Gou Will Be the Ancestor of Trees in the Blessed Land of the End of Dharma

This book seems to be relatively good, but it is a bit watery and the early stage is a bit unsatisfactory. The content looks very novel, and the Fudi Cave Sky and Black Disaster were the main reasons for me to read it in the early stage. I hope the author will not forget these two points later, otherwise it will feel like he is reading two books. After a comprehensive evaluation, this book is still readable, but some settings feel like they are just for this, so they appear like this. To put it simply, they are blatantly cheating.

Starting from preparing to give old man Yu a fairy fate, he finally fell into trouble for 8 chapters.

Slowly coming to my grandma's house, baby, I've watched half of it. At present, this tree can be said to be of no use for eggs.

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. I read the existing chapters in more than one day. There are no major flaws. It is worth recommending.

I will read this novel no matter what it is, and I have read it three times. I hope the author won't let others say that this work is not good, adjust your mentality, and continue writing your unfinished story.

There are too few updates. Please update quickly.

Can there be more 😍😍😍

Who is to blame for the higher the level of advancement, the harder it is to have a baby? Does it mean that men become impotent when they advance to a higher level? Aren't tadpoles more active? Do women have shields on the outside of their ovaries? ? ?

The setting is very novel, but Zulu talks too much and creates conflicts too deliberately. He kills Tiezhu and buries him in his own home. . , The roots of the tree are not destroyed and attract the moon vine

He has been forced to get promoted for various reasons, and he was marked by a bug. The top leaders of the human race also have ideas. He is almost the enemy of the whole world. Where is Gou?

After reading the first 25 chapters, I couldn't help but subscribe to one chapter and wanted to post my feelings and suggestions. It's already 25 chapters, and the plot progresses too slowly The plot can be summarized as the Yu family discovered that the protagonist sapling in the yard is a rare species. The protagonist sapling can practice cultivation, and the Yu family uses the spirit stone borrowed from the second child to assist. The protagonist is practicing, a storm comes, the three brothers enter the blessed land, and Father Yu stays to guard the little tree. The other plot that can be seen is that on the way to the blessed land, a monster attacked and lost some people Then the rest of the chapter is about the wheel of a car. The discussion and actions of several members of the Yu family took more than ten chapters in total, which may be The author wants to reflect the personality characteristics of the family members through dialogue, but without the advancement of the plot, it is too thin to rely on dialogue to establish the characters. To establish the characters, a few distinctive dialogues can reflect the characters' personalities. Too long-winded will easily make the characters have no characteristics. You can learn from how to write characters in Xuanjian The current plot volume can be reduced to half the chapters and can be completed in ten chapters I hope the author will stop talking about character ideas and dialogues later and enrich the plot The advantage is that he did not throw away a large part of the setting at the beginning, but expanded the setting according to the progress

The author wants to write about a symbiotic relationship, supporting each other, but this is not good. As a result, the protagonist runs too fast and has built his foundation. The symbiotic partner has not yet practiced Qi. It is too embarrassing.

No, I haven't lifted it up yet. I write like this every day and people are too lazy to follow it. Is it interesting to delay it like this?

Farm, recruit people to farm, continue farming, more content, author, your point of view has not changed yet.

I will reward you with a golden alliance. Can you change the Yu Zu to the Durian Zu 🙂

Don't write slowly before putting it on the shelf, and push the combat power after it is put on the shelf. This will not look good. I just like the slow pace and explain everything clearly.

Have you ever been a tree? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

The writing about the Yu family is too heavy-handed, and the protagonist has done so much for the Yu family, which makes the protagonist a nanny.

Is this book a story about the ascension of chickens and dogs? Will it continue to be carried by the first few farmers?

The plot is novel and the setting is good, but the writing is really lacking, and most importantly, how did the author manage to spend half of the chapter talking nonsense? It's so verbose! I hope I can improve in the future!

Brother, I have been reading this for a long time. I started reading it from the new book list. Now that I see it, to be honest, I feel that this book has gone from a good book to an appetizing one, and I kind of want to give up.

I saved about 100 chapters, and suddenly a message reminded me that my investment failed. There has been no update for eight days. This is a eunuch.

The book is good, but it is written too tightly. So many things happened in one year that the human race cannot grow at all. I suggest you slow down a bit and describe more side characters to enrich the characters.

There's no need to make dumplings just for a dish of vinegar. What's in your profile? Why do you want to die? Is it necessary that you are willing to die for someone when you have nothing to do?

If you want a spiritual stone, why don't you just spend ten years of your life to bear fruit? Seeing that force majeure is coming, there is no need to hide the clumsiness. Of course, I prefer that the author did not expect it. Once there is this knot, the more I see it, the less I want to read it.

Write or not?

People in the Republic of China accepted foreign ideas and fought for a sapling. Now that we have a base, Jinggangshan cannot be defended. Collect talents, knowledge and materials, farm and dig holes to store food. Like it if it feels like it😁

It's too little. I feel like I watched it too early. I couldn't stay up late even if I wanted to. I stopped watching it all at once😮‍💨

I stayed up all night to read it, Quan Ding, a good book The plot is very smooth and the characters are very three-dimensional, which is enough.

It's a pity that this book is a waste. If this book is constantly updated and not edited, it will definitely become a masterpiece. It's a pity that the author has no strong will and just gave up.