Star Abyss Walker

It is true that the first person is a poisonous point, but I am good at writing in the first person, so friends who are not used to it should read a few more chapters. If you are still not used to it by Chapter 10, you can only say that you have no chance of this book. Thank you for your understanding, thank you!

I'm a new reader. Fortunately, I read the comments, otherwise I would have read it. I heard everyone said that this author wrote a book with a single female protagonist and was ambiguous with other female partners, right? This nm is not a stock trading article. If you want a harem, then you can have a harem. I can accept a single female protagonist. After all, the main thing is to watch the plot of the game, but I will never accept the missing daughter. New readers should be careful.

What is this written about? I originally clicked on a novel and looked at the author and found out that it was the author of my favorite trilogy in online games. I was quite happy. I didn't expect to see your book again after so long. After reading more than ten chapters, what gb are you writing? The body travels into the game. Just one life. No one feels nervous. All cooked on their own. Just like an outing. The dead person immediately licks his bag. The same thing as playing house. Seeing it has no sense of substitution. No novice writer can write such a fragmented novel It only took a dozen chapters to go from surprise to disappointment to speechlessness after reading this book. Come on you

It's chapter sixty or seventy, and some people have entered the game. The game is an extraordinary world, and players are currently wanted by default. Live within the city walls to make a living, upgrade to fight bugs and beasts outside the city. But there is not a single word about extraordinary in the local city, and there is not a single word about extraordinary in any news or people's interactions, as if it does not exist. It should replace the reality of normal game writing with urban tranquility, but this is an extraordinary world that has no topic at all. I feel a sense of fragmentation.

Twelve years ago, the character of Mrs. Lin might have been more popular, but now I like girls who are smart, cute, and able to work hard on their own. Let's change the outline.

When I saw Chapter 90, I really wanted to run away. I thought the two heroines were well written, and at least their characters were well established. But the captain of the sentry died, and the protagonist was asked to follow his legacy and join the Great Wall. I really couldn't hold back. I told you why I didn't want to join, but I kept trying to show off my face, and as a result, a supporting character suddenly died, and the protagonist was about to join the Great Wall. It really disgusted me. Really, it's no wonder that the author's performance is tepid and he can't even make any money. I wrote 89 free chapters, and about 20 chapters were about to be released soon and I started making money. However, in the 90th chapter, there was an abrupt and extremely divisive turning point, which amplified the poison that most people can't stand. It was very exaggerated, and it was a drama that disgusted both myself and the readers.

Come to the supporting building and leave the game name or real name you want. When you need a supporting role, we will come and pick it up!

I have just finished reading the free chapters. I am also a long-time fan of Ye Zi. I have read the three chapters, including Refining Gods and Slaying Dragons, but the setting of this book is really unreasonable. First, there are so many extraordinary routes in the background. Not only are there extraordinary people in the military, but there are also hostile forces, but civilians are completely unaware of them. Is this reasonable? Second, the player is "wanted" so he cannot be exposed, but where are the local indigenous extraordinary people? Isn't it a bit nonsense that ordinary people are still surfing the Internet in Internet cafes despite being beaten to death? What's more, it was later mentioned that players also have legal household registration in this world, so the "wanted" mentioned earlier is outrageous. Third, if there are a lot of extraordinary people in a world, then the society as a whole will move closer to extraordinary people. For example, if genetic warriors fly mechas, society should have schools that specialize in training mecha pilots as reserves for genetic warriors. Moreover, in this context, the status of extraordinary people should be very high, but there is no description of this aspect at all in this book. Fourthly, the daily line does not show that the protagonist is in an extraordinary world at all. It is still the ordinary daily writing method after the previous online game novels were offline. However, this is completely inconsistent with the background setting and is very unreasonable. My current view is that Ye Zi still writes this as an online game, but ignores the impact of extraordinary abilities on society, which makes the whole book very fragmented. It affects the rationality of the whole article, and I can't stand it anymore.

If you want to write online games, then write online games well. You have to be completely different. Look at how many readers you lost after your trilogy. You are killing yourself.

Survey friends who saw Chapter V