Corridor of Malice

Everyone is talking about the advantages, but I am talking about a disadvantage, the combat bug. There are two systems of combat power in the book. One is that after learning the evil book, you can use part of the weird power or simply transform it into weirdness. The second is to add points to the dungeon, and the props will be exploded after clearing the level, but adding points to the dungeon will weaken the reality. Then it makes sense for players to fight bosses in dungeons. The copy is the reality that happened. The reality is that Weird Brother killed the copy. According to this, the reality should be dominated by Weird Brother. Dungeon players should be careful to survive, hide their identities, and work hard to gain points. But the result is that Weird Brother has not appeared at all in reality and has no influence at all. In the first volume, Wei Wei wants to become an immortal. Volume 2, light love. Volume 3, building a primary school. Volume 4, Volume Work. The Shi brothers (brother) in the third volume also complained about what they could not do with this power, and in the end (brother) used him to build a primary school. The most important point is that you can learn evil books by yourself. The two Shi brothers, who have never been exposed to metaphysics, can curse others to death with half a book they happened to get. In the fourth volume, the origin of my brother's magic is also unknown. This shows that the threshold for learning evil books is low and it is easy to spread. As long as there is luck, even a poor person can become a master. But there is no ecological niche for such a master in the entire real world. All the masters with strange powers have never appeared now. Even though the world is full of weirdness, in the main line of reality, there are only two family struggles involving dungeons (one can change luck, but not much. The other can change the purple devil pupil). The expressiveness and mental pollution are full, and the weirdness like Cthulhu is completely incomparable.

The author's writing style is good, and I don't have to complain about this, but I feel that I chose the wrong subject. It would be better to invest in Infinite Streaming. What I am looking for in horror is basically a battle of wits. This is the opposite, and it is directly equivalent to screening out some people. Then there is the personal poisoning point that I feel. The real trainee lawyer was too deliberate, and it was not handled well. In the current environment, I am trying to persuade him to quit.

As a long-time reader of Cangjie, I was quite pleasantly surprised by this new book. I feel that the author has broken through many of his past weaknesses in writing. The two current dungeons are quite exciting. Every character who appears has flesh and blood. Not to mention the protagonists, even the NPCs who have few roles have their own personalities. In the dungeons with different eras and backgrounds, the characters' language styles can also change accordingly. The weird design is also quite interesting, unconventional, and it feels like watching a bird. . . The writing skills may not be up to par, but the plot design is not so unrestrained and can be recovered, which I think is very important. Obviously, the author's writing skills have improved a lot compared to before. The most terrifying thing is that with such quality, he still writes 8,000 words a day! So scary, so scary! I don't want to say more, it's a minimum to order all of them. I wish Cangjie a great book and become a god!

The main plot of this book is just okay, but there are a lot of little bits and pieces. When I saw Wildfire, I decided to run away, but I couldn't bear it anymore. The villain was trying to trick the protagonist, and the protagonist team was having an intra-team competition there because they were afraid of delaying the villain's plan. There is also a meaningless table of contents for the first half of the chapter. The protagonist group is spinning and jumping under the newly collapsed ruins and fighting in groups, and the description is copied word for word from the previous article. I really don't understand how this quality can be ranked so high on the completion list.

The writing and stories of Xiancao are excellent. It's amazing that no one has read a book like this. However, after seeing the copy of Resentful Immortal, there are still many problems. This dungeon is much larger than the previous dungeon, and the background has been upgraded from low-level martial arts and weirdness to high-level martial arts and immortality. It is also mixed with a lot of illusions, illusions, etc., And the look and feel is very fragmented. To put it bluntly, the author wanted to write the dungeon to include a lot of literary drama and witty content. As a result, the dungeon had a large space and was short of time. Even if everyone arrived in a new place, there was no chance to explore the background. They just repeated the hallucinations and finally relied on murderous intent to fuck hard. I think it would be much better if I could split this copy into three paragraphs from the beginning. For example, at the end of the first paragraph, you can come out and type another copy or something.

In my previous life, I missed "The Shepherd" by Zhai Zhu, "The Weird Immortal" by Foxtail, and "Mysterious Revival" by laying flowers in front of the Buddha. In the end, I ended up delaying my graduation from college, my girlfriend cheated on me, and all kinds of bad luck happened one after another. In this life, I can never miss this book again.

Generally, the labels labeled "Decisive and Killing" are books for mentally retarded people. If this label is followed by an IQ online, then there won't be a single person with an IQ over 60 in the whole book.

I am engaged in IT operation and maintenance! Just those people who don't even know anything about monitors and consoles, you said they can control all kinds of electronic products after becoming weird! What the hell is calling, and the TV has funny faces and stuff like that! Why don't I feel scary? I couldn't even turn on the monitor when I was alive, but I can do all sorts of tricks on the TV after I die! I will be more resentful than them!

The story is wonderful and the character descriptions are excellent. It's a great adventure story. I just have a question, "The answer lies in the mystery" twice in a row. In fact, as long as the player kills the key script characters at the beginning, the script can be cleared. What about other scripts? Will this also be the case? 🙂 If a player really succeeds in passing the level like this, just speed pass without scoring, and when entering the game, "the ancestors are right (lit 🔪", pass in a row Seven times, can their wishes really come true👀 If it can really come true, then... Those players who engage in branch lines to brush up their ratings (@ protagonist gang), aren't they completely 🤣👉🤡

It's not okay for you to be so slow in updating. Why don't you spend the gift to marry a wife from Jiangxi and buy a house and take out a mortgage? You will be full of motivation to update.

I saw it here and there. The confrontation between the protagonist and the Lian family. It's really hard to imagine. High-level players who have conquered more than 10 dungeons in unlimited streams. In reality, you will be besieged by dozens of gangsters. And he had to take hostages to escape. Really, when you rush into the dungeon, your murderous aura becomes stronger and stronger. Why has reality become so complicated? I know that what the author originally wanted to design was the power in the copy, which cannot be used in reality, but Uncle Lei's original Three Emperors Sutra can be used in reality. Even if you get 1/10 of the power feedback in the dungeon, you won't be besieged by gangsters in reality. It's really frustrating to see this.

The dungeon and other things are quite well written, but the settlement is boring without adding abilities. Monsters have been defeated, and the dungeon has been passed, but the result is that you can't become stronger, so what's the point?

I have now read the fifth volume. The game copy and character descriptions are quite good, but the setting always feels weird. On the one hand, the game strictly prohibits players from revealing information in real life, and on the other hand, it has the setting of last words. In addition, the player's identity, appearance, and name are not blurred in the game. In the context of modern society, if there are players like Wang Hao's family background, they should be able to find the player's real-life identity through the characteristics of their appearance and name. It cannot be said that it is easy, but it can be done. So power in reality is also very important. There must be official power similar to national institutions. After all, the biggest thigh is still the country. I wonder if the author of the plot will explain it clearly later on.

It is unreasonable to be able to refresh the dungeon repeatedly. It is equivalent to cheating if you have other people's information for the first time. In addition, if you swipe and I swipe, who will decide the ending?

When Qianwu saw that Lei Xiao was gone, he deleted the book and left, which was no loss at all.

The protagonist is just a coward. An ordinary boss dares to target a single person like this who doesn't know if he has a family. Author, have you never seen the world? In reality, when such a person is exposed, he will directly kill his whole family. Isn't this boss afraid of death?

After seeing the end of the first plot and returning to reality, I couldn't help but comment. Infinite streaming should not be mixed with any copy of reality to change reality. It doesn't matter if it can change a parallel world, it has to be reality. The timeline thing is broken every time I write it. The simplest thing is that if a game can change reality, let alone the butterfly effect, if one day the protagonist's experience is changed in the past, will he still have the previous story?

It's inexplicable, and he has to be paired with an inexplicable woman at the beginning. In this type of novel, the first copy of the protagonist is more attractive to readers, and he is persuaded to quit in the first chapter.

Less player confrontation and more storytelling. Your story is really well written, but I feel tired every time I see player confrontation I wish the book will get better and better.

Isn't it a beautiful article? Someone tell me, a straight man like me is very afraid of that kind of thing. . .

After watching the copy of Resentful Immortal, the protagonist will not change history in the end. Nothing has ever happened. Everyone feels lonely after watching it. Author, please take a vaccination

It was fine in the early stages, but after more than a hundred chapters, it started to get more and more awkward and I couldn't stand it anymore.

Is there any kindhearted person who has watched it? Can you tell me if there is a CP or a love line?

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No cp, no emotional line, very good power in the middle and late stages 🙂

Three Golden Chapters, the writing is good, the plot is lagging, I don't know what will happen next

The character of the protagonist is also decisive in killing, and he kills gangsters without any hesitation at the beginning. How come it's as if nothing is wrong when faced with such unstable factors as Qi Xiao controlling everyone? Not to mention counterattack, there is no defense at all

The main line has almost collapsed. This kind of unlimited flow is really hard to accept. Partially subscribed. Jumping to watch

Refining

If you don't have enough writing skills, just write about a berserker with a big hook. It's not that much of a waste, just run him over and beat him to death.