A Candle for Immortality

Have you ever been a lamp? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted 😅

In Chapter 10, the author probably originally wanted to write about Jiang Zhu's story about good and evil in people's hearts. Evil people have evil hearts, so they can't seek immortality. But unfortunately, Ayan's writing was off-kilter. It didn't reflect goodness, but was more about greed. In the end, painting a tiger would not turn out to be an anti-dog.

The protagonist is an elf, who is suspected of being reborn. He is born with knowledge, has no desires and desires, is not "persistent", and has a compassionate heart that is high-minded but down-to-earth. The first two temple owners sacrificed everything just to seek immortality. After the protagonist woke up and saw the tomb on the mountain behind, he imagined the evil deeds of the temple owners and believed that these two people had done many evil things. These two people make the protagonist disgusted, and the protagonist looks on with cold eyes. Every time he wakes up, he discovers the evil consequences of the two, and then he feels evil in his heart. Unfortunately, the protagonist has no ability to interfere. Every time the viewer does evil, he is asleep, and there is really nothing he can do. When the first viewer was about to die, the protagonist felt pity and revealed his true body to tell him why he could not seek immortality. Later, the second viewer also touched the protagonist just before death. The protagonist was so compassionate that he revealed his true body again and took the initiative to tell him why he could not seek immortality. The strange thing is that both of them died with regrets, and there is no subsequent description. However, the miraculous experiences of the two temple masters before their death were known to a third person, and spread to the temple master's family. The next step is that the protagonist saves a little girl. After the little girl grows up, he helps the little girl with a knife when encountering injustice. While rescuing the distressed, he is also studying how to live forever and keep his beauty forever. When she dies, the protagonist inadvertently picks the "fruit" that the girl has spent her life condensing. In the end, the protagonist gets the benefit. The main character wandered outside and was rescued by a greedy old couple. The main character felt pity for the two when he saw them, and once again helped them get through the current difficulties. Later, he learned that they were a farmer and a snake, so he no longer had mercy and watched them carry out their conspiracy, and saved the poor people at the critical moment. The poor man is a truly kind person, always generous to others, sending money door to door, even if he sees through the scheme of the old couple, he just hides it obediently, allowing their grandson to spread rumors to smear him in the outside world. The villagers repay kindness with hatred and cannot understand the good deeds of the truly kind man, and are greedy and want more. The truly kind man feels uncomfortable but continues to do good deeds. Later, the emperor accidentally learned of the existence of immortals, and deliberately planned the protagonist. The protagonist had to go through difficult times and pass through them easily. Isn't it a disaster? It's so exciting, but what finally falls in front of the protagonist is just a speck of dust, even if the protagonist is still a young elf, this kind of plot is simply outrageous. After that, the protagonist wandered around again, woke up and felt pity and saved a girl. This girl was even more greedy. She was innocent and childlike. She wanted everyone on the island to be immortal, and she wanted her relatives to be with her forever. Not only did the protagonist not resent this, but he asked the girl with deep eyes. Not only was he not afraid that the girl would set her sights on him, but he also believed that the girl was kind in nature. He thought it was caused by the girl being too naive. Her intentions were pure, how could she be evil? Later, the girl abandoned her mother and finally found her father after leaving home for a long time. She also had a younger brother who was not related by blood. The girl loved her new brother deeply and gave him whatever he asked for. Mortals have to die one day, and her father is about to die. The girl is looking for longevity and life-extending medicinal materials everywhere, intending to refine elixirs to extend the life of her father. As a result, the girl's luck is against the will of heaven, and her wish comes true. For such a greedy person, the protagonist is filled with joy, compassion and continuous support. Not surprisingly, after the girl died, all her "fruits" were obtained by the protagonist. The protagonist only needs to be aloof, pity him and pity her, have no desires, no demands, no persistence, rush to deliver the benefits to the door, take the benefits and give away compassion, the cycle is endless. This is a holy scripture, let's call it good, the protagonist is not pure, call it evil, the protagonist does not do evil, the protagonist has a smooth journey and gets one benefit after another, and the good elf setting is neither fish nor fowl.

There are creative ideas, but the characters are really a bit flat. The characters created have no characteristics or even advantages and disadvantages. Good guys and bad guys are like this. It just feels like it has flaws. If it settles a bit, it feels like it could be a masterpiece.

Although her daughter's life is short-lived, at least she is still the same person as she was before. But if you give her a Nirvana memory and then rebirth, there is no difference between this and extinguishing her soul and replacing her with a new one. You can change the way to make her disease better. After all, you are the author, so it's up to you to do it with your hands.

I just signed the contract. Author, are you selling your lies?

. It's a pity that the author can't grasp it after all.

Downcast eyes are used too much. Even the main character is indifferent to fame and wealth. He keeps using this word. Even the main character himself says this sentence. It seems very hypocritical to be so condescending. Also, does everyone in this area care about Drooping Eyes? It cannot be because of being favored, favored or favored by immortals, or having deep blessings. When everyone says the same thing at the same time, it makes me feel weird. Also, I never knew that the author didn't have the writing skills, so the "small" plot was easier to write. In fact, it's good to have more supporting characters appear. The protagonist appeared less in the front, but after it was released, the number of appearances was very large. It is equivalent to temporarily changing the protagonist, from a group portrait to a one-man show in which the protagonist appears in a large space.

The writing is quite good, but the portrayal of the latest protagonist Yaoyao is a bit strange. I read the author's reply that he wanted to write about an ordinary person, but I feel that it was written too much, or that Yaoyao asked for too much. For this kind of device logistics, the protagonists change very quickly, and there are not enough words to describe it. The simpler it is written, the more likable it is, but if it is written too much, it seems too thin. I have read a book on similar artifacts from an external website (I have a magic sword). The book contains almost 100 or 200 pictures of a sword master. Some of the characters portrayed in it are still impressive to me even after three or four years. I hope the lamp holders will change more slowly after the candles lead people to the immortal path. Characters are more attractive when there is enough text to describe them. Otherwise, creating a slightly more complex character like now would cause a lot of controversy. It's caused by the lack of text and the thin characters. There is not enough text to support your character.

It's all riddles. This book is going to be scrapped.