A Candle for Immortality
长生有烛
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- Completed
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- 503k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
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Have you ever been a lamp? Some of this is just random writing, based on assumptions. 😅
Chapter Ten: The author probably originally intended to depict Jiang Zhu's ability to discern good from evil in people's hearts, showing that evil people's hearts are not righteous and therefore cannot attain immortality. However, unfortunately, the character A Yan was written off-track, failing to showcase goodness and instead focusing more on greed. In the end, the attempt to draw a tiger backfired and resulted in a dog-like imitation.
The Passion of Our Lady of the Immortals
The protagonist is an elf, seemingly a reincarnated being, born with knowledge, without desires or wants, not "attached," and possessing a compassionate heart that is both lofty and grounded. The first two abbots both gave everything to beg the immortals to lower their eyes.
I have creative ideas, but the characters are really flat. They lack distinct characteristics and even have no strengths or weaknesses; both good and bad characters are like that. It just feels flawed. With a little refinement, I feel it could be a masterpiece.
Was the author too hasty and didn't think things through properly?
The girl may have died young, but at least she was still a whole person, alive and well. But to give her a nirvana, erase her memories, and then rebirth—what's the difference between that and destroying her soul and giving her a new one? There are other ways to help her recover; after all, you're the author, it's just a matter of putting in a little effort.
So you've already signed a contract? Author, are you selling your assets?
Having read up to chapter ten, I didn't expect it to fall into such a low-quality state after only ten chapters.
Unfortunately, the author ultimately couldn't grasp it.
The phrase "looking down" is used too much. Even the protagonist, who is supposed to be indifferent to fame and fortune, uses this phrase repeatedly. The protagonist himself even says this phrase. This makes him seem so aloof and hypocritical. Furthermore, does everyone in this region care about this lowered gaze?
The writing is quite good, but the latest protagonist, Yao Yao, is a bit strangely portrayed. The author's reply suggests they wanted to write about an ordinary person, but I feel there's too much writing, or rather, Yao Yao's desires are too great. For this kind of artifact-based novel where the protagonist changes so quickly, there isn't enough text to fully describe her.
It was too bland after it was released.
It's all riddles, this book is doomed.