Please Ascend

The author is a writer with youthful illness. The protagonist has been pushed away, offending people for no reason, and helping people for no reason. For example, the gang leader's wife, because the gang leader died because of the protagonist, so she went to help? Aren't you very familiar with each other? In the end, I have to make amends with a clear conscience.

Looking at the introduction, you can tell that the Riddler is a bit of a literary youth.

Everyone pretends to be pretentious when talking, some are particularly pretentious, some are particularly pretentious, and some are particularly pretentious. Is this what literary youth are?

Have you ever practiced immortality? It's natural to write something randomly.

In fact, don't you feel strange when you see this? The protagonist is hated by everyone wherever he goes?

No one with a bit of depression would be able to write a story about such a neurotic person.

Could this character's dialogue be more awkward? Pretending to be serious for the sake of pretending to be serious looks really awkward. Abandoned, take your time and take a look.

You can read it when you're bored. The characters are basically disgusting, including the protagonist, who doesn't speak like a human being. If you plan to write the next book, I don't recommend continuing this style.

I feel like the writing is a bit bland. Also, who is the protagonist's master?

Why did I change my name to a more junior high school name? But that's okay, I thought you were going to change it to become the Lord of All Laws from the moment you go down the mountain, hahahaha.

It's much better than some of the books on the ranking list. It's so refreshing!

I specially selected a chapter to talk about it. It feels similar to the previous book. Literary youth is not a problem, but the level of writing is not good enough. It is like eating a lychee and seeing the fragrance, but feeling greasy in the throat after eating it. It is okay to swallow it, but it always creates a little barrier.

If the author wanted to write about a multi-female harem, he could have posted it with a pin on the top. I thought this was a single-female book at first. If I hadn't looked at the comment section, I would have just crossed it out. After looking at the comment section more, I only stayed after I found out there were multiple female protagonists.

Come on, Qashita's latest masterpiece, it's much better than some of the zombie-based movies on the charts.

It would have been better if it were not as short and weak as the previous book 🙂 The word count was cut in half 😟

It's not a single heroine. Could you tell me earlier?

Tianxia Shi: Ah Lu Cangwu: Ah 🐶

How can I put it this way? Recently, I feel that the rhythm is very strange. The first part of walking with Yuyu was fine, but then I started to feel nervous when I arrived at the military village. The rhythm also felt very fast in the second part. Suddenly, it was said that Lu had a big conspiracy, and Lin suddenly had to face the older generation again. It ended so quickly in the capital, and it ended so quickly in the west. It felt like the finale was about to happen.

I hope that if the author releases a new book, please let me know here 😭

Well written, keep up the good work✊

😭 I've been saving for a while, but why haven't I updated it recently, and there's no news at all?

Come on, there are ants crawling on you