Conferring Teachings and Attaining Truth Starts from Tianpeng Disciples

Your protagonist, a disciple of the Shenxiao sect, does not recite the Thunder Jade Sutra, but instead recites the Yin Fu Sutra. Your protagonist is also taught the Northern Emperor's Principle, and claims to be a member of the Tianpeng disciple, practicing the Tianpeng method. Moreover, he also talks about black laws. The question is, do you know what the Beidi method is? Canopy Law, Fengdu Law, and Dizhi Law are all Beidi Laws. The problem is that only judges who practice Fengdu Law need to practice the Black Law. Canopy Law and Dizhi Law do not need to observe the Black Law. But if you want to practice it, you must practice Fengdu Law. Only when you have the post of Fengdu Law can you call yourself a judge. You have not practiced anything. Your protagonist is neither a judge nor Jiuquan Order. When you perform the law, you must summon the Fengdu General. Who the hell are you? Not to mention that if the protagonist you wrote was really a judge, he would have entered Tiewei Mountain a long time ago.

It's similar to Tomato's book Arctic Exorcist House, but your protagonist doesn't really care about black laws.

This genre is quite interesting, but the plot is boring and it's useless to write about it. For example, the first chapter begins with a large chapter about the protagonist's past life. You don't think this is interesting, do you? For example, in the introduction to the plot of the opening call, there is no trace even after three chapters. The introduction is obviously very well promoted, but when you look at the text, it is not the case.

The story is good, the subject matter is good, but, since the protagonist has a hangup, he shouldn't be so shocked by everything others say, he has some potential, come on

The written black laws are not followed at all. According to the world view in the book, the protagonist should be taken to the underworld for trial 🙂

It's very strange that Black Law didn't realize that the main character, a Taoist priest who claimed to be a disciple of Tianpeng, used the practice method created by Ballu to practice it. There are no precepts! Is there any other Taoist priest who uses black laws to punish evil sects and crooked ways 😅 The black laws are used to regulate the judges who practice law. From the beginning of the book until now, the protagonist does not abide by the black laws at all, and can't understand even if he copies them 😅

Although it is said that "there are a lot of articles in the world", as long as you can write your own things, you can still read them. However, if you are full of all kinds of "brainless" plots, Hei Lv should also understand that the things that are already there are all based on self-imagination and making up, and the editing is not pure enough.

People with some intelligence can't even hide. The protagonist is really sick. He knows that there is a big problem and he insists on getting involved in it. The master can pray for rain, but he has failed in such a great skill. The protagonist has only been practicing for a few days, so he has the confidence to solve it. Knowing that this is a fantasy world, we can find more capable Taoist monks to solve the problem.

The word "yin" in the Yin Fu Jing refers to the fact that the yin energy directly blinded me.

Drawing a talisman on the front foot to save people, and then a question about the effect of the house-killing talisman... The iron sword fell and I suspected that there was something wrong with the owner. I found out that the owner was my cheap master, and I also asked about the method of death... Author, do you have an outline?

According to the Black Code, the protagonist should have been destroyed long ago. The Black Code is not so lax towards the mage. Just getting close to women is enough to kill him, not to mention that the author also wrote a loser protagonist.

I saw that in Chapter 4, the protagonist rescued the child from Butcher Liu's family. This family gave money as a thank you, but the protagonist didn't want any brain circuits. What a fellow countryman, if you don't want money, what do you rely on for food? Breathe air? Drink water? I really want to ask the author. What brain circuit is it? How to write it? What logic? I can't keep up with the author's rhythm and abandon the book.

I can't do it anymore. I ran away after seeing Chapter 27 The author is selling well.

Chapter 26 is a failure, you have to think about why it was a failure.

This plot twist is stiff. I saw Chapter 25 and left.

After reading more than ten chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Even Shen Nong can't save me. How can I really write a novel without any information? Is it really the way of a Taoist priest to let others go if they want to kill you?

The protagonist is still able to accept someone else's shit in exchange for your help for decades to come. I'm really convinced...

A traditional monster-fighting and upgrading novel with the skin of being accepted into the Taoist sect Advantages: The subject matter is novel, I dare to write about the Arctic Academy, the canopy is really awesome Disadvantages: It is not worthy of the name, it is not elegant at all, if you start with a more serious chapter, you will abandon the book and leave, you don't pay much attention to the black law, why the Shenxiao sect learns the Yin Fu Jing instead of the thunder method, etc. You can still read it.

Rubbish novels, poisoning labor and capital, all kinds of flaws and unreasonable, wasting labor and capital's time

It looked interesting from the beginning, and I had the desire to read on. But after the 25th chapter, I suddenly lost the desire to read on. You are really capable, author. I am afraid that too many people will read your book. You will stop at one chapter. I don't know how many people you drove away, but I say goodbye anyway.

Mortal: Start from the game store

Is the protagonist a fool? He doesn't know anything.

Your novel is exactly the same as someone else's.

Should the author revise the previous content and slightly change the first 10 chapters?

The protagonists in other novels are either Tianzun or Taoist ancestors in the end. Why do you just beat up workers?