
Dungeon!
副本!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 110k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
44Chapters
0Votes
295Recs
3Fans
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Reader comments 4
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To be honest, it is still a good work, but it is still lacking in some aspects. For example, some language descriptions are not natural. I saw that the language of the two veterans in front did not fit their identities, and there were also swear words that were not appropriate. The previous atmosphere, action description, and detailed characterization are quite good, but one very important plot point is missing. The rest of what you write becomes about killing monsters and upgrading. I have no interest at all, so I can't stand it anymore. I don't want to read you without any plot at all. You probably also want to write some exciting works, or works that attract readers. For example, you said that you can't take off a mask after wearing it for a long time. You are too obvious. This sentence needs to be highlighted by a lot of plot. I said it with just an empty talk, and it needs to be expressed with a lot of drama. Needs to be improved.
There has been no update for two days. The author can't do it. No, you can't stop updating. I have seen many works like this. One day without update, I still have expectations, two days, I have doubts, three days, my disappointment grows, and four days, I am ready to give up. 😥 The most fearful thing is that the update will be interrupted as soon as it is put on the shelves. Of course, the author, if you stop the update before it is put on the shelves, it is still okay. 😤
Well written, brother
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