Stars Turn Treacherous

Martin's previous writing was quite good, and I quite liked him as the protagonist. As a result, the son of the number one pirate in the interstellar world suddenly died and appeared, taking his identity. There was no sense of substitution and it felt like a minotaur. I couldn't stand it anymore.

Each supporting character is weirder than the other. This is a company, this is a kindergarten for problem children.

So, the protagonist died in the first chapter, and I couldn't understand the rest of the content, and I didn't know how to connect it, so I looked through the table of contents to find out the name of the protagonist, and then I suddenly lost the desire to read any more. Is this the type of novel writing now?

First sprinkle with Lao Ma's spicy pepper and salt~

I am also a reader who started reading Lao Ma in 2018. I can see that Lao Ma has always liked this kind of blank space throughout the whole text, from Liu Xiaoqian to the "father" mentioned in the last chapter to Cao Shengong who stayed in the whole book and became the "Medical Saint" at the end. After so many years, Lao Ma's writing ability was much better than that of the Heroic Spirit at the beginning, but it is indeed not as energetic as the Heroic Spirit period. I have always felt that Lao Ma's writing has a quaint flavor. Several well-known names occasionally mentioned in the book will always come to you through chance encounters in the end. It's like you are in an inn, drinking wine and eating, and a hero suddenly walks in at the door. It will be boring if you talk too much. Keep writing, Lao Ma. Write what you are good at and what readers like to read. Finally, you said that Heroic Spirit did not copy Dragon Clan. You had not seen Dragon Clan at that time. I believe you because I have not seen Dragon Clan either.

Coming from Tuo Jian Xian, I think this book is really good, but why didn't I find it before? Sure enough, only those that are recognized by the public can be seen by more people. How many people are willing to spend time to discover their favorite works on their own? It seems to be almost the same for me. I only occasionally read Sanjiang or new book recommendations. In fact, there should be many good works that are still unknown now. In the end, I can only say it is a pity.

It can only be said that this cannot be called a novel. The author thinks that his independent writing style is cool and awesome, but in fact he cannot describe the story in three dimensions. I have occasionally encountered this kind of thing when I was looking for books in the past, and I was shocked. There is a master-level author doing this, and the writing style is very good, but it turns out that it is all supported by old fans and it overturns 🤭🤭

Lao Ma, Lao Ma, I came here specially to download the starting point for you 😭

The author seems to be an experienced author, the characters are very subtle and beautiful, and the development of the plot is fascinating enough; however, the data is very poor, and I personally feel that the beginning part is not handled well, the introduction of the setting is a bit hasty, and the Martin part is unbearable (although I like it more, this part seems to be more important). In fact, the author has portrayed several memorable characters in the "Security Company" group. This skill is far better than many other authors; but if you want to achieve better results, the characters may not be very likable, at least the way of expression is a bit too old. School, now many readers cannot accept that a character who seems annoying at first glance has gone through dozens or hundreds of changes. At least there is no likable character in this "security company" (some other readers said that there is a lack of female protagonists, which is essentially the problem; the easiest way to be lovable is to please the male protagonist) , Clara seems to be an attempt, but like other characters, they form a contrast to the protagonist. Today's readers may not be able to accept a protagonist who is hated most of the time (especially if there is no "cooling point"); in the end, to sum up, the book is a good book, but the readers are not good readers. There are fewer and fewer authors, and I am sad. Also, does the author have any previous books? Would you like to read them?

So I would like to ask what is the purpose of Martin's detailed expansion in the first chapter? Disgusting? ......8

Come on, author! I have nothing to say as a follow-up student, so the student party can only do its best to support it.

A very good book, much better than those assembly line jokes. Good luck, author.

Old horse! My spiritual food is not enough!

Lao Ma is the name given to the author in Pineapple Bun. His name is Rong Ma.

The first chapter was actually a good read, but it took a turn for the worse in the second chapter. The description is too unclear. Who, where, and what they did? What is the background of the story? The opening chapter is not very good. People who have preconceptions will think that the main plot is that Martin has an adventure, changes his life, and reconnects with his wife; rather than Chen Bei'er accepting a mission, going to Mars, and starting a series of plots. After all, Martin describes too much, and the characters and plot are not detailed enough.

The writing is inexplicable and incoherent. The writing seems to be okay, but there is no interesting and coherent plot.

Okay, the subject matter and style are very novel, except that it's too slow to warm up, everything else is good

Why isn't it updated?😭

So far, the whole story is still weird. Looking forward to a climax breaking point

When is the update time?😭