qidian that requires you to practice two books during the Qi training period, and don't use the scientific method of cultivating immortals. That book is really ugly.

It is truly a talent to have an artifact like Chongtong that can learn the four arts, and to have an initial capital not to think about making money by drawing talismans but to do the time-consuming and laborious work of bounty tasks. The starting capital of drawing talismans can be done with about twenty spirit stones.

During the Qi refining period, it is purely idiosyncratic to focus on describing this and that difficulty and how to develop. There is nothing to write about in this section. Who will come to see what the significance is of how you develop by taking advantage of both sides during the Qi refining period? This is purely top-heavy writing. Which fandom reader needs your help to introduce it during the weak Qi refining period? And is it annoying that you still act stupid from time to time? What's interesting about this paragraph?

I hope the protagonist can grow up quickly. His current mentality... Is too immature.

Double pupil is the path to invincibility, multiple bottles lead to multiple paths

It's too watery, and the protagonist doesn't have enough IQ

It's so boring, the heroine was arranged without anyone even writing about it. Can you write something about cultivating immortality? It's all these weird things. The realm has not improved at all, and there is no sense of urgency at all. Even though they were lagging behind Han Li, they were still playing around. If you go to the fairy world or the spiritual world, you won't be able to play with a woman.