Mystery: the Holy Body of Innate Destiny

The writing is messy and foggy. Why is there an extra inexplicable organization or several sequence one and sequence two? Is there a wild sequence 12 in this path? ? It was restarted several times inexplicably at the beginning. Who restarted it? ? Then the protagonist is pushed around, but we can understand that after all, a person who knows nothing travels here. But why he keeps walking in circles and many places are anticlimactic. A certain character enters the scene wonderfully and reaches the climax of the plot. Then it ends immediately and ends abruptly. It is too childish. Or the author wants to express that "fate is an absurd comedy." I feel like I am writing about what I dreamed of. Does the author have an outline? The idea is very good and the concept is very good. My personal suggestion is to first sort out the ideas and organize the outline. Think about how to explain this wonderful organization. Think about what the protagonist is going to do. If possible, don't have everything start and end. The plot should not start too high and start too low. I hope this book will do the same.

The rules of the mysterious survival manual at the beginning are in contrast, and combined with the various yin and yang errors in the fate of the protagonist, it is very interesting, but it is a bit aesthetically tired to keep writing like this. The character of the protagonist who reaches the sea has some changes. I feel that the IQ has improved, and it is not completely passive. The arrangement of the plot has certain surprises. Not everyone likes the witch plot, but overall it is well written and interesting, and I have the desire to continue reading. This book is one of the few books among mystery fans that can be read and worth pursuing.

Let me talk about the plot speculation, my personal guesses about some of the foreshadowing of this book, and share my personal thoughts - personal thoughts, for reference only! (Look at the future, how many predictions can I, a prophet, get 🙂) ①The protagonist is the reincarnation of a big boss. Chen Yuzhe/Lorne Disenko/Joas, these should be the protagonists, just like the poker association. The person mentioned was probably the protagonist's previous life. He disappeared for some unknown reason, but everyone under his command thought that he was tricked by the night, and there might be something hidden! (It's not unusual for a boss to reincarnate. After all, how can you survive in the fifth era where classes are basically solidified without some background? This era is the Black Iron Age, and the characteristics are almost the same... But what many people may not like is that the protagonist of this book does not need to have so many backgrounds in his previous life. Even an ordinary mortal can reach the end according to the path of destiny) ② The protagonist has many arrangements for all parties, and he has left many back-ups. From the members of the association, it is obvious that they include the Demon Wolf siblings, the God of Beauty, and maybe even the Elf Queen. Maybe Pales can be counted before... This is not bad. Except for the lack of a true god above, it is basically no worse than any true god church! Although they seem to be a group of losers, hugging each other for warmth, just seeking help from each other. I don't deny this, but these people should have been intimidated by the protagonist. Jacob, Solomon, the Emperor of Hades, the Emperor of the Night... All fulfilled the fate mentioned by the protagonist. The group of people who survived probably have a high degree of trust in the protagonist. Not to mention the protagonist's control of destiny, the fact that the protagonist has allowed them to live until now is enough for them to obey the protagonist to a certain extent! (Theoretically wearing the cloak of fate, even if it is clear that he is tricking them, they may have to step on it with hesitation, and completely obey their own orders before they are completely sure that the protagonist is tricking them) After talking about the internal problems, let's talk about the external world. From their words, it was clear that the dark night had tricked the protagonist, but things cannot be calculated that way, and some things cannot be just taken at face value. For example, the dark night also participated in the battle to siege the ancient sun god, and also sealed the gentleman... All of these have profound meanings, and theoretically, the protagonist may also have them! ③The connection between the protagonist and the Key of Light, in the eyes of some insiders, is simply a famous brand... The protagonist is destined to choose his destiny, which in itself is a high sequence of destiny paths! I seriously suspect that the death of the protagonist is to reduce the revival of the Key of Light and to control oneself 😎 After all, in the world of the Lord of Mysteries, there is nothing that cannot be solved by death. After dying once, most of the problems can be solved! The Key of Light can be said to be the most special of the seven major sources of matter in the Western Continent. Although each of the seven major sources of origin is special in its own way, the Key of Light is the only one whose consciousness has not been shattered! And destiny itself is also special! In this case, it feels like the protagonist will be completely resurrected if he is not dead (after all, look at the card game, the three pillars invite the Key of Light, and the group of True God Sequence Zeros are not worthy at all, but they seem to be almost the same person as the protagonist. This connection is already very scary). It feels like another cooperation between the goddess and Adam, killing the protagonist together and cutting off the connection. ④ Various hidden lines should begin to appear after the four demigods in the sequence! It is expected to be revealed in the three stages of demigods, angels, and true gods... But I feel that the later the better for the protagonist! After all, Destiny Path is about destiny, not necessarily past lives. Although it is expected that the protagonist can come into contact with old acquaintances from the past life, the later the better, preferably the old time... The later the better, the better the isolation, the stronger the isolation, the more perfect one's own performance, and the better the future will be! (Fate has already marked a price. Inheriting the past life means that the earlier you pay, the later it proves that you have prepared more in the previous life and have already prepared the bargaining chip to pay off the debt, and the less you need to pay it back in this life) ⑤ The trap left deliberately at the beginning is most likely to trap the Key of Light. Choose an assassin, observe the stars, Leodro, Amon... They are all pitfalls! I always feel that the protagonist in the previous life should know the plot, so when the magic stick predicts many people, many people trust the protagonist; and then in this life, he deliberately leaves a trap, calculates his fate, let himself step on it, and deliberately consumes the Key of Light behind the scenes 😏 (The connection between the protagonist and the Key of Light is too deep. As its agent and puppet, it is impossible to abandon the protagonist, so it is normal for the protagonist to calculate his fate and continue to consume)

It's pretty good. Judging from the free chapters so far, multiple female protagonists are not a bad idea, and the disease and novelist senses are okay🤔

There are many female protagonists, and she slipped away without saying anything.

The core of comedy is tragedy. If it hadn't happened, the Lord of Mysteries would be a tragedy in nature, and any time traveler would be unlucky if he passed through it. They would basically be containers for those high-ranking beings 😢 Don't think it's alarmist, what happened to the K-meows of the Ring of Fate? ! It's obviously the Heavenly Lord wearing Klein's skin! (After Fate, Klein's reputation was not good, but essentially there was something wrong with the roots of this world, and the cruel side was completely revealed... In fact, it had been expected before, but the writing was very obscure. Normally, how could there be no hidden dangers if it was replaced bit by bit? In the first part, it was just that the plot advancement was not shown, and the meow time was suppressed. It's too short, and you haven't clearly shown that you are not like yourself) If you drink the magic potion, you will be replaced by others little by little; if you don't drink the magic potion, others can easily control you. If you have a lifespan of a hundred years, you will immediately become a plaything 😭 The essence of the system of the Lord of Mysteries is comparable to the cesspool of Warhammer. Only the mortals who don't know are the happiest lives! Seeing myself becoming a different person bit by bit, becoming less and less like myself, and even taking it for granted... How desperate! Among the Lord of Mysteries, there is no eternity, no once and for all, even a pillar must face the threat of the original creator. Normally, for mortals, if you can persist for hundreds of years without wavering, it is considered a victory; if you can persist for a thousand years, you have already made a lot of money; and if you can persist for tens of thousands of years, it is enough... The problem has never been solved, it is just enjoying the hardships 😢 (In the Lord of Mysteries, you must have this awareness. Enlightenment... If you want to write the Lord of Mysteries well, you must also clarify this awareness, otherwise you will not be able to write that flavor) In fact, our protagonist is quite pitiful, it seems to be funny, but it is essentially similar to the puppet of the Key of Light. To put it nicely, it is called the agent, but to put it badly, all the fates are chosen for the protagonist! 😭 In case the protagonist does not comply with the plan, immediately restart the protagonist and let the protagonist make new choices. He can only act according to the plan! Perhaps it is a kind of luck for the protagonist to become the old man. The protagonist can clearly express himself. After all, destiny is here, and he naturally becomes the old man (the protagonist is basically not stitched, and still retains himself); but the protagonist is the most unlucky. It seems to retain himself, but in fact the choices he makes are all the choices of the Key of Light, similar to an unconscious puppet 😫 (This is basically the sadness of being sent to the old days) In fact, it depends on what the protagonist thinks next 🙏 If you obey: The protagonist really has the mentality of living a happy life as an ordinary person. After being sent to the old days, he can basically live happily for many years. Except for the choice at the critical moment, it is controlled by the key of light, which is not too satisfying. Just like Da Liu Universe's Devouring Empire, the life of breeding is so attached that the protagonist can basically live a life far beyond that of a normal person very happily, which is definitely enough. Under this choice, the protagonist and the Key of Light have the best cooperation, and they are on the same front. If you resist: At this time, the protagonist must resist the Key of Light's plan for his own destiny and resist fate, but the path to destiny is inseparable from destiny. After the protagonist realizes it, he will be very painful, resist bit by bit, and sometimes even be smart and choose the difficult path. Perhaps... Isn't this planned by fate? Maybe everything is going according to plan. (This road is very difficult. It is the path of promotion chosen by most people in the Lord of True Mysteries. It is the path of resistance... But in the end, there may be a sentence: The Lord does not care 😭 everything is actually meaningless) Come on, come on!

This introduction will most likely describe the protagonist as a stupid pig. If you pretend to be stupid, you will never discover the truth of these spoof tips. Forcibly written into a happy article 😰😰

As mentioned, this is my biggest impression after reading Chapter 39 so far. I don't know how many readers this chapter has to dissuade. I really didn't expect that the only bad thing about a new book by a new author would be the setting. 1. The setting of past lives and present life has been overused, especially in the mysterious fandom. Readers have become tired of aesthetics and even feel disgusted when they see it. This setting itself is not good and is thankless. 2. The previous article has always said that the protagonist is so lucky and lucky, and he still takes the path of destiny. This is what readers want to see, but now you tell me that it is the second episode? A lucky person becomes a caged bird? Do real lucky people need two rounds of games? You can't speed through Wheel of Fortune in one round. Are you worthy of being the protagonist of a Path of Destiny fanfic? 3. What fanfic readers are looking at is a setting and their own understanding of the plot. As a result, your association has smashed the audience's perspective of God to pieces, and even written it in a foggy way for readers to guess? So do you think I will continue to read it? Do you think I will subscribe to it? Guess how many people have to be persuaded to retreat in Chapter 39? Except for the association, this book is very satisfying to me, and my writing skills are also outstanding. Come on, author, I suggest you delete all the association content, and leave the unreasonable arrangements to fate. Don't worry, readers are very receptive to fate's arrangements. It's okay to be unreasonable. They are all strong luck. This is how the wheel of fortune should be played!

Big snake and little snake, I didn't expect that Mother Destiny's favorite cub would be me, Lorne, if it wasn't you! ! !

What do you think about occult aristocrats and gangsters?

I used to think that the Wheel of Fortune path only required being lucky enough, but now the protagonist really needs to be reborn 😎 However, try not to use it in the previous life, preferably in this life, because the reason for rebirth must be hidden dangers, and the transition is connected with the previous life, making it easier for hidden dangers to appear in the now that has been cleansed. One more thing: 😎 Many rituals are not ready for immediate use, as long as they are at this stage in your life. Maybe if you use them for many years, the effect may be slightly worse, but it is still effective! (For example, 300 years of Ke Miao, several years have passed since it came down. Although it has exceeded 300 years in ancient times, it can still be used) ... The ritual of the winner of the sequence five, to put it bluntly, is to be unlucky first! In a month-long period, if you put yourself in a state of bad luck, you will never be lucky once. Actually, I think we can give the protagonist good luck first, which consumes too much luck, and then becomes particularly unlucky for a period of time later 🤓 As for the protagonist's good luck: 1. The weapon is approved, and it happens to be reused by the kingdom, the protagonist's shares become valuable again, and the family industry regains its vitality. Second, open a soda factory and call it Coca-Cola, using the wheel of fortune as a symbol (Coca-Cola will be a big seller in the future, what a great luck! And it also solves its own anchor problem). Third, because of the soda symbol, the Angel of Destiny Ouroleus escaped from the gaze... Which directly drained the protagonist's luck and started a month of misfortune for the protagonist! (Different people have different definitions of unlucky. Some people are unlucky and die, not even the scum is left. Some people are unlucky, maybe everything is not going well and it takes a lot of effort.) This time unlucky can be set as the protagonist, this one The moon is about to explode, and the love fortune has turned into a love disaster 😜 Xianyu and Xiu have to play two roles to fall in love, which exhausts their brains; at the same time, in order to cooperate, they have to constantly communicate with Miss Hazel, and they are about to send someone to her. The door's self-recommendation; Tracy was about to leave the pirate ship, and the protagonist happened to be met; together with Miss Doll, he was basically hunted down by the Rose School's key forces... All kinds of things came together. He had to protect his increasingly twisted emotional line and not hurt his female friends. He also had to protect himself from the pursuit of many cultists (Aurora Society, Witch Cult, Rose School), and he couldn't leave the city. He found that leaving the city was more dangerous. Afterwards, in the midst of danger, in this battle royale, I was chased for more than a month, and was rescued by Huang Jiajia. Then the card of destiny was given, and he helped crush the characteristics and became the winner! I feel that this month, I don't drink it immediately after a month, but as long as it is completed, not immediately! In life, as long as there is such a month 😏 (However, if it is a reborn boss, he should have completed the ritual long ago. If you put it before, you can let the protagonist continue to eat it alive... But normally, it is best for the reborn boss to complete the ritual again, because before borrowing Your own will be connected with the previous life, and will also be affected by the problems of the previous life) If you don't want the protagonist to upgrade too quickly, as long as the protagonist can go through this month, it is completely okay to be unlucky to the limit. Faced with the Witch Cult's haze massacre, Betrace captured it back. After completing the ritual of sequence four, sequence five and sequence four, it is directly regarded as completion 🤭 (I want to watch the plot of the little black room 😠) ... Sequence 4 Doom Mage, because the winner's entrance is If you are looking for a Sequence 4 person, it is recommended that you face this big smog, the Quasi-Black Emperor, Chic, the Night, the True Creator, and a Death Archon... It seems that the scene only contains a Sequence 4 demigod witch, but in fact there is much more behind it. Because I have just experienced the most unlucky month, I was not prepared to face the smog head-on! Facing this disaster with the protagonist's physique, he may become seriously ill, but surviving will not be a problem. This ceremony can be considered completed ahead of schedule. ...... Sequence 3: Chaos Walker. Regarding auxiliary materials, Jiufen's written thanks can be sent by the association. Ritual: Determine a node, or target, that you will inevitably reach for your destiny in the next ten years. This one has long been destined 😎 to become the wheel of fortune and the key to light. If he cannot do it, the protagonist's current special identity will most likely die, and he can definitely afford it! (This can even be the simplest) ... Sequence 2: Prophet. I feel like this should be the easiest for time travellers! An important revelation that has been fulfilled (recorded on a stone tablet or paper before it was fulfilled), I feel that this may not be my own, but if I really look into it, it should be my own revelation, and I can mix it with the ritual - that is, Emperor Loen was assassinated, starting a world war! (If you feel it is inappropriate, use the Fool prepared in your previous life to appear) The blessing of one of the seven lights in the spiritual world, this is not difficult. Accumulating more than a hundred years of luck... This is a bit difficult for the protagonist. It may have to come into contact with the previous life (but I still recommend not to have too much contact with the previous life. It is better to provide indirect help). Accumulating a hundred years of luck, the protagonist may be as good as someone else for a hundred years in just a few years [fn=2 6] (Being selected by the Key of Light is a great luck in itself. This luck is as good as one's accumulated luck for hundreds of years) Ritual: Pry into the long river of destiny, find important revelations related to at least one country, and ensure that this revelation is finally presented in the way you "see" it. This ritual can be combined with the previous auxiliary materials, naturally using the Death of the Black Emperor and World War 😏 ... Sequence 1: Mercury Snake. Except for the auxiliary materials, the umbilical cord is a bit difficult, but I feel that if I had been prepared, I would have collected it long ago! Others are probably not too difficult for the protagonist! But during the ceremony, the protagonist should be able to remember all the memories, including the memories of the previous association! 😎 Or being born again and remembering the previous life, does it count as completing the ceremony? (Just like the master of the same life cuts off the past and connects to the previous life, it should actually be regarded as his present life. Awakening all the cognitions buried deep in his soul and heart, he should also be able to realize the layout of his previous life, otherwise it is not all at all) I always feel that the protagonist's current state, if there is a previous life, is very much like completing the sequence one ceremony! ...... Sequence 0: Wheel of Fortune. Supplementary materials: The nine landmarks in the long river of destiny (any of the past, present or future are acceptable) have been connected with the previous life, and the means can be inherited! Ritual: Find the right opportunity in the torrent of fate, that is when the Fool is born, the Fool becomes a god, and the Lord of Mystery reappears! The fool becomes a god, I become a god 😜 ... Note: Accommodating the uniqueness and taking the magic potion need to be performed separately, which means that two rituals are required. The protagonist can jump all at once and complete it once! ... Finally, I would like to mention some thoughts, because the three sequences of this sequence have been divided up early, so the protagonist can basically jump from sequence two to sequence zero in one step, and become a true god in one fell swoop 😎 Therefore, the training one ritual and sequence 0 ritual, as well as many auxiliary materials, must be completed together! I thought about it and found that there is no conflict. We can complete the two stages of the ceremony together and break through level 2 at one time. As for indigestion, I am in a bad state. I have the seal of the Lord of Mysteries and there is still some time for digestion to stabilize. If the protagonist is really the reincarnation of a big boss, the sequence one ritual can basically be completed as long as he remembers his previous life! And this kind of restart has digested a lot 😏 Whether it is covering up the destiny under the empty shell of Tianzun (Kimiao, I want you to help me practice), restarting, or repositioning the belief, the protagonist's sequence is exactly the same, it should be melted in the mouth, even if it is not, it will be digested almost 😡 (Although I think the number reshuffle is to try not to have too many views with the previous life, otherwise hidden dangers will follow, but the protagonist jumps directly from sequence two to sequence 0, which is itself We have to face it head-on. In the ritual of sequence one, we have to remember all the memories. This is not right. You become a god in one fell swoop. After becoming a god, you have to face a decisive battle. Remembering those memories is something you have to face, and because you have sequence zero, you have to face hidden dangers. , There is no need to worry about those hidden dangers) My idea is that it is best to negotiate it later. The big snake and the protagonist will fight for that opportunity together. There are only three of them. Outsiders can only watch and stabilize the situation when the wheel of fate is finally born! And after becoming a god, save the lives of the two losers and don't let the two losers die. It can also be regarded as clearing up the field and reducing losses 😏 (A Wheel of Fortune itself is sent directly to the old days. This is needed to welcome the battle at the end of the world. As long as you promise not to participate in any party in the future and choose neutrality, I believe everyone will do it as three people compete... Or Maybe it is not the best choice for everyone, but it is acceptable. Even if the true creator cannot help Ouro Leus after becoming a god, it is still acceptable) 🙏🙏🙏 And after becoming a god, he will become the same old man, and then he will still love the double fight between the Ring of Fate and the Weaver of Destiny 😰 9 old Under normal circumstances, I have to fight one against two, and I need the help of two pillars. If I follow the original work, basically the firepower will be concentrated on myself (I have to fight one against two, and it is a real fight, how can I say it is miserable) In fact, I feel that after the protagonist becomes a true god, he can continue to write, and write about the final battle 😜 With the help of a destiny, in the battle with Utopia If everyone cooperates, it may not be impossible to allow the Nine Old Days to be born. If you really don't want to become the old days, you can restart after the war and let others take over 😏 (Except for the two pillars, I feel that the Key to the Wheel of Fortune can change the situation to the greatest extent! It is the most suitable for development 😎 Dreamers can make people adapt quickly and become stronger through psychological counseling, and the same is true for destiny)

Hahahahaha, your introduction is amazing~

The protagonist had been followed and ambushed before, and had a huge reaction. Before, he even spent a lot of money to find a detective. Why did Audrey react so poorly when she sent a dog to follow her? It's too fragmented. Then this Audrey is also disgusting, and she is not satisfied with stalking others. The previous congressman's daughter is almost the same. Then the protagonist handles it gently, and still feels like he has become bad... Is the protagonist a congenital aristocratic woman who is a dog licker? Can you stop having such double standards and show off the situation where Leonard and Daniels were staring at you and shoot directly?

Is it really fun to have a confused low-sequence protagonist and all kinds of inexplicable high-sequence chess pieces? Isn't the protagonist who splits the road between life and death with both hands as hot as you?

I really want to laugh when I see the protagonist trying to die. This is fate~

It's too unlucky for people who are on the destiny path to drink the magic potion of this path step by step. In the original book, there are only a few strong men at the top of this path who were promoted step by step. You shouldn't just follow any path. When you reach a certain fixed node, it will inevitably become the first sequence of your destiny.

I feel like the description of the protagonist is too stupid. He knows the coincidence but doesn't think about himself. There is also a time travel guide, which is speechless. It can be believed.

This book is so tiring to read, 118 chapters in, and I still feel like the protagonist is like an NPC, with no thoughts or initiative of his own. Doing things seems to have no intention of its own and is very empty. Lack of enthusiasm for life and things.

The most attractive thing about Lord of Mysteries is actually the gathering at 3pm every Monday. Some people also concluded that the essence of best friends is Tarot Club, but you have completely abandoned this and added many inexplicable elements. To be honest, it feels like it is wearing the skin of a best friend, but in fact there is no connection at all. It is not inconsistent at all to change the names of the original characters such as Klein and turn it into a fantasy sequence.

I feel so disgusted that Klein pretends to be the protagonist and does this with Tracy. Will I die if I don't write this? If you can't write well, don't fucking write it. I'm using your face to flirt with your girlfriend, and I hope you can accept it.

In order to make a joke, the protagonist is too idiotic. If there is a problem in the guide, I advise the author to let the protagonist discover it as soon as possible, otherwise it will be difficult to get off later, and it will be a mess later.

Some of the details in the text are truly unflattering. Magic potion cannot be stored. If you do not drink it in time after it is prepared, it will merge with the container and become an extraordinary item. Drinking the magic potion requires meditating to restrain your spirituality, and a lot of external information will be poured into your brain, instead of acting like nothing is wrong. The spirituality of extraordinary people is limited. An afternoon of divination is really unbearable.

There are many scolds and praises in the comment section. I have read 408 chapters. The combat power is due to the destiny. Cuttlefish fans must know that there is no combat ability in the early and middle stages of the destiny. The protagonist's intelligence is also at the level of ordinary people, so there is nothing to write about in the drama. Ordinary people's IQs don't expect to have any wits. They rely on the destiny to win. Everything written by the author is reasonable and not obtrusive, but the ideological stamp is really poisonous. It has no effect except disgusting readers. There are no problems in the plot and logic, so it is good in the mysterious fandom, but I have abandoned this ideological stamp. Readers who don't care about this can read it.

In fact, I find it difficult to bring a female protagonist into a mysterious world, let alone multiple female protagonists.

Author, I have an idea. When the protagonist is about to complete the ritual of Sequence 5, but has not yet completed it, let the protagonist experience a catastrophe. As the end of this ritual, it can also add some drama and plot tension. By the way, the ritual of Sequence 4 can also be completed. In addition, the protagonist is 100% the winner in every sense. He can completely digest the winner's potion as soon as he swallows it, and it will melt in the mouth. Not only has it become Sequence 5, but it is only one step away from Sequence 4. It only takes a bottle of potion. After that, you can directly start working on the Sequence 4 potion. I am not saying that, in fact, the ascending to Sequence 5 has been stuck for too long. The steps to ascend to Sequence 4 can be accelerated, otherwise the middle will be weak. In fact, the ascending to Sequence 5 has been stuck for so long, which is considered a weak middle. When it happens to ascend to Sequence 4, speed up a bit to solve the problem of weak mid-stage.

Outer gods are not a good thing, and sefirot is not a good thing either, especially the kind that still retains consciousness, it is even less good! (The ones that are conscious on earth include the Source Castle, the Sea of ​​Chaos, and a Key of Light) I have an idea, whether to let the protagonist participate in some invasions by the Destiny Weaver and the Circle of Fate, and then inadvertently swallow the characteristics of the two paths alive to maintain the balance 😎 It seems to be looking for trouble, but it is actually pulling chestnuts from the fire! The protagonist seems to be free, but in fact he is almost penetrated by the Key of Light. It is even possible that the divine side is the Key of Light. At this time, it is necessary to introduce external forces. As the Destiny Weaver and the Fateful Circle in adjacent paths, it is another good choice. ... After the protagonist becomes a demigod, swallowing the low-sequences of these two pathways will not make him lose control. As for the pollution problem, he will naturally let the Key of Light fight against these two to maintain his balance! (And I feel that if these two are involved, whether it is ritual or digestion, it can be operated)

Not bad, but has a strong sense of awkwardness. The protagonist's time progression is awkward - the author fills in the gaps by describing the original characters/events when the protagonist has nothing to do, but the process is not done well, resulting in the feeling that the Tingen volume ends before the protagonist has done anything. It's confusing. Is this period of time long or short? The protagonist's extraordinary life is very ethereal - the author uses original characters/events to fill the boring gaps in the protagonist's daily life. As a result, the protagonist has not been able to take root, integrate or lurk into this world during this unknown length of time. The feeling is no different from when he first traveled through the world. This also makes it awkward to throw out some common sense information in the original work - should the protagonist know? Why do you know? How much should you know? The charming atmosphere of the mysterious world is not highlighted - because the protagonist has not taken root in a bad environment and has not experienced the undercurrents of a peaceful life in Loen City, he has never understood the cruelty of the mysterious world. This makes some of the protagonist's motivations that should be based on this enlightened choice and cognition awkward - should we be cautious? Why be cautious? What to be cautious about and what to trust? Forward or backward? The scene transition is awkward - because there is no description of calm daily life, the stealth and depression of Loen's wild extraordinarys are not brought out. Because there is no sneakiness and repression, the wantonness and indulgence of the extraordinary power of the sea are not brought out. The awkward change of perspective - the author did not understand the core advantage of web articles that distinguishes them from dramas - an unparalleled sense of immersion based on the perspective of the protagonist. The stinking problem is that the perspective always switches to other characters, and there is even a situation where Xiao Ke is written entirely about Xiao Ke for four consecutive chapters, which is still a plot that is not directly related to the protagonist. If readers want to read Xiao Ke's perspective alone, why not read the original work again? If the author wants to write about the charm of Xiao Ke alone, why not write a fanfic in which Xiao Ke is the protagonist? Don't follow the old rules of dividing shots and cutting scenes in dramas. Many recent authors have this bad habit. Before the protagonist can stand still, they will cut into unnecessary angles and throw in unnecessary information and settings. Don't know where you learned it? ! Summary: It's pretty good, you can take a look.

My level is average, but I didn't expect that there would be so many readers, so thank you all. Unfortunately, my Sleepless One promotion failed. It will take some time to try to get promoted again. As for the reason... You can guess why Lorne is afraid of failing the exam. Anyway, thank you for your support. I will try my best to update it stably. I won't be very busy after May Day, and things will be much better by then. Thank you all. 🙏🙏🙏

The early stage was okay, but the later stage was a little different from what I wanted to see. The portrayal of the protagonist is not very good, such as: 1. The protagonist does not realize that he has made mistakes (For example: The gastric digestion sequence four magic potion and the release of a terrorist message caused Earl Hall's son to be in danger. Although Amon's actions were involved, he did not take it too seriously when the matter exceeded his own expectations. Regarding the danger encountered by Earl Hall's son, he I don't feel guilty in my heart, but I feel that I owe myself a big favor for saving the other person); 2. The protagonist is warm-hearted to his friend, but he never thinks about what the other person really thinks (for example: he acts like a fool in front of the other girls, and never thinks about what the other person really thinks) ); 3. The protagonist simply does not understand the sorrow of the people at the bottom, or the sorrow of the times, and his Audrey is much worse; 4. The protagonist knows the cruelty and madness of the mysterious world, but has no sense of crisis at all, just like Audrey in the early part of the original work. It all depends on the threat perception of Sequence 5, and it doesn't take long to remember after encountering so many dangers and coincidences; 5. The protagonist has no ultimate goal, and even though he feels like a time traveler, he doesn't want to go home. The author also uses so much writing to describe his homesickness, and the promotion of Sequence is just for the sake of being awesome. . And the author made Klein a bit miserable.

Tracy took away the protagonist's first time, spreading flowers and flowers🤭🤭🤭 After the meat is opened, the harem can start eating! As for Tracy's follow-up, if Tracy wants to go further, I think some settings can be added, such as the resurrection container of the White Saint 😏 As described in the original book, in September 1350, Caterina Pellet and Viscount Stratford, the chief guard of the Loen Palace, teamed up to capture the witch Triss. At the end of the autumn of the same year, he was hunted and controlled by the evil spirit "Red Angel". And Tracy had no influence later on, it was still himself... I have several speculations that although the possibility of having a resurrected backhand is low, it is not impossible, and no one would think that there are too many tricks! First, being attacked by a high-sequence, Xiaohong's status is very high, which directly affects the resurrection; Second, just hunting and controlling, possessing Catalina Pellet and following her back to the headquarters of the Witch Sect. It doesn't count as death, so the backhand is not activated. Third, when he was first controlled, Tracy was still a Sequence 5, and he might not be able to afford to be resurrected; later he became a Sequence 4, and was also a demigod. His characteristics were not provided by himself, and he might not necessarily be able to stabilize the pressure (the characteristics in this book are all provided, so there is time to leave backup). ... Resurrection, final conclusion: In the mysterious world, a perfect resurrection container is more like a carefully prepared and highly specialized "extraordinary item" than a readily available consumable. For most high-ranking people in the path, resurrection is a gamble with a very low success rate, and the gamble is the continuation of one's own existence! So the prerequisites for choosing a resurrection container are: the paths are adjacent, the spirit body can bear the strength, and they are compatible. This is just a prerequisite. After that, the container must be kept clean, with low resistance, and connected by blood and destiny. ... Look at Tracy, almost all satisfied! 😎 The characteristics of the biological daughter are almost all provided by the White Saint. In terms of personality, the biological mother who was trained is very yielding (completely like a specific individual). In terms of evaluation, the White Saint commented that she is very similar to herself... It is not a good word in the mysterious world, and it is scary to think about it. After that, Tracy is also allowed to keep herself (this is more like keeping the container clean, what to do if she goes out and messes around and gets contaminated), provides relatively independent autonomy, and uses resources to help (recover quickly after resurrection), this way of thinking is more possible! ... It is not activated in the original work, but this is not necessarily the case in this book 😏 Promote to Demigod early, compound the conditions for fattening, and you may directly plant the potion after resurrection. There is also a weakness of the protagonist, which can make Tracy surrender further when resurrected. My idea is to let Tracy inherit everything from the White Saint 😎 This inheritance is reasonable! For example, in the original book, when facing the Red Angel, he died, but his characteristics found a way to send him away and stayed, which happened to be activated. It just so happened that at this time, Tracy had a child with a destiny path... Blood and destiny were connected, and they both happened to collide. So the winner is Tracy, who knows everything about his mother and inherits all the arrangements😏 It is not impossible to take on the identity of his mother and directly become a Sequence Three, even an angel🪖