The Master of Time in the Martial World

Three seconds of time stop to rule the world, infinite time stop for lewd purposes 😋

So far, it's a bit watery (rhetorical and filled with internal monologues and analysis), and it's not completely invincible; you still need to level up, fight monsters, and use strategy. In summary, it's a slow-burn, pseudo-invincible story that's not very satisfying.

The riddle teller, with over twenty riddles already, is still trying to be mysterious.

You're quoting scriptures and mentioning parallel universes, making it easy to cut and connect things.

Isn't this a fantasy drama? Why are they making up about people's hardships?

The story is so watery, so overly sentimental. The plot devices and the idea of ​​altering the past are interesting, but it's all so weak. Two characters can chat for two chapters straight, starting with classical Chinese, then translating it, then asking rhetorical questions, reciting poetry, the other person exclaiming "Wow, that's amazing!"

😅Don't write things like "sharp features" or "awkward"; describing the protagonist's demeanor is awkward. It's like bragging about your own good looks in front of others for no reason.

Oh, I remember this author, the one whose grandfather died and whose parents were seriously ill.

This looks familiar, like I've seen it somewhere before, but the setting is modern, and the first person they took in was a boss who had been in a car accident?

In the world of martial arts, chivalry is primarily an individual act. Creating a time-manipulation, behind-the-scenes story is something best suited for fantasy worlds; otherwise, it feels like using a space sledgehammer to crack a nut!