I Crossed Paths with the Mysterious Queen of the Mysterious World

I caught up to the latest chapter in one go. It's well written and the plot rhythm is very comfortable.

Um? Has Zangwill published another book on the same subject?

Sorry, but. You mean... A "Peeper" path sequence three demigod who is famous for his insight and analysis ability can say: "I eat the food in the store and I won't be discovered." Is this correct?

Can you please stop playing Gandalf and Monkey King? It doesn't match the character. I just feel embarrassed if you play it hard. Huang Beibei = five big and three thick, with infinite strength? , It looks uncomfortable, the queen is not a Valkyrie, she is a princess after all.

The author's writing is very good, but... The Queen of Mystery not only snatches the children's candy, but even eats what Dudley has eaten. This... Idea is a bit too advanced.

It is recommended to become a gangster, gangsters in the mysterious world are invincible

The Bernadette described by the author is not the mysterious queen in Mystery at all, but the female personality of another parallel world of the author's protagonist. There is no essential personality difference between the two. The actions they performed after time travel cannot be said to be completely different, they can only be said to be exactly the same. At the beginning, the protagonist came to the Dawn, and I could accept the over-braining and stupidity, but then switched to Bernadette's perspective, and faced the exact same operation after Dumbledore's words, I really couldn't understand it. It is completely written based on the author's own thoughts and feelings of the same person. In addition, Bernadette would not wear that kind of cake tutu. The author can refer to the original work to describe how Bernadette dresses up.

In the world of Harry Potter, there are many channels for exposure to Chinese. Will Bernadette discover and learn it? I'm looking forward to it

I hope to focus on the Lord of Mysteries and put 90% of the text on mysteries, with a little bit of the Harry Potter world mixed in. I just skipped reading the last one. The world of Harry Potter is really not interesting 🙂

Compared with the previous double-crossing, this one has become a cross-crossing. It was quite fresh at first, but soon I discovered a problem. In order to create a so-called ambiguous atmosphere, the heroine was changed into a person who can sweat and go to the toilet on the grounds of changing her soul. Of course, this is also a trivial matter. The main problem is that the male protagonist and the female protagonist are divided into two plots. There is no sense of togetherness like last time, and the last time it focused on the adventure of two people learning magic together, it was also the interaction between the two of them. And this one, the plot is set before the start of school. Although there is some freshness of the female protagonist seeing the modern city, it doesn't feel very interesting after watching too much. The overall evaluation is not as good as the previous one 😭

I feel like the protagonist's handling of the events caused by Old Neil in the last two chapters has been a complete mess 😅. What was shown in the first two chapters was that the protagonist was confused throughout and Beibei acted for him. It doesn't have to be that the protagonist comes down from the sky to turn the tide, but it must show the role and initiative of the protagonist.

How to say it? The force value of the Harry Potter world is definitely not as good as the mystery. After all, mystery is magic that serves combat warfare, and it has the combat power to explode stars and destroy cities with one strike. For this reason, the force value of Mystery is much higher than that of Harry Potter. But what? We could beef up the mechanics of Harry Potter, it is fairy tale magic after all. For example, the mortality of the death curse, the magic of the magic stone, and the functionality of life magic. However, even if we strengthen these, we must realize that we cannot be in a weak position when fighting Voldemort. We can calculate against him, but we cannot be too disgusted by him.

With Bernadette's figure, appearance, and skin, it is impossible for people to recognize her as a homeless person on the street without special disguise or a long period of miserable experience. A slight change here will make it less inconsistent.

The idea is pretty good, but the more I look at it, the more I feel it's a little distorted and a bit inconsistent.

I feel like it's a bit deliberate not to learn Chinese.

The idea of ​​the book is very good, but 1. Sequence 3 of the Mysterious World is written like Sequences 8 and 9. I can understand that low Sequence and Hugh Fors are mixed together. It doesn't make much sense to have to find them both when they are both Sequence 3. Two, there is a slight problem with the details of the magical world. I wrote nearly 3 chapters of Cat and Mouse on the Train. If it weren't for another big foreshadowing, it would be too much.

Why is it another subject that changes the soup without changing the medicine? It can be written in another world,,, Douluo swap, one person can swap, if not, Marvel can swap,,,, what is the difference between this and the previous book,,,

There are so few people, is HP and mysterious passerby popularity so bad?

Both of the main characters in the book seemed so stupid that it didn't make them any fun at all.

It continues to be recommended on the list, otherwise it is not popular, and it may have something to do with the name of the book, but this book is really good at this stage.

If the author writes about mysterious fan fiction, then he should write less about Harry Potter.

After traveling through time, both of them immediately thought that the place where the original owner could sleep peacefully was in danger and ran away.

Uncertain Fog: Honorable Name: The bridge of light and darkness, the gap between black and white, the never-determined fog, the truth that oversees all things. Sequence 9: Broker Sequence 8: Shadow Businessman Sequence 7: Prosecutor Sequence 6: Careerist Sequence 5: Black Box Sequence 4: Supervisor (supervise everything within hundreds or thousands of meters, including secrets; supervise contract objects and automatically impose punishments; supervise unexecuted crimes - let the victim of the crime appear and attack the corresponding person; supervision is sacred Significance - Supervisors are not attacked by atheistic people, and the corresponding attacks are returned as punishment. For those with divinity, supervisors can emphasize 'protection', forming an invisible barrier to withstand two to three attacks, and allowing the attacker to suffer a certain amount of punishment; better shadow utilization; faster black-box transactions). Sequence 3: The Vortex Weaver (the core of the transaction, which can initiate transactions across spatial distances (no prerequisites), regardless of level differences (provided there is ritual protection), forming a complex network, which in modern terms has truly become a "platform") Sequence 2: The Blasphemer (also known as the "Blasphemy Angel", Can steal power from transactions, even if it involves high-ranking people, can deconstruct all sacredness and evil, light and darkness) Sequence 1: Truth (I am the truth! Everything in the gray area is defined by me! The light is too extreme, the darkness is too degenerate, the order is too rigid, the shadow is too distorted, only gray is the truth of the universe) - Just kidding, human nature is the truth, not only the bad nature of all human beings, but also the science of divine communication is equally important. Sequence 0: Fog of Chaos (the manifestation of chaos by the Son of Chaos, which makes everything certain no longer certain, including the trajectory of fate, the destined ending, even the words spoken face to face, and what just happened)

Author, can you improve a little bit? I really want to subscribe to all of your books, but the writing is too bad 🙂🙂🙂. I can't read it without picking and choosing. There are very few other mysterious fans that I like. Please 🙂🙂🙂

I've been raising them for almost a year, and finally I have more

Come on, author! Very interesting idea. I especially like the description of the meeting between Huang Beibei and Emperor Russell. But then again, there are a lot of Riddlers in the article

No wonder you've written two books and you're still LV1

The subject of exchanging souls is not good at all. There is no personal space at all.

Author Da Da, what are blue scales?

When in danger, Huang Beibei will be buried at any time