I'm at Xuanwu Gate, and You Think I'm on a Journey to the West?

The methods of unchecked and balanced immortals are as tough as those of immortals. How many lives can be filled in them? What can you do if you imprison a mortal and treat him like a beast? It needs to be written more or less balanced, right? Not only to cheat the protagonist, but also to give Datang some generals who can shake the gods, right? What you wrote is that a violent baby wants to negotiate the same terms as a mature person. It's totally funny.

It's all fights, and they're all repeated fights. It's too watery. Li Shimin can be seen as a real dragon, so the protagonist does not have the protection of the dynasty's human nature and luck? It's outrageous that you can fight any little monster.

It is suggested that the author can write about military formations and the like, otherwise it will just be like the big boxes within small boxes from decades ago. Datang was originally invincible, but it was blocked by that thing. Once you know it, you can directly cut down the sky.

You either write history or mythology. What's the point of doing such historical things in mythology? In the words of the book, the Tang Dynasty, as a unified dynasty in the southern states, did not even have personal luck. If there is no extraordinary power, wouldn't it be a world of demons and chaos? Just like Liaozhai. If there is one, the protagonist is also a prince, has killed countless enemies, and has so much evil energy. It is very difficult to be beaten by two little demons, ugh. There is no force at all. This is how it was written in ancient times. Now that the system is so mature, if you still write it like this, you will be 100% offended.

The writing was quite good, but I felt like I was fighting all the time. There was no plot and the whole story was just fighting.

You don't even have to read it to know what's written here.

Just like the state of Journey to the West, it will be over if it doesn't rain for you. Why are you making trouble with others? Can people not drink water, or do dealers not need water? This is not to mention that Li Shimin's soul was taken away as soon as he was told, and several key figures were taken away in exchange for a few obedient ones. What else is going on?

I'll ban the rain for a few decades first, and then the Dragon King of the Four Seas will drain all the country's water resources from you. Are you still going to do it?

What is written is a piece of shit. As for the protagonist's behavior of killing prisoners and brothers, he is no different from monsters in Journey to the West. He is not afraid of heaven and earth. He has no ability to fight against gods. If not the author's fate, he would have been beaten to death.

I have to say that the main character is too weak. But if you are really brave, then Cai still dares to play like this. Normally, he would just get two horses. If the author doesn't give me some powerful hooks, I'll have to jump in later stages.

Princes cannot become immortals. This is the ternary system. Heaven, earth and people

Just reading the introduction, I feel that the main character has a low IQ. Journey to the West was planned by a group of gods. Why are you pretending to be a mortal? You don't even know how to hide your strength and bide your time. The armed forces of both sides are not on the same level, and they are not doing what they should do before they are fully developed.

Suppose: You have a mountain. The (snakes, insects, birds, fish, flowers, grass...) On the mountain are all under your management. What is your management? ?

The writing and plot are quite attractive, but a little bit literary. The author likes to use romantic words, but they are not placed in a very appropriate position, which is a bit dramatic and acceptable The protagonist currently does not have very strong means or trump cards. The author has always wanted to describe a very relaxed look, but in fact, he is at a disadvantage during the development of the plot, resulting in a bit of a delay in the fight scene Maybe he wanted to suppress his desire first, but in the end he failed to do so.

Isn't it good to get the sutra? Everyone can practice martial arts, everyone can recite sutras, and everyone can practice immortality. I am not doing it to achieve the Buddhahood, I am doing it for the entire people of the Tang Dynasty 🤓

Try to test the vast ocean of people, drive it to your advantage, issue orders, go up the mountain and go to the sea, you can seek immortality. As a court, it is a pity that the civilian army is not used as the sword.

You have combined Journey to the West with history books.

I always want to dominate the world, but I don't have invincible strength. I force others to directly reopen the earth, water, fire and wind. Are you kidding me? What do people really fear about the fate of the Emperor? It's not long to wipe out all mortal beings. There's no way we can do it again.