Secret: Propose Audrey at the Beginning

After reading the first three chapters, there are so many flaws that I don't know how to complain about them. First, the Loen Kingdom of Lord of Mysteries is based on the United Kingdom during the First Industrial Revolution. Ordinary workers could not enter the residential areas of the rich without being driven away. Second, even if you really succeed in entering the residential area and causing public opinion impact on the Hall family, it will not cause any damage to them at all. Public opinion is in the hands of the bourgeoisie, and newspapers with a surname will not publish it at all. Moreover, Earl Hall is a banker and a big capitalist, which is even less likely to cause any damage. Third, in the original work, all the king's princes pursued Audrey. How could the protagonist, the son of an earl, be better than the prince? If they want to marry, they will also choose a big noble of the same level. It is ridiculous that a mere newspaper public opinion wants to marry Earl Hall. Fourth, assuming that public opinion really had an impact on Hall, as a staunch supporter of the Church of the Night, it would be easy for the Earl to ask the church to take action to calm the public opinion. Fifth, OOC Audrey, she would never marry a stranger.

Klein is too miserable. The protagonist should be the Lord of Mysteries, and let Klein enjoy the happiness of being the Ageless Witch.

All I can say is that this opening is too stupid. Even if the deus ex machina says that this is the result of the protagonist's last wish before traveling through time, which was caused by the distortion of the power of the source of matter, it is more reliable than the protagonist's hilarious incitement to public opinion. There is no need to raise the issue of whether he will be found out. Just what he said, about manipulating the market, is worth mentioning in the past 100 years. What does it mean to mention the British in the Victorian era? Even if you say that someone is abusing workers, people have to ask first what age you are referring to. If it is less than five years old, it may be a little too much. If it is higher than this number, then it is better not to bring it up. As for the poor, their families are ruined? Isn't that because they don't work hard enough? One of the purposes of the workhouse I led was to make life worse than death for them. After all, if the people in the workhouse could live like human beings, wouldn't they be regarded as a paradise by the workers on the production line🤭

The beginning of the story feels OOC. The protagonist can easily influence Count Jean Hall and make him ask his daughter, even for his opinion. To reach this point is a bit too exaggerated and too simple. The count himself knows the mysterious power. I vaguely remember that in the original work, he knew a Sequence 3 or 4 bishop. The risk for the protagonist to do this is too great. In particular, there are self-created sequences. Once noticed by a high sequence, they can easily be destroyed as an external god force. And to be honest, I don't quite understand the protagonist's purpose. Is it for the resources of the Count's family, friendship in the dark night, and to get involved with Tarot? But it's not enough. The protagonist's family is not much worse than Earl Hall. Klein's stock is bound to skyrocket and needs investment. He can use Tarot Club. It's hard to say whether it is good or bad to appear in the eyes of the night too early. And the protagonist can only bring losses to Hall at most, but these losses are not enough within a reasonable range. Audrey can reject the protagonist just like she rejected the prince. And if the loss is really big, firstly, there will be an investigation, and secondly, the prince still likes Audrey, and the royal family will not reject Earl Hall. And this kind of behavior is really vulnerable to retaliation. If the author's method of writing the protagonist was inspired by Audrey, it would not be easy to apply. First, Audrey attacked her own family. Second, it was no longer weak at that time. Third, the situation was special at that time. But in short, let's just wait and see for now. There's nothing particularly bad about it. Let's wait until it's on the shelves first.

Sequence Nine Ordinary People After taking the potion, the trajectory of my destiny will undergo subtle changes. Without the influence of a high level (at least Sequence Four), I will coincidentally miss all extraordinary connections. Unless I or the other party intentionally contact each other, it is possible to achieve a reasonable and clear plan and strict execution; Without my awareness, the extraordinary influence or extraordinary items received will be random. Invalid, the greater the personality difference, the smaller the probability; People with disabilities or mental problems will return to normal physical and mental conditions after taking it, and the same is true in life. No matter how poor, rich or powerful they are, they will be regarded as "ordinary people" generally considered by society; I can consciously lower my sense of existence and blend in with the ordinary people more easily. Sequence 8 Dreamer The spirituality of dreamers has been unprecedentedly improved, and they are extremely resistant to abnormal dreaming, channeling, hypnosis, suggestion, etc.; For dreamers, physical hibernation can be regarded as rest, and the spirit can choose to stay awake or rest in the dream. The spirituality required to stay awake is far less than the recovery speed of physical hibernation. However, after the spiritual energy is exhausted, it still needs to be recovered through mental hibernation; The dreamer can reappear a certain scene in the dream (the generation of the scene involves the spiritual world, so the scene is real and objective, equivalent to some form of memory divination), and deduce the cause of the event or predict the possible future development through the control of the dream. Sequence Seven Martial Artist Martial artist's physical fitness will be improved. Martial arts-related learning abilities such as fighting, bodywork, or human joints will also be significantly improved. The methods of using weapons are all martial arts, and any "weapon" that has not been used before. Not only refers to conventional hot and cold weapons, but any object that can be used for attack is a weapon, including fists, feet and other body parts. Martial artists can deconstruct and master its usage, and use it in conjunction with sequence eight abilities to maximize its application in current battles.

After reading Chapter 15, I can only say that they are all inferior works in the fandom. The only outstanding one may be the engagement at the beginning? But the author doesn't know how to describe women, let alone emotions. It's rare to see a mysterious fan write something so white.

Marry Miss Justice first and then fall in love. I just love to see this mouth! 😍

Secret: Cuckolding Audrey at the beginning

Why did I propose to Audrey at the beginning but the love line was all for Forsi

Why didn't you Sinclair show up? His family was killed by a mysterious cyborg woman on Christmas Day and then developed ptsd ()

I understand. The essence of the protagonist should be called Providence. As the master of dreams, it is not surprising that he can affect reality as long as he draws conclusions in his sleep 🤓

Were all the people who attended the salon silenced? When will the news that the protagonist is officially announced as Forsi's lover reach the ears of his fiancée Audrey?

🤔The logic of this book is so weird and mysterious. Others need to avoid losing control because they are all original creations that carry the will of the Creator. However, the protagonist's source of essence is self-contained and has nothing to do with the original Creator. It is impossible to bring the original will. There is no need to worry about any loss of control problems and the throttle can be welded to death. Why should we go through the audience path to encounter the sequence where the original work has the big pit of the original will?

It's very embarrassing to write about martial artists later on. I really can't stand it anymore. It's so embarrassing.

Seriously, author, why don't you change your first chapter? If the protagonist is not high-status, he can do whatever he wants. He was only at Sequence Nine at the time. Is he really not afraid of the sun when he danced like this? There were also workers who blocked the door of Hall's house because there were too many people and the police watched them block the door? Can they enter the rich area? What does this policeman do for a living?

Sequence 9: Scoundrel: good at free prostitution and taking by force. Amplify inner desires and strengthen body values. Sequence 8: The skillful hand is empty, picking up objects without leaving a trace, and fishing for the moon in the water. The skills of white prostitutes are amazing. The ritual does not pay any price, and you can get an item worth more than yourself. Sequence 7: A strong man is a hero, a hero on the road, and he can draw materials in person. No one is unconvinced by the technology of robbery. The ritual performs a perfect heist. Sequence six, lay people who spread wealth, people have the heart to be kind to wealth, and there are poor people in the world, we do things that are good and charitable, robbing the rich and giving to the poor. Transform into a humanoid cornucopia. The ceremony creates a pure land where no one is unhappy and no one is unhappy. Sequence five, the golden boy of Changle, brings blessings and good news, and averages luck. Sequence four, the gentleman who chooses the Tao, Sequence three, the devil who cultivates the Tao, Sequence two, the great lord of the country, Sequence one, Yuan (the destined person).

After reading the comments, I didn't want to read it. Is it that bad? 🙂🙂🙂

There are too many logic problems in the opening. Why did you provoke Forsi inexplicably after the proposal? These two people would not have died without the protagonist. I don't understand why I keep playing dungeons. Isn't it possible to open a separate line for the protagonist? Why solve the smog, in order to digest the magic potion, I think your sequence does not need to solve this incident, there is no purpose or motive

Are you serious about the protagonist's attitude towards Audrey in Chapter 104?

It's a bit uncomfortable not to change the beginning. I didn't make it to the third chapter. Wouldn't you read the beginning a few times yourself?

It looks good, support it

The heroine plus an original witch "Chick"

In addition to the official starting point, this is my 4th post. I want to be a real veteran and follow the author. Liu Ming is not a good friend.

Just like the title, I feel like there are no ups and downs

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The author also knows that the logic at the beginning is wrong, but it is not easy to change. So let's put a small patch on the back, it's better than nothing! It will probably be included in the update on July 31st! The above author kowtows to apologize○|￣|_

Twist it 😍

Sequence? : Wallfacer sequence? : Sword Holder

This is what I wrote at the beginning. . . . . . . .

The author should not stop updating Blade warning🔪