The Path to Immortality Begins with Fate

Although the beginning draws on the routine of a mortal's journey to immortality, the plot setting and foreshadowing are well laid. I hope that in the future, I can break away from the path of mortals and follow the author's own path!

I remember reading a book about incense before, and it seemed to be called Xiangzu.

It's okay at first glance, the author writes slowly

If I put it on the shelves... Will anyone subscribe 😥

Did you show AI the biography of a mortal cultivating immortality? Are all the medicines tested using chickens exactly the same?

People nowadays are unwilling to be ordinary, so they will cause trouble when they pass through the soul. I think this is a mentality problem, and this is modern contempt for the ancients, even if it fails in the end. You must be smarter when writing an Aboriginal protagonist, because Aboriginal people lack knowledge and vision, and their belief in supporting their progress is to get ahead, so it is more difficult to write an Aboriginal protagonist. The writing of this book is actually quite good, but it lacks a sense of "expectation" and I have no desire to read it. I think the fun points can cover up the poisonous points. Otherwise, there would still be so many people reading the novel with so many poisonous points. What do you think? 🙂

It's been a while since I've watched it, so I'd like to give you a monthly pass. Those who work hard should be rewarded!

The writing is really good, but not many people read it? ? !

Write well, I have already voted for you 4 double monthly votes, don't be like the Green Turtle!

The writing is pretty good, and I'm still a little motivated to vote for monthly votes and recommendation votes. Keep it up, it just needs to be updated better.