Mystery: Traveling Through the Old Capital

A word of advice from the author, don't inexplicably assign male protagonists to the female characters in it. If you must, write a new one yourself. The overall tone is still good.

Didn't this copy the secret book of Squid at a glance? Why hasn't it been sealed yet? This bad trend must be suppressed

Hello, author, because your writing speed has been worrying recently, my readers have frequently complained about the lack of word count. I advise you to update more quickly so that I can move it to an external site for readers to read.

This is a necessary sacrifice （cross out this line） This post is inspired by "Musicians of the Old Days", a good book that I personally like very much. Readers are welcome to come to the comment area to judge the situation of this book. In order to avoid wasting readers' time in testing the poison, I have compiled a guide with a summary of some possible poison points for you to judge whether you should read it or not. First of all, please note before reading. The amount of information in the first volume is low, and it contains too much speculation. Some readers think it is literary, and some readers think it is just right. It is difficult to judge whether you can accept it, so if you can't accept it, you can consider starting from the second volume. You can probably understand the first volume, or skip reading. Be careful to skip chapters 4-10 This is related to the author's inexperience. , After all, it's a newbie and a new book. To be honest, I didn't think I could sign the contract earlier, so I wrote it more casually. I will make modifications later when I have time to try to achieve the result I want: write the protagonist's thinking, but not too hard Okay, next is what I think may be a poisonous point. Please don't curse people in the comment area. Criticism is okay, but personal attacks are not. Please understand. 0. Main plot: (Minor spoilers) Avoid the Mother Goddess from overturning the table, develop to at least the Omniscient Almighty + the Lord of Mystery + the protagonist in a stable state, and then use F11 to sweep and win the doomsday battle with one click. Finding people, fishing for old Neil Dunn, Daley Cohen, Li Bai, Huang Tao, Bonova, little Amber, Solomon, Derrick's parents, Xiao Zhou's parents, Huang Tao's parents, Chief Moon City Silver City Hot Pot... In short, it is a Haidilao The protagonist, as a former reader and now a traveler and stranger, has some fun and accepts the world, and the changes brought about in the process. 1. About the author: Neither a girl nor a boy, just over eighteen years old 2. About the content: Follow the original setting as much as possible, and only make a few reasonable second settings in places that Squid didn't mention. In the end, it must be HE, I feel tired of it. Readers of this ending can leave on their own, or read as appropriate. 3. About the protagonist: Lin Chuan positions himself as a "stranger", which can be understood as him playing a cross-era masterpiece called Lord of Mysteries. The ultimate goal is to clear the level and then find his way home. In the process, he will act based on cultural identity and simple moral values, and enjoy life He knows that there are too many cries in the world, but he will not care. If it happens easily, I will save it. If it is right in front of me, I will save it. Otherwise, if I don't see it, it means there is no chance. Zhou Mingrui is equivalent to a player who is online together, and the original character is equivalent to an NPC with an initial favorable impression. As time goes by, he will gradually integrate into the game due to empathy or cultural reasons. 4. About time travel: The reasons for time travel will not be described in detail, but there is indeed a background to time travel. 5. Regarding the emotional drama: No change to marriage, no change, no corruption. It has not yet been decided whether there will be a heroine. 6. What kind of appetite is suitable for readers to read I want to see Haidilao Realize My Dream; This post is updated from time to time. You are welcome to leave a message to add or discuss. Now let's go to the code and write it here.

Otherwise, think of a heroine quickly to dilute the Nantong flavor.

I didn't get the first choice, and I didn't pass the crossover Although it was expected, I still felt a little frustrated. I can calm down and write a book. I will definitely not stay up late after today. Take care of yourself. I will finish the book with an average of 4k. Give yourself an explanation. I don't want to lose all those things. I just can't write. There are still more than one million words of mysterious fans who have not signed a contract. I just hope that I can learn something by the end of writing. I would rather die than bear the name of eunuch. Off-topic: If I get stuck publishing chapters on the hour, will it give people the illusion that I have saved the manuscript and published it on time?

Is Lord of Mysteries a fanfic of this book? Does Squid have to contribute 10% of the revenue to this book?😰

Will the heroine accept Susie and Old Neil?

The original work of Mystery has a heroine or rather a semi-heroine, and it has nothing to do with love and love. It is just Tarot Club Audrey and others. Each one has its own growth and participation in different events. In the end, everything is for its own world and all living beings. The tone of Mystery is that power is a curse, so don't write garbage harem stories.

The writing style is a little bit literary, and I think it's suitable for writing about Dragon Clan fans, just don't catch the Jiangnan literary disease.

The writing style is at least good, but the entire first volume can be used as a side story or a reminiscence, or the title can be changed to Prologue 123, otherwise the Earth story in the previous volume will have a big impact.

This prologue is too long, more than a dozen chapters... It's so long-winded You should get to the point earlier so you're interested in reading it, otherwise your patience will be wasted.

The writing is quite good, but it gave me a gloomy feeling. Is there something wrong with me, or is there something wrong with what he wrote? 😅

This introduction gives me an inexplicable gay feeling. Although I read the author's lightning protection post, do I really not want to change it? There are also character cards.

What are you doing? Have you been corrupted by Jiangnan Road? This writing style is fine for writing about dragons. Mysterious fandoms should not be about Wenqing. It is too different from the original style and it looks awkward. The idea is good, but don't do it for the Internet. It should be concise and concise. Too many words will only make me feel that the word count is too high.

Not accepting missing girls is a poisonous point 😡

The alien anchor shouldn't be able to affect Grisha through the initial barrier. If it can, I can't imagine what tricks the alien gods can do. In addition, the mysterious world has only one consciousness at the same time. The protagonist's consciousness is within the barrier, and the body outside the barrier should be in a state of dementia like the Uncertain Mist. This is very clear from the situation of the Sons of Chaos.

The first dozen or so chapters are a matter of opinion, and I think it would be better if the content was reduced by half. It feels much more comfortable in the back and the writing is good.

Come on, the author's writing skills are still good.

Have you ever been a sefirot? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted

If you have content, write it quickly, otherwise what will I read?

Now it's a good read, except for the first 17 pictures which are a bit boring, and the first 17 pictures are just summary. You can skip the first 17 pictures, which will not have a big impact on the plot, but will greatly improve the reading experience.

Why not tell Shinzo a Soviet joke?

The impression at the beginning is still very good! Keep up the good work, author!

Hello, author, I have read a similar novel on another website before. The plot is similar so far, but I am not sure. Please send me another 1000 chapters and I will check it.

The last book was titled "The Mysterious Eunuch of the Old City". I hope the author won't go down the same path as it did.

"Please allow me to introduce my Lord. My Lord calls himself "Error". In the past, present and future, he is the pointer of time; the shadow of fate; the embodiment of fraud and mischief. "My Lord lives above the reality and spiritual world, and his mercy is spread across heaven and earth. There are six angels standing beside His seat: Angel of Death: Klein Moretti, this person is dead, so he is called the Angel of Death. Mercury Angel: Sherlock Moriarty is always in trouble, and those involved with him are always unlucky. He is as poisonous as mercury, so he is called the Mercury Angel. Angel of Punishment: Gehrman Sparrow, who specializes in punishing (male) pirates and has made countless strong men at sea frightened, so he is called the Angel of Punishment. Angel of Redemption: Dawn Dantès donated a large amount of property and saved countless people, so he was called the Angel of Redemption. Angel of Life: Merlin Hermes, a miraculous magician who saves and helps others, so he is called the Angel of Life. Angel of Time: Zhou Mingrui. Born in ancient times, active today, spanning the long river of time, it is called the Angel of Time🧐🧐🧐

I also thought about a setting of "the original back". The protagonist comes from outside the beginning and becomes the original back, which is the endless nothingness beyond the known. Nothing is nothing and cannot exist in the realm of "being". To "create something out of nothing", it needs to be "known". This involves the symbol of possibility, thus directly banning the life girl during the initial gathering, forming "nothingness" (The ultimate enhanced version where the audience is agnostic and secretive, with great knowledge and vision, but cannot actively interfere because of the symbol of "outside") "possibility" (investigator path, similar to historians, but requires "causality") and "resistance" (player path, symbol of "victory" and "opposition"). The "initial backside" I set is the abyss of 486 plus Genshin Impact.

Personally, I feel that there are a lot of places that seem to be very literary, but compared to other fan fiction, it is already very good, and to a certain extent, it describes the struggles of ordinary people after gaining power

I've become a fool who can't live without reading new chapters.