
I Open a Copy in the Mortal World
我在凡人世界开副本
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- Ongoing
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- 332k Words
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- Cultivation
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- Male
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- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Specially write about poisonous points
You didn't pay any attention to writing the protagonist's personal characteristics and plug-in characteristics. The words were all about "interfering with Han Li will make the hair stand on end, a sense of depression, and a sense of death." Please, your book is a copy. Isn't the key to the copy? How come the entire article is filled with various relationships and intuitions with Han Li, and even his will is affected by the Time Dao Ancestor. Then why don't you fix it? Always watched and threatened by Time Daozu. Without Han Li, it would be impossible to open a dungeon. Then what are you? Nanny? If you don't have your own mentality, is there any reason why your book is not cool?
The protagonist and Nangong Han Li destroyed Mo Jiao together. Han Li and Nangong went to bed just like in the original work. The protagonist just watched from the side. It was so embarrassing. Anyone who could not run away after seeing this is pure🐢
To put it simply, as long as Han Li needs it, the protagonist cannot take it. If Han Li wants the protagonist's life, the protagonist can only commit suicide 🙂 The protagonist is the patch that Han Li will apply in the future to protect Han Li and become his ancestor.
The author's book would be useless if it didn't have an amazing plot later on. Most of the comments were complaints and bad reviews. After reading one chapter, I kind of wanted to quit 🤓. The first chapter is about the plot of Senior Brother Lu raping and killing Chen Qiaoqian, and the protagonist written by the author is very cowardly. The pill was specially left to Old Demon Han. The author's explanation in the comment area was also far-fetched. He said that there would be a cause and effect if he could not become enemies with Han Li. But I am thinking that the protagonist killed Senior Brother Lu and Han Li was not involved in the whole process. Just because Han Li wanted the Foundation Establishment Pill so much that he might compete with him? So you are afraid of Han Li? Moreover, the protagonist is much stronger than Han Li (can kill Brother Lu in an instant), but is still afraid of Han Li (the author explains that there is a cause and effect for enmity, but it is really far-fetched), is too cowardly, and licks Han Li too much, so he is quite persuaded to quit 😜
A good lump
I would like to ask the author, if pig's feet have no background, can the five spiritual roots enter the seven major sects? ? ? ?
If you write like this, you basically won't get to the end, because in a sense. What you write like this shows that the protagonist's future achievements are not as good as Han Li's. Otherwise, you will be the most awesome person in the world from now on. With one slap, many Taoist ancestors will test a few eggs and beat them to death. Do you need to be afraid of him when you are weak? And since you and Han Li are not from the same world, then if you choose to retreat and stay away, but you insist on getting involved, aren't you looking for death? I feel uncomfortable writing novels, and I am asking for trouble.
How does Wulinggen waste enter Huang Maple Valley? Is it okay if they don't collect garbage at all?
Even if you have five spiritual roots and no background, you can enter the Yellow Maple Valley!
I skipped the first one, and my opinion was that it was pure fucking shit. The author is still explaining this and that, isn't he just licking Han Li? What else is the author explaining in the comment area? Why can't I get this Foundation Establishment Pill? It's not Han Li's. Why don't you just take a Main Foundation Establishment Pill and fight Han Li to the death?
At first, I thought it was a simple dog-licking novel, but the author kept emphasizing that there was interference from the Taoist. After reading Chapter 12, Nangong Wan brought it to the protagonist's mouth without eating it. He just watched the live erotic palace on the spot. He was a pure turtle man. He kept explaining the interference of the Taoist. You are the author and you are the creator. Are you afraid of the Taoist? There are so many colleagues, but I only wrote one chapter about the fairy world. I am afraid of this and that. I hope the author will write about the fairy world, and I will definitely come back to read it then.
The author is really talented. Did he create the trend of giving girls away?
For this type of writing about causal men and women as gifts, please read Chapter 12 specifically. The protagonist should be at the back, and it should be able to attract cuckolds to come👀
The old slave will go through fire and water for the Heavenly Lord
If you are so afraid of Han Li, why are you writing fan fiction? Even if you write it, why do you write Tiannan's opening?
Aggrieved
You can't take this, you can't ask for it, haha! What are you wearing? I'm so frustrated that I've turned into an old turtle. My mysterious power keeps me locked up all day long, you Karami.
Stop licking Han Li, otherwise you wouldn't be able to write any fanfics
He is obviously stronger than Han Li, but better than Han Li. The writing of this refreshing article is extremely frustrating. It's too late to feel refreshed as soon as possible.
If you insist on arguing with the readers, you are very harsh.
It was just okay at the beginning, but after building the foundation, it was really pure garbage.
Since you knew you would be targeted when you were next to Han Li, why did you force yourself to get in there? Are you addicted to treating people like dogs?
The content of the second pussy ran away and ran away again
The author forgot that the most important thing was that he was writing a fanfic. It made Shuangdian feel uncomfortable at the beginning of reading the fanfic, and he didn't change it in time until he subscribed. Internet writers Huang are more powerful than Han Li. Authors who write fan fiction now rob Huang's wife, and some even won't let Huang's mother go.
Nice! This is a rare Fantong book. Come on😊, I wish you write better and better!
Use the treasure place to push down the book📚
Mortal: The system is an infrastructure mini-game It is already going through the contract process. If you are interested, you can take a look and invest.
Why do the ink stains become more and more rubbish the more I look at them?