A Mysterious Journey Starting with Harry Potter

What I don't like the most is giving power from this world to people from other worlds. It's very abrupt.

I think it's better not to add a queen in the end and just have a single heroine. Besides, you're not afraid that the emperor will come alive and give you a big mouth. Is it realistic for the emperor to turn into a father-in-law? The emperor treats you as a fellow countryman, but you date his daughter? So shameless

If you encounter someone you can't defeat, just use the mind-centered transformation spell. Your believing heart is your magic 🙂

Nowadays, there are so many people who like solipsism, don't they just like to be unique? The unique magic system of the protagonist is originally a good idea in the mystery, but now I have to have a Miss Justice, what else is there, not only the uniqueness is greatly reduced, bad review

What I've been writing recently is incomprehensible. Why do things always go wrong? Whatever the protagonist does, something goes wrong, and he can't fucking solve it. It's even harder than Klein. Did you want to bring everything together in the first place? ? Whatever you do, someone is targeting you?

When will Audrey learn about the classics and Chinese in the world of Harry Potter and let Huang Tao and Ke Miao Society die?

It's a pity to start high and go low. Let me tell you my thoughts 1. The protagonist should be more cautious. The mysterious field is still so frivolous and easy to die, such as Audrey at the beginning, but this arrangement is not wrong, because it has not been long since the protagonist entered the mystery, but judging from what others say, you will still The secret system has been introduced into the world of Harry Potter, then you really don't want to die fast enough 2. Klein's psychological growth is all in Tingen, so well-written fans will not interfere or just watch. The best strategy for the protagonist is to accumulate strength and wait for Klein to come. Why? Because most authors simply don't have the writing power and imagination to write the line so early 3. In fact, the author wrote a double protagonist with double penetration, which is completely difficult for novice writers to handle, and even veterans find it difficult The author's main problem is that the outline is wrong. In fact, what he wrote is okay, but the direction is wrong

What kind of gift-giving boy, you don't have money to give Sequence 2 information to others for free, and you even pay for it yourself, why don't you give the heroine to others as well. . .

The power of mystery is not to kill Harry Potter. Sequence 4 directly kills Harry Potter.

It feels a little twisted. There are no big bad points, but the protagonist always gave me the feeling of rushing a duck to the shelves. When traveling between two worlds, things I did were not fully planned, and I felt like I was in a hurry.

Any novel will be useless as soon as there is a plot of going back to the past. If time can be reversed, then everything you write about what happened will be meaningless, so I have stopped following it recently. This book has been scrapped and has become a joke. It is a pity.

Chapter 1: Where to Clear Dangerous Memories? When you know that you have dangerous memories, you must have remembered which memories they are, but by the time you remember them, it is already too late, and when you delete them, you still have to identify which ones remain and which ones are deleted. Doesn't this take time? You just stand in someone else's house and do it directly? It is better to say what characteristics prevent your knowledge from causing danger or temporarily not causing danger. This is more reasonable and can smoother the subsequent participation in the plot.

I don't understand, why can't Harry Potter's magic defeat Mystery? The wizard's magic is idealistic. As long as you think you can defeat it, it will become extremely powerful. If you don't want the mysterious power, you can only get it by drinking medicine.

If you don't have the writing skills to do this kind of double-crossing thing, don't touch it, otherwise the logic will not be rounded. Besides, who would give good things to others if they are not relatives? It seems that the protagonist is very generous. At best, it is called light luxury, but at worst, it is called poor and fastidious, or to pretend to be fat. At best, this is a resource in the world that cannot be developed by one person. At worst, it is called an ordinary man who is not guilty of harboring a treasure. As long as there is a big I know you have a world, so it must be "Ah, the world key with a humanoid shell appears today" and "Those who are destined to have treasures from heaven and earth live here". If nothing else, how dare the author write about a double-travel like mystery? Isn't he afraid of causing trouble in the other world? (This is not a plot problem, this is a logic problem)

Obviously, this is a common problem among fandom authors. They rely on other people's works to make ends meet. Even if the performance of the book is not bad, they always feel that they have shrunk their talents. They are not willing to follow the world in an honest way and want to play something new, but they overestimate their own level. Usually, it is okay to extend under the structure of others. However, by doing it yourself, you have exposed your true level. Going back to the past is really a failure among failures.

What do you think of an alien god? Even the protagonist of the original work was killed in the first volume, and you still traveled between two worlds!

All I can say is that with such a good subject, there is a reason why you don't live 🙂

Although I can't write a book, but taking a hundred steps back, author, can't you update a hundred chapters at a time? Maybe people will say this is unreasonable, but I also said that I can't write a book.

I felt that the rhythm was okay in the early stages, but once I traveled back to the past line, the rhythm was messed up. First, the HP line disappears, and in the end, it ends directly. Second, I feel that the mysterious main plot is also very rushed, and the female protagonist's presence is really low.

The hp has been greatly weakened, and it can basically be said that there is nothing to do without hp And a little licking of Miss Justice, and a daily heartache for the girl And in Chapter 28, the crow eats the magic wand and fucks with me, and I am speechless. The most annoying thing is the ungrateful pet.

The more I look at it, the more boring it becomes. Sequence 7 always participates in battles between demigods and even angels. You can either level up properly, but you have to participate in this and that. Participate in as many things as you have the ability to do. Drive high and go low. Drive high and go low. I have subscribed to more than 300 chapters. When I see less than 200, I can't stand it anymore.

Harry Potter has become a gimmick. We should write more about Harry Potter and use both sides to develop. It turns out that it is full of mysteries. There are still many good things in Harry Potter. The most difficult thing is that the magic of Harry Potter is weakened. I am really speechless. Can't it be directly compatible? Is it because I am afraid of being too open? There are also time converters and the like, which are directly fault-tolerant.

I feel that the biggest problem with this book is that it suddenly bursts into wits when it should be serious and bursts out with a few very fragmented words. But overall it is good, and the ending is a bit rushed. I hope the author will work harder in the future 🙂🙂🙂

This idea is quite good, especially the interaction with Audrey at the beginning, which is very interesting to watch, but there are still flaws in the interpenetration of the two worlds. It was okay at the beginning, but as you watch later, it feels more and more lost. The fun at the beginning, but overall it is still very good 🤭

I have only seen more than 90 pieces, and I feel that I can't accept the double connection between Harry Potter and Mystery, but it doesn't matter. I skipped Harry and only watched the Mystery content, and I can still watch it. Suggestion: I hope that in the next book, I will directly travel through the Kamen Rider "Holy Blade", become the Holy Blade, and seize the Holy Blade King Sword, the Book of Fantasy and Omnipotence, and the Magic Book, and synthesize the complete "Omniscient and Omnipotent". Travel back to the "God of Death" again, absorb the remains of Bengyu, Yhwach Bach and the Soul King, seize another omniscient and omnipotent power, and use the two omniscient and omnipotent authorities to create a new world. Travel through the world of "God of Death" again, use the Masked Storybook to seize all the power of Naiya, Yog-Sothoth and Shub-Nicholas, and unite with Lin Qiye to seize the highest position of the A-General. In this way, he has the authority of omniscience and omnipotence, as well as the status of the original Creator. (Just explain it in the above paragraphs at the beginning, and start writing "Lord of Mysteries" directly. It is best not to let other systems interfere, and only the protagonist can travel through it. ) The beginning travels to the world of "Lord of Mysteries". At the end of the First Era, the Heavenly God fell, and he fell into the deepest part of the "Sea of Chaos". Then he fell into a deep sleep, began to erode God's authority and origin, and began to erase God's imprint. But he woke up in the second era, soaked for an era, and finally captured a part of the power of the Chaos Sea, and could use all the power of the "Sequence 9-2" of the five families at will. (Sequence One is not possible, Sequence One and Uniqueness have begun to involve the authority of the true god level) (Note that the power is digested, not accommodated, even the imprint of the original Creator has been obliterated, this part The Sea of Chaos completely belongs to me, because Mr. A is also the highest K-type person) Because the protagonist was Kamen Rider Holy Blade in the beginning, so writing stories and weaving the future is his job, but after traveling through several worlds, he has completely digested his power and can transform directly without using transformation props, and he can make part of his power into a "storybook" and use it as a magical object (PS: Only people certified by the protagonist can use the power of the book. Anyone who tries to take it will be contaminated. Even if it is taken away, the protagonist can take back the book with just a thought) I have devoured many gods in the God-Slaying World, and also made friends with many gods of my own camp, and gained part of the power, even if it is made into a book prop. , There is still a sequence zero level person, but how much it can be used depends on the user's own strength. After all, Kamen Rider is an idealist. The book can be named "The One Who Returns All Things", as well as the book "Fu Xing's Chaos", the "Black Goat of the Forest" book, and the "Nyx Night" book, which can help people with corresponding authority to possess the status of the true god in advance, and can use the objects in the book. With his own omniscient and omnipotent power, he separated into a clone (this clone refers to a puppet created by dividing a part of his soul, which will be fused and returned in the end, not a poison point), walked on the path of the "White Tower", secretly found Lilith and Amanysis, and helped them when they were weak, and gave Lilith the book "The Black Goat of the Forest", "Night of Nyx" Finally, at the end of the third era, after the death of the ancient sun god, he killed Herabergen and became the Sequence Zero "White Tower" and began to develop (why Grisha never discovered the protagonist, because the true god level perception was not in place and he was the protagonist of the "primary creator". When Grisha became the quasi-old day, God directly resurrected, and there was no time to explore the sea of chaos. Grisha. It has never really contained the Sea of Chaos. He relied on the first blasphemous slate to use the power of the Sea of Chaos. The Sea of Chaos has always been underground, otherwise the quasi-old days that housed part of the source matter would not be able to be killed by a few angel kings even if the water was released. Even if it was really killed, the source matter would spurt out at the moment of death, and the participants present would definitely be contaminated, especially the angels of the five families) In the fifth era, 50% of the power of the Sea of Chaos has finally been eroded. The reason why it has not been completely eroded is because although the power and personality of Bubble, Naia, and Azathoth have been taken away in the world of "God Slayer", the restraint of God Slayer is weakened, otherwise it cannot be swallowed and absorbed. Therefore, in order to completely erode the "Sea of Chaos", one must become the new pillar "God" and "the Omniscient Almighty" Absorption. After completing the characteristics of the five paths, five can reach 99%, and become the pillars of the past after qualitative transformation. The last one percent must completely erase the spiritual imprint of the "Original God" in the "Sea of Chaos", as well as the imprint of the original Creator. (In the future, the process of absorbing other sources will be exactly the same.) Because the protagonist initially traveled to the world of Kamen Rider's "Holy Blade", the five paths are the best. The "Imaginary" is the cornerstone, representing omnipotence, and the avatar "White Tower" is the supplement, representing omniscience. Because he has the authority of the Chaos Sea, once he becomes a god, he can directly possess half of the strength of the "Omniscient and Almighty". With the help of the first blasphemy tablet, Adam used the "Imaginary" to dream up half of the star realm, and used the uniqueness of the dream to forcibly supplement his own deficiencies, but he had to use this method. The law relies more on the blasphemous slate in Adam's hand and forcibly calling on the power of the Sea of Chaos to complete the imaginary uniqueness. Otherwise, what is false will only be false after all, a shell without foundation, and will ultimately be the moon in the mirror. However, the more you forcefully call on the Sea of Chaos, the more you will be eroded by the "Original God". When you finally accommodate the "Sea of Chaos", you will fall into a disadvantage. This is using more than your own strength. The price paid. (But because our protagonist has digested 50% of the Sea of Chaos, and half of the Sefirot is also the Sefirot. This is the Sea of Chaos that completely belongs to the protagonist, so the strength at this time is not the dual gods, not the Quasi-Old One, but the real Old One at the quasi-pillar level. Otherwise, only the uniqueness and one sequence that accommodates all five paths can we reach the old days. This is the combat power of the protagonist when he has two gods, and the most essential difference between the two gods of Yazao. Yazao can only claim to be "half the Lord of the Star Boundary" at most, but the protagonist occupies the "White Tower" and "Dreamer", as well as half of the Chaos Sea, and has his own power from outside the world, so he can directly call himself "the Omniscient and Almighty" . ) The end of the Fifth Era is approaching. As someone who has read the original work, I definitely support Klein to become the Lord of Mysteries. However, for Xiao Ke, this burden is too heavy to impose on him, so he is only allowed to hold the Source Castle temporarily, because he himself is a symbol of destiny. You can participate in the Tarot Club, choose "Pope" as the code name, and you can directly show off the Tyrant Tarot cards of all five families. Anyway, I am powerful, I am the biggest, directly explain to Xiaoke the Origin Castle and the fellow traveler, but do not tell Xiao Ke that the First Era is the old civilization, and wait until he is in the fourth sequence to fully show off, and tell him to improve the sequence and become the true owner of the Origin Castle as soon as possible. , The book "The Unity of All Things" was traded to Klein to help him better control the Source Castle, and to prevent the Heavenly Lord from completely assimilating Klein in the future. I must seize the pen of 0-008 Alsuhod, after all, I want to become a god as a writer. Sequence 1: 008 Alsuhod's pen Sequence 2: Characteristics of Ancient Dragon Arihog Sequence 3: King of the Black Seat. Burrows Hopkins Sequence Four: Psychological Alchemy Session Hvin Rambis Sequences five to nine: Find it yourself (PS: Try not to use the channels of the Church of Knowledge, because you need to separate the "God of Knowledge" from the identity of the protagonist for future preparations, otherwise start with 100 cards, 9-2 directly let the clone prepare the characteristics, Sequence 2 in one day, then write a Hammer novel) Because the protagonist has seized the identity of Azathoth, he can To accommodate all the source matter, but at least leave a "Mother's Nest" for Lilith and a "River of Eternal Darkness" for Amanysis. Klein can choose not to keep it, but give it to him if he wants. Anyway, the "Sun" points to the "Primary Creator", the "White Tower" points to the "Wildness of Knowledge", the "Tyrant" points to the "City of Disaster", and the "Hanged Man" points to the "River of Eternal Darkness" (Spirit). Soul sinking), "Imaginary" points to the "Shadow World" (the soul is filthy), "God" points to the "Kingdom of Disorder", Yog-Sothoth's authority points to the "Key of Light", Naia points to the "Origin Castle", and Shabu Nicholas points to the "Filthy Brood" Outer Gods: The Ring of Fate and Destiny Weaver supplement the "Key of Light" The Uncertain Mist supplements the "Kingdom of Disorder" Fallen Mother Goddess added "Filthy Brood" Desire Mother Tree added "Shadow World" Superstar Lord added "Sun", "Judge" Decadent King added "Twilight Giant", "Tyrant" High-dimensional Overlooker added "White Tower", "Wildness of Knowledge", Yog-Sothoth's "Omniscient and All-Seeing" authority ps Notes: The book props that are part of the power cannot be snatched, and the snatchers are forced to be polluted and turned into the power of the book. Try to cut off contact with the Church of Knowledge. Otherwise, with the accumulation of the first three eras and part of the authority of the Chaos Sea, 9-2 can still be collected in one way. I am the master of the storybook, the omniscient and omnipotent one in the book. All powers other than one's own can be forcibly used to transform into books for external combat. They are equivalent to extraordinary items, but have no side effects. The disadvantage is that the lower limit is extremely low, and how much it can be used depends entirely on the user's own strength and character, as well as the extraordinary characteristics of the book. But the advantage is safety. Only people with the permission of the protagonist can use the books, and they can be recycled at any time. Some are omniscient. (Whether it is Yhwach, the Spirit King or Yog-Sothoth, they all rely on observing the past and future and traveling through time and space to achieve omniscience and omnipotence. The Lord of Mysteries also relies on the authority of the King of Time and Space to achieve an alternative kind of omniscience. God relies on the omniscience of analysis and observation from the "White Tower", but they are all omniscient before they can be omnipotent. This is the same, so he is designed to be omniscient. The advantage of "Homesick" as the main one, "White Tower" as the auxiliary, and "The Hanged Man" as the auxiliary is that you don't need to accommodate the rest of the uniques. You can use the corresponding authority by grazing directly, reducing your own burden and achieving the effect of multiple god positions in advance. Otherwise, the uniqueness that cannot be accommodated will do more harm than good, and may even lead to a decline in one's own status. Honorable Name Design: The eternal true spirit that transcends the world (The protagonist who travels through countless worlds has a clear direction) The incarnation of destiny in endless time and space (The authority of Yog-Sothoth, the past, present and future are unified, and the destiny belongs only to himself) The omniscient and omnipotent supreme master (The cornerstone of the protagonist's authority, a collective term for omniscience and omnipotence) In the end, the dog head saved his life, and the more he wrote, the more he got up. I felt uncomfortable if he didn't finish the book, but after finishing it, I found that if such a small mystery novel, Being able to write 300 pictures before finishing is a god among gods, because the cheats at the beginning are too big, but it is impossible not to write like this. It only travels through "Holy Blade" and "Reaper", and it is not very useful for traveling through "Lord of Mysteries". In the end, it is the same as the original Xiao Ke , was assimilated by God, and was even killed by Adam and the True Creator halfway through. After traveling through "Slaying Gods", it was too boring and easy to write, but the readers enjoyed it. Anyway, traveling through the first few worlds, just briefly mention it at the beginning, the key point I started writing "Lord of Mysteries" after waking up from the fifth era. ps: I can really write a few female protagonists without too many boring details. I just need to explain them. For example, Lilith and Amanysis, just write that both sides are sure. It's enough to recognize the relationship. It doesn't need to be written into a romantic drama, and it won't look like a eunuch. I can choose an ordinary heroine, Bernadette, who is mature and holds a magic lamp for making wishes. It will be related to the "State of Disorder" later Finally , just write a few comments, after all, it is difficult to survive 300 chapters according to this writing, (dog head to save life 🥺) Author, what do you think of my idea 😢

Those attracted by the title of the book want to read Harry Potter + Mysteries. There is no Harry Potter content at all. In other words, you directly cut off half of your content and expectations. At the beginning of the game, Justice traveled with him, so everyone who stayed would be able to accept this. At this time, you can bring the professors in Harry Potter to the mysterious world and become your helpers. This is actually a good expectation. You can even form a faction in the mysterious world, called Hogwarts. Providing advanced information in Tarot sessions is a cool point, and the mysterious power is a cool point at Hogwarts, and vice versa. The first important point is not there at all, and the last two are too few.

Very good, among the mysterious fanfics, except for Paradox, this is it, and I can't read any others.

I think it's a poisonous point to take Audrey with you to the Harry Potter world. Besides, you've only known each other for a few days. You reveal everything to her. After all, you're already close and we're still close to each other.

It was only at the end that I discovered that this was the author's first book, and the previous evaluations were relatively harsh. Although this book has a lot of poisonous points, the rhythm is often chaotic, and it either has too much foreshadowing or is too impatient, it still tells an interesting and complete story. I hope the author can sort out his thoughts and experiences in this book later. If possible, you can take a look at some of the writing techniques mentioned in the first part of Squid. While ensuring that the story is interesting, stay enthusiastic. If you can make more improvements, I believe there will be better content.

From the protagonist's rapid sequence 1 and then sequence 0, it can be seen that the author wanted to end it quickly, but in the end it was a bit rough. Let me talk about a few points that make me feel uncomfortable: 1. The period when the protagonist disappears after traveling through time. It feels strange to be without the protagonist for a long time, and it has the smell of a loose and watery novel; 2. In the later period, Lilith accounts for too much, even more than the nominal heroine Audrey. Although my personal reading preference is to have as many female protagonists as possible, this seems to be a reversal of priorities. I don't know what the style of the author's next book will be, but let's look forward to it.