Secret: I Jumped Repeatedly Between Two Timelines

It feels like it's jumping too fast at the moment. The mysterious timeline is just rushing forward. Many places can be written carefully. For example, the transition between Deng and Dai in the water chapter is just a feeling. It's a pity to skip the Tarot Society. The Divine Envoy of the Aurora Society is also a bit more enjoyable in the Tarot Society. Generally speaking, the writing is okay.

It's been a long time since I've read a full-length novel. I really enjoyed reading it this time. I read it during the day and still think about it in my dreams at night. I can feel that the author has a very upright view. He creates carefully and respects the characters and settings of the original work. I personally do not feel that there is any OOC or contempt for non-comedian characters (this is simply a humanistic habit). He carefully describes the growth arcs of many characters and successfully solves many regrets of the original work. It would be nice to have some fun. Although there are some shortcomings in the mid-term, most of the time it is fun to watch. The perspective of the protagonist has clear love and hate, and it is very enjoyable to watch. Whether it is defeating a powerful enemy with force or deciphering the enemy's complex plan, it is also very enjoyable to watch. The combat power framework is relatively reasonable and the logic can be justified (personally, I just feel it is a bit strange that I have not encountered Amon because of the law of aggregation in the early stage, maybe because I didn't look at Aba Aba with my brain). The control of the narrative rhythm is also getting better and better. I like no cp, I like the mysterious world, I like watching the perfect ending, and I like the remnants of the past in the first part of Xiao Ke, Lu Mian, and Audrey, so I also enjoyed watching it. However, because I really like the book "Desk Pet", I feel a little regretful that the sense of presence has become less in the later period. Finally, I would like to thank the author for letting the students read the novel happily during the final semester. The results may not be great, but at least the human nature is stable😭 I hope that the author's writing style will get better and better in life and career, and more people will see and like the author's works.

Until I saw the fee, I quite like the setting of this book, especially the fact that it has the same personality as the original, and can erase the old imprints of the magic potion. It is simply a being that is even more disgusting than Tianzun. After all, Tianzun just disgusts you, but Xiaoning can really make you resurrected. There is no hope (what Ning Jian fights hhh) The interaction with Tianzun is also very interesting. There is always a battle of wits and courage. The gold content of the old-level clown (Happy) is a path I have never imagined being the godfather of braised noodles. I like Xiao Ning's three views very much. No matter what kind of person, you must learn first Only when you can save yourself can you save others. When I watched Su Huan, I was very worried about Lu Mian's mental state. I felt that his self-destructive tendency was too serious. How can a person who doesn't even care about himself save others? It's great to have Xiao Ning to guide him. Just like watching Mystery, I hope someone can Accompany Xiao Ke and tell him that he is not alone in this strange world. I also hope that there will be someone in Lu Mian who will accompany him and guide him when he knows the truth about his sister. This may be the meaning of reading fan fiction. The regrets of the original work will be healed or avoided by the fan bosses! Anyway! I really like Xiao Ning in the author's writing, and I also like the setting of this article. Although I think it's weird to give Xiao Ke a CP, I still hope the author can tell me whether this article will arrange a CP for Xiao Ke like the previous article.

It's rare to see a fic written by Wei Mi and Su Huan together, and strives to stay close to the world view and setting, as well as the characters are not OOC, the story is interesting, and the fighting is exciting. Although there are some small bugs and the protagonist is a bit too generous, there is no problem, since they are all fics anyway. The author can write slowly, stabilize the story, and not rush (it took Tolkien 11 years to write The Lord of the Rings) Come on!

What a crappy book, you actually start charging for it after it's put on the shelf. An author with a bad attitude like you doesn't care about reading the book he wrote, just throw it out of the bookshelf, never to be seen again!

I can understand that the protagonist has a big problem. The author found that controlling the plot requires suppressing the combat power, but the reason for suppressing the combat power must be reasonable. In the article, the protagonist held a ceremony and then was promoted, which made me feel like taking off his pants and farting. If the ceremony can help digest the magic potion, the protagonist can also be promoted first and then hold the ceremony. Anyway, the protagonist is high-ranking and is not afraid of losing control. It is not easier to hold a replacement ceremony after the sequence is high, but the protagonist needs to perform the ritual first and then be promoted.

Seeing Squid's latest answer, Hei Ye is getting stupider and stupider. Originally, her promotion was all dependent on external forces, which is already unbearable. Now releasing 008 is not a so-called deal with Adam at all. She just sees the changes and possibilities of fate. She doesn't know what will happen next. All I can say is that I will never be able to hold back when I see someone bragging about how scheming the night is.

Why don't we just let Lu Mian be the heroine and take the path of an assassin as soon as possible.

Up to now, I can only say that this book is not very good and has many problems, but the biggest problem is the plug-in of the protagonist. It means that the original person will only be pulled out when the plot requires it. At other times, it is equal to non-existence. Not to mention that the person is equal to the original, and the ritual of digesting the potion must be carried out in a step-by-step manner. Later, it is simply said that the protagonist is the same. I couldn't hold back because of the mistake in the initial personality. Didn't Amon's uniqueness and characteristics automatically fly to the protagonist? Can he, a king of angels, be able to withstand the initial aggregation? This is the biggest problem of this book. The personality setting is only pulled out when needed to show how awesome the protagonist is, and other times it does not exist at all.

I'm a little scared to see how many people in the comment section want Lu Mian to be the heroine. After all, not everyone has the ability to write a story about a change of marriage. No matter how you read it, you just want to watch it for fun. Once the emotional line of the change of marriage becomes rigid, the heroine will not be three-dimensional in character creation, and there will definitely be a lot of people running away.

I don't understand why those protagonists insist on saving some regrets. Are these people your parents or something? They insist on saving them. They don't know how to put aside the plot of helping others and respect the fate of others. Why do they risk themselves just based on their hearts?

It's obvious that the character setting is very high and it's okay to just swallow it raw. What's most annoying is that the author obviously cheated and then used some inexplicable and unreasonable things to suppress the combat effectiveness. Why did he cheat like this if he couldn't grasp the plot? If you cheat, you will have to suppress your combat effectiveness.

It is suggested that the introduction should be removed and the heroine should be replaced by Lu Mian.

Does this book break the squid's mysterious aristocracy and mysterious gangsters?

According to Squid himself, as long as you know enough about the true God, an clairvoyant can even temporarily reach the person and level of the true God. If God himself comes in person, he can even briefly restore his former glory, but if the time is short, he may only be able to kill a true god quickly 😰😰😰

Look at Xiao An next door! If you don't envy me, just go ahead.

After reading the beginning, the writing is quite interesting. It will be more interesting later on. For example, it would be interesting to ask Witch Lu Mian to be the heroine. I think it can break the circle.

This author has a bad habit that he won't change even if he says it. He likes to mutter to himself and doesn't like to think in his heart.

Let Lu Mian be the heroine, it will definitely be popular

One thing to say, the idea of letting Lo Mian be the heroine is quite strange If you play it well, it will be the same as the Mysterious Witch's "Changing Marriage" and set the benchmark If you don't play it well, you may have to share some of the pressure of the squid Personally, I am actually quite curious about the route of Lo Mian being the heroine. After all, Lo Mian calls me daddy, and it is a bit more in-depth development. It's normal, hehehe Of course, I am not the author after all. The author has to worry about whether some people are just fun people. If they run away after watching the fun, the author will be under great pressure The author has the Kaisu Ring line, which is a good entry and exit point. After all, I have seen too many girlfriend lines, and I am a bit tired of aesthetics. Suddenly seeing a mysterious and double-open Suzhu ring can attract some people, such as me

Sad news, God can only fight two old days Now the two pillars of God and Heavenly Lord can fight against four old days To give you face, one plus one>two, let me count five old days for you That's great, Teacher Dawu

Haven't they all been expelled from the Secret Book? Why are there so many new books about the Circle of Fate recently?

In fact, whether the original novel has a fan protagonist, anyone on the Earth side can fight against the alien gods. As the original book said, if it weren't for the end of the world, Xiao Ke wouldn't have much motivation to be promoted. If it weren't for the longevity issue, Sequence 3 would be the best. If he didn't think Amon was unreliable, Xiao Ke would have given the ingot to him. The mysterious fans are either the source of the original path, or they are the country of disorder, the city of disaster, or the wilderness of knowledge. No one dares to pretend to be mysterious in the Gou San family. The way they are written over and over again makes them vomit. They would rather choose to elbow the initial in the mirror than dare to elbow Tianzun, or they are too embarrassed to compete with Xiao Ke for the ingot. Is it possible that for Xiao Ke in the original work, someone would choose to be the master of the mystery for him, which is the best choice? Fans are all lickers and nannies. I think there is nothing wrong with this, but what is disgusting is the mystery readers or fan authors. While feeling that Xiao Ke is miserable, they choose to turn a blind eye and let him sit on the coffin board of Tianzun and worry about being criticized all the time. I really feel sorry for the cat, Maochong, who would rather serve as a occult trash can for Lumian and elbow the original Creator. No one dares to elbow Tianzun for Xiao Ke? It's all the heartache of Schrödinger, Schrödinger's beloved cat.

I'm just confused. Your original personality ignores the influence of Tianzun and can even destroy your original will. Why do you have to hold a ceremony?

Are there any books with Lo Mein as the female protagonist?

You push Lu Mian too high, Lu Mian's character is not suitable for the old days. In the original work, he was very cheap, so he cannot develop steadily. I feel really uncomfortable watching it. Why is it that the red angel character is more suitable in the fanfic?

It seems that no one has ever written two timelines in any work. The best way to write it is to say "it doesn't collapse, it's not particularly bad".

It feels like the protagonist can finally add two timelines and merge them into one, and then truly exist in the past and future, and now perfectly becomes the Lord of Mysteries. I can only say that God still lacked control back then 🙂

I understand, the protagonist is Wan Ye who has a brain

Let me go, the heroine is really a fallen mother goddess.