I’ve Already Founded a Country, and You Say I Transmigrated?

I originally thought that the subject matter was novel after reading the first few chapters, but the more I read, the more and more something is wrong. I have read more than 30 chapters and feel that these are not good 1. There are too many descriptions of women (water) and things will turn against each other. I feel that the author has a worm in his head 2. The plot of each chapter is originally watery and spans so much, I It is recommended to write one thing in 10 chapters, or describe the matter clearly in one chapter 3. A little bit of wisdom, the protagonist's national language is Chinese, and his race is yellow. When his scouts discovered that there were yellow victims and they could speak Chinese, they did not report it immediately. They just said that an unknown race appeared. Also, the mental state of these victims must not be that good. They were wearing modern clothes and had no armor or weapons. As a scout, couldn't you observe this? There is also Qingqiu Ziyue, who is so silly in portrayal, and the protagonist gives her such a high official position. If she really fights against an outside country and is killed in a matter of seconds, why not just treat her as a powerful soldier? Can't the commander be that birdman? At least she is smart 4. The plot description is poor. When the sea giants destroyed the expedition fleet, it was mentioned in a few words. Originally, this plot should be described a little bit, such as people's psychological reactions, the reaction of the expedition fleet, escape, or what to say. I think I can write two chapters here, just like describing a woman who keeps flirting with women. Not only this, there are many places that could be described to make the content richer, but these were not written out. I only saw which woman was doing what she was doing, what the protagonist said to the woman, and the protagonist's strategy and combat power were not really shown at all. Identified as a small poisonous weed

First-rate creativity, second-rate plot, third-rate writing

I give you one last chance, leave the big pen position, subscribe to a big subscription, continue to write and delete it directly, what do you think?

It's extremely watery and disgusting. Please delete the book and say goodbye.

Write less about women and descriptions. You have nothing to do when you become a king. It is boring to write too much. This world and myths are waiting for you to conquer. That is what a man is...

One hundred points, I am not short of this dollar. I just want to praise that this book has the qualities to become a god, and the author also has the appearance of a great god. Because he is so talented, just like the great author from Qidian.

To be honest, the setting of this novel is very good. It's just that the author is really too weak, the plot is super procrastinating, and the story has almost no advancement. As the super-powered king of a country, all his subordinates are super-powered people. As a result, he quietly sneaked into a group of mortals, fearing that his identity would be exposed. It was really a suffocating operation. Originally, the protagonist could make the remaining people listen to the protagonist's words by killing those Tianzhu people, but it ended up being a waste of more than ten chapters. In addition, a very speechless female character was arranged. She only appeared once or twice, but she appeared in every chapter, with a higher appearance rate than the protagonist. The key is that her inner activities are even more speechless =_=. The above are all personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like them.

The idea is great, the article is bad, but the combat power is not accurate. One moment, fighting the outside army on the island is like playing, another moment, several mercenaries can fly inside, one moment the missiles are like toys and cannot break through the defense, and the next moment, machine guns dare to run rampant on the island.

Author, if you want to become popular, you don't need water. This has just been put on the shelves. You are so good, you only have one or two hundred people, and you have ruined so many chapters. The key is that all your troops have superpowers. They are not ordinary people. Do you need to be so careful?

What a waste of my subscription. I wrote 70 chapters before it was released. If I switch to a novel with a tighter plot, I finished it in 7 chapters! Keep talking nonsense and talking nonsense. I thought it would be better after it was put on the shelves, but it was exactly the same! Don't you know how to write novels if you don't write nonsense?