Mortal: Learned from Jiyin Island

This book can only be eunuch. Because no one watched the beginning of Chaos Xinghai, you still followed the eunuch practice to practice Gou Daoliu, and all the direct readers ran away. Now you are cheating with Shuanglong Aotian all the way. Your useless practice is really unbearable to most fan readers. I suggest giving up and writing another book.

The fanfic written by aboriginal people is a piece of shit 🙂. It's better to read the original work when reading about aboriginal people.

I feel bad about fan writing.

I haven't read it, but I read the comments and I know the general situation. I said to the author, have you watched the anime? If you want to write about magic, you might as well write about traveling through time to Wen Tianren, to where Yinxu is. Because in recent animations, Wen Tianren is a bit confused. You might as well write this, maybe there will be some traffic. Develop a system and develop a physical training method that can be practiced by mortals in the spiritual world. It will be okay if there is no spiritual energy under the yin deficiency. Pretend to be dead to settle the matter with Han Li, then come out to Tiannan to kill randomly, cheat all the way and return to Chaotic Star Sea to kill the Six Paths, as long as you don't go against Han Li.

The fourth line of your introduction can turn away many readers.

Is there a female protagonist?

I'm writing a fanfic and I don't know the plot, so I'm not interested in it.

The novel "Mortal: Becoming Wang Heng in the Beginning" is welcome to be tasted

The pressure is a bit harsh. Level 2 is so majestic.

That's right, I didn't write about Tiannan's Bloody Secret Realm