I’ve Already Founded a Country, and You Say I Transmigrated?

At first, the first few chapters seemed like a fresh and interesting theme, but the more I read, the more something felt off. Now, around chapter thirty, I'm starting to feel something's wrong. 1. The description of too many women (water) suggests an imbalance, making the author seem like they have a perverted mind. 2. The plot is already weak, and the story jumps so far between chapters.

First-rate concept, second-rate plot, third-rate writing.

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This is so awful it's disgusting. I'm deleting this book.

Write less about women and descriptions. You're a king now, you can have anything you want. Writing too much about them is boring. This world and mythology are waiting for you to conquer, that's what makes a man…

One hundred points? I'm not short of a dollar. I just want to praise this book; it has the potential to become a masterpiece, and the author has the makings of a great author. Because they write too much fluff, just like the top authors on Qidian.com.

To be honest, the premise of this novel is great. It's just that the author is incredibly lazy; the plot drags on endlessly, and there's practically no story progression. The protagonist, a king with superpowers and subordinates full of them, secretly infiltrates a group of ordinary people, afraid of being exposed—it's a truly suffocating situation.

The idea is great, but the writing is weak. The combat capabilities are inconsistent. One moment they're fighting the outside army from the island like it's nothing, the next a few mercenaries are running rampant inside, then missiles are like toys that can't break through the defenses, and then machine guns dare to rampage across the island.

Author, if you want to become popular, stop padding the story. It's only just been released, and you're already padding it out like this. With only a couple hundred characters, you've wasted so many chapters. The key is that all your soldiers have superpowers; they're not ordinary people. Do you really need to be so careful?

This is such a waste of my subscriptions! If I had written 70 chapters before the book went on sale, I could have finished it in 7 chapters with a more compelling plot! It's just endless rambling and padding. I thought things would get better after it went on sale, but it's the same old padding! Can't you write a novel without writing nonsense?