Mystery: the Witch of Desire

The plot is a bit interesting, but the wording doesn't match the atmosphere of the mysterious world at all, and it can easily come off as a drama. In many places, when I read it, I felt that this was not about a mystery fan, but an urban cultivator.

This book looks very good so far, and my recommendation vote is 🎁🎁🎁. The main character, Livielle, is a witch and has a cassava gift, which is quite interesting. Come on author 👏

Are you a witch, just write, take a lot of things for granted

I already wrote about witches, why should I keep writing about them? Male and female beasts were all seduced and squeezed by me🥵

There are really very few fans of "The Starting Point Is Not Married", and even fewer can finish it. I don't know how far this book will go.

After reading this opening, I remembered that Li Jiayu also sacrificed her eldest brother at the beginning and wandered around the world with her sister-in-law. Then I thought about the protagonist turning into a witch later 😏. It is really hard not to think of Li Jiayu, the first goddess under the starry sky.

I don't know that there is no difference between the plot and the indigenous people.

To be honest, it is unlikely that a witch in the mysterious world has not played with many men. The higher the witch path, the more demanding love is. After all, witches die from love. It is difficult for a witch who has not experienced falling in love with a man to become a high path.

The protagonist is the kind of person who has to do bad things to get promoted. The author is also very perverted and makes the protagonist exposed. Originally, he came in to see how the protagonist does bad things and has fun. But it turns out that the protagonist is a kingly protagonist who cares about the working people and does not want to see the suffering of the bottom. He would rather sacrifice himself to save the common people? (Referring to the scene where he still managed to save ordinary people despite being in danger, and finally went to the Church of the Night to report. I don't like to watch this kind of passionate plot. Maybe I didn't read it very carefully. Maybe the author gave the reason to help them and to help the protagonist himself, but you designed this kind of plot. I am biased) I think the mystery circle has formed an obsession with the original author not to reform the system, so that fan authors always spend time investing in this aspect, instead of concentrating on writing an adventure story with a Western fantasy background. Finally, I would like to mention that the original author did not write about this. I personally think that if he wanted to write about it, he would not be able to mention it in one stroke. However, if he writes deeply, he may not understand it. Secondly, it is easy to get involved in politics. People who are successful and famous cannot be involved in this.

Are you a witch? Just write, take it for granted!

The same reason why marriage is destined to be debilitating. The first point of view of changing into a female is the heroine. Falling in love with a man is completely female, and there is no sense of substitution and it is a big taboo. In addition, there are a bunch of pretentious gays who want the book to die. It is not that kind of ending. But fortunately, there is a universal witch with a purely female worldview, so I basically don't bother to pretend to be with these things. If you want to die, you can die on your own.

Men don't show their faces, and they are watched by many people. Is the starting point so abstract now?

The protagonist can turn into a witch and feed Klein once, then turn back into a hunter and feed Klein again.

How can I say this description? It feels strange now that I see it. You have to say that the protagonist's purpose is to save people, and her psychological activities are also written in this way, but without the restrictions of the contract, she did not choose to report it, but continued to investigate alone. You want to say that she wants to become stronger, but in the psychological activities you wrote, there is no sign that the protagonist is eager to become stronger, nor does she have any future plans for herself. Basically, every time she becomes stronger, it is a combination of a combination of circumstances and the arrival of the deus ex machina. The risks taken by the protagonist's current behavioral choices are completely unable to match her motivation to save people. She has created a magical character who talks about the world, behaves like a brainless and reckless man, and turns out to be a magical character who relies entirely on luck.

I discovered a problem, and it should be said that many fans have similar problems. The author probably wanted the protagonist to join the Tarot Club in order to develop the plot by tying into the main line of the original novel. The problem is that the protagonist is usually far stronger than this kindergarten. This party can only help the protagonist with a little information at most, but the protagonist often has to wipe their butts for them regardless of their own interests, act as a nanny, and give away a lot of information for free. This book is okay. Klein gave the protagonist a crawling hunger, which at least made me feel that the protagonist is not a fool who keeps working for nothing. I feel that since as a fan, there is a new protagonist, the story should be told with the protagonist as the core, instead of wiping people's butts for free all day long. I hope this book will get better and better 🙂

When I came out of the mirror, I felt like I had changed into a book.

The subject matter is quite interesting, and the author's skills are pretty good, but so far the protagonist has been completely pushed around, and the sense of confusion is very strong.

Judging from the latest chapter, the author writes about transformation very well. Have you been to Thailand? With such a strong technique, starting from the first chapter to write transformation, the score of this book can be doubled several times.

Let me talk about my current thoughts. So far, the protagonist seems very strange and inconsistent to me. The content around Chapter 123 makes the reader completely unable to understand the protagonist's mysterious operation. For example: If you have no clear interest relationship with yourself, and you continue to stay in the theater after discovering that there is a problem in the theater (most likely involving the evil god), you will be charged. If it were not for the special character of the protagonist, he would have been turned into a puppet long ago. And it was clearly overheard earlier that the protagonist was the last sacrifice. And now that he knows there is a conspiracy against him, it is very strange that he still goes to work as usual. The protagonist's behavior is completely unreasonable. As a reader, I don't understand why we have to stay in the theater, especially since the protagonist's last incident was when he overturned his car in the theater. There is a better way: 1. Just run away. Anyway, the identity is fake. If you know there is a problem, why not run away when you are not strong? 2. Strike first is the strongest. As a dual-path transcendent, one of them is a witch with a high combat power in the early stage. Why don't you wait for the opponent to be alone and strike first? If the opponent does not have the demon path, he can prepare through divination. 3. Report directly. Although Chik modified the protagonist's memory and made the protagonist hate the church, this does not affect the protagonist's ability to report at all. To put it another way, it can be regarded as dog eating dog. As a result, our protagonist chose the one with the most barrages: no matter he acted as if nothing happened and was directly controlled by the opponent's first move. Although he killed one later due to his own special skills, why not take action earlier? And the protagonist's behavior is also very contradictory Let's say the protagonist is a selfish person. He has clearly done a lot of good things before. And when they discover a cult, they go back to cause trouble. Let's just say the protagonist is a good person. The cult here is causing trouble and killing people, but the protagonist doesn't report it. But the problem is that this incident has no interest in the protagonist. He can completely ignore it, but the protagonist insists on getting involved, which shows that the protagonist is essentially a good person. But when he discovered that the other party had infiltrated the police station, he did not go to the church to warn him.

The writing style is very weird, let alone description and so on. It always uses words like "knowledge sea", which is really dramatic, like reading a novel about cultivating immortals. The plot is my own innovation, but the writing style is also like an ancient novel about cultivating immortals, and the whole brother's fiancée follows it. Summarizes the ancient and mysterious articles about the widowed sister-in-law cultivating immortality.

She probably won't change her marriage, it's a bit disgusting

What is the character of the protagonist in the back? I don't dislike kindness or being a bit holy, but at least if you are poor, you can be alone, and if you are rich, you can help the world. At least take care of yourself first, and then do it when you have the energy and ability, instead of just rushing in and exploding without caring about anything.

Anyone who has seen it can tell me? Getting popular again? If it's too popular, I won't watch it.

I really want to endure it, but there are too many flaws in the logic.

Mysterious, the good witch is very popular, I suggest you imitate him

I read earlier that a book friend said it involves revolution. Is that true? Is it serious?

I happen to still have a few monthly passes, please support

I finally enjoyed it 🙂 and couldn't resist anyway.

Be more refined and add some contribution

How come this instigation is enhanced like hypnosis, and why are there so many people of the outer god path during this period?