Tianlong: I, Senior Brother Xingxiu, Will Do Justice for Heaven.

Without a chivalrous character, how can one compose tenderness? It is even more difficult to sing a soul-stirring song The feelings of family and country will never come from the hands of villains It can be full of pride, it can be feminine and cunning, and it will never be the same.

We must beat that vicious bitch Ah Zi until she kneels down and beg for mercy, and force her to follow the protagonist as a star nuri.

Acting for heaven? It feels like a joke, please change it.

Tianlong and Water Margin are mixed together, it feels neither fish nor fowl, it seems too inconsistent.

Boss, why do you feel that you are driving too high and driving low? The more you write, the less attractive it becomes? You have two points of attraction. The rare Xingxiu sect starts with the protagonist practicing poison skills. How did the leader of the demon sect with deep demonic nature turn into a swordsman obsessed with swordsmanship?

There's something wrong with this style, it feels a bit like TJ's rhythm.

Whatever the star or destiny is, it all depends on the wind and clouds. Lao Ma and his gang believe in destiny.

It's good-looking. It describes the views of a time-traveler with modern education and a heroic protagonist. The advantage of combining Water Margin with martial arts novels and history is that there is a lot to write about, but it is difficult to write it well.

I feel like you're off track, mainly because it's a bit contradictory to the title of the introduction. The Xingxiu Sect only writes at the beginning. Judging from these chapters, "One Palm" also goes to "One Sword". The Infinite Sword Sect is just a background in the original book, and the swordsman is not the core character revealed in your introduction and title of the book. As a result, it is so long. I picked the sword three times and still made progress step by step.

I saw more than 90 pictures and appraised them. I don't know why, boring stuff.

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The three views are correct, the plot is reasonable, and the characters are fleshed out. What's wrong with acting for heaven? If he doesn't act for heaven, is he still a hero? Modern people in that era can't be "whimsical" anymore? How can you not shake that bastard world if you have this ability? Don't fall in love, but follow your heart and wield a sword alone Don't let it break.

It feels good, but the writing style is not like that of a newbie or that of an experienced veteran.

You're not the author. Didn't you say you were signing a contract for a new book? Why did you delete it?

Are you busy with work and don't have time to write?

Overall, many of the side plots are very biased and too detailed. They lack the feeling of expectation and are not exciting.

I don't understand? If you don't become an enemy, you still care about whether he is good or not. You keep people everywhere. People want to kill you, but you still let people go. What is this? , I feel so disgusting. Could you please change the settings? At least explain in detail what he has done to be good and what he has done to be evil? Then I decide whether to kill or not. I am confused. It's inexplicable.

The more I write, the more outrageous it becomes. Write down the details of Tianlong and meet each character in the book who masters all kinds of wonderful martial arts. One person, one horse and one poisonous frog. Wouldn't it be nice to write about a martial arts idiot? Do you have to use Taoist talismans to cultivate immortality in martial arts? , The stars follow the way of the world, and act for the heaven. Solve the problem by killing evil people, why not kill Ye Erniang? This is worse than the level of Murong Fu's family. At least others know that they are plotting rebellion. The follow-up will not be about wanting to be Pluto, and then in the process of solving the Taoists who want to kill themselves, it seems to be an understatement to solve the future problem of the White Lotus Sect, and let these traitors establish a dynasty again, right? A peerless master matched with a cult organization. Isn't this Murong's standard equipment? There are two peerless people on the other side and a group of die-hard loyalists. Even if he shows the imperial seal, someone will kneel down to him. Pluto's theism is based on the blood of the previous dynasty. It is better to go up and kill the corrupt officials first, and then kill Jin Liao. This is the last resort of killing to stop the killing, and you can still gain understanding points in a clear and righteous manner The combat power is about to collapse. If you can kill Murong Fu, you can kill Ding Chunqiu, but at the beginning of the chapter, Ding Chunqiu is written as a detached element. There is something unreasonable. Abi is about to be sent due to a heavy rainstorm. How is it possible to be rescued? According to you, Abi has no chance to appear in the original book? The Murong family made their fortune by doing business with local snakes. If you go up to them, you will take advantage of them. You have even taken in four ministers, and you will not kill them. The intention of raising Bailian is too obvious. What kind of birdman is Bao Bubu Bu? If his master dies, Bao will fight for his life. Tianlong writes that all beings are evil, but you write that we are both right and handsome The writing style is much better than ours. This book is a pity...

It was said in the original work that a sword-shaped light and shadow was printed on the wall of one place in the cave, and the light and shadow came from another wall. It's obvious that there is a sword hidden on the top of the wall. Why didn't all the fan fiction writers notice this detail and no one went to get the sword?

For the protagonist's martial arts, it's better to focus on fists and palms. Using the sword as the starting point in the early stage is just that the Wuliang chapter is too long.