Remaking the World: Reshaping Mythology

The core of the story is good, but the protagonist is poorly developed, and the initial build-up is excessive. Dedicating over 20 chapters to depicting Wang Chongyang's resurrection at the beginning feels too drawn out. A more refined plot would enhance the reading experience; currently, it feels like a test for the reader.

They forcibly lowered Li Gefei's IQ; he couldn't even guess why he was being promoted. They even brought out tea that supposedly increases lifespan—the emperor must have found out and presented it to them. With that kind of intelligence, how did he manage to survive in officialdom for decades?

An auction that's turned out so sloppy, not getting to the point in three days—author, are you trying to drive the readers away?

If you manage to raise someone to death, you still have to offer incense, since the deceased was a big MMP (a derogatory term for a woman who is overly concerned with men).

First Lu Bu, second Zhao Yun, third Lin Chong, fourth Guan Yu, fifth Ma Chao, sixth Wu Song, Southern Emperor, Northern Beggar, Central Divine, Guo Jing, Huang Rong, Linghu Chong, Southern Murong, Northern Qiao Feng, none of them can beat Sun Wukong! I'd like to recommend a book; just click on my profile picture to see it.

Five Paths of Evolution I Recommend to the Author: A system of literary style, where words convey laws. The "Soldier God" system, where soldiers are created by scattering beans. Martial arts system, fist shatters the heavens Witchcraft system, Gu worm curse Warlock system, magic companions, wealth and land The above are just recommendations; readers with better suggestions are welcome to write them in this post.

I know this author; he likes to exaggerate his abilities but can't handle the scale.

Is the author serving the emperor?

Knowing it was an unofficial work, I still managed to finish it in two days!! Aren't I amazing? Praise me, praise me!

After reading dozens of chapters, to be honest, the protagonist could practically conquer the world, yet he always looks so awkward when facing his parents, mentors, and so on. If you're so powerful, can't you be a little more confident? Why don't you just tell him what you need to know? Instead, you act all coy and hesitant, making the protagonist, the mastermind behind everything, look like a child who's done something wrong. It's so uninteresting.