Timeline Player

As mentioned, if you have any suggestions you can put forward here. As well as asking for a follow-up reading.

The transition is too sudden and the emotions always come to an abrupt end. This is a sign of poor writing skills, but to be honest, the concept of the copy is quite good.

Hurry up and write and update quickly. Why should you rest? Write quickly!!!!!!!!

Why are there just these few people? It shouldn't be.

The soul is back, the soul is back~

Classic, a copy is fine, but others are too classic

This beginning is original to the author. Why have I seen this beginning in other novels? They are all about women asking the protagonist to investigate her husband's cheating. Then the protagonist brings out the evidence of the woman's cheating and blackmails the girl.

It's okay so far. It's still edible for me.

But the picture and character depiction are too poor, it seems impossible to empathize, the writing is too hasty, too hasty, and even the only commendable plot is ruined by the complete lack of transitions before each chapter.

Two updates a day, how do you make a fortune like this? Another 10 chapters, another 10 chapters by one person!!