Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: Starting with Summoning Jingliu

Ah? Do you also help people like Ma Xiaotao? Author, don't tell me that she is also the heroine.

Instead of spending so much words describing the Soul Fighting Competition in Dou Er, it would be better to use the same number of words to describe Dou Yitai Tang San.

Don't be Shrek and Huo Yuhao's bitch

The protagonist is also a hypocrite, and this is the necessary price to pay for his reputation. Just like Lai Gushi, he said he wanted to upgrade the world, but he didn't do it to gain the power of reality. He did it to Tang San, but he didn't do it to snatch the world from his hands. When a disaster occurs, it is the disaster that kills you, not me! But you can save me! It's because he can't be saved, or he's incapable of saving it. It only creates tragedy, but it actually saves us!

After reading more than ten chapters, I felt that the author wrote too hastily and summoned characters too frequently. The appearance of the original characters is also quite magical. You go from the seaside city to the forest, from the Star Luo Imperial City to the forest, and from the academy to the forest. You said that the Star Dou Forest is quite big. You guys enter from different places. You should not encounter each other. The plot you arranged here, including the later ones, is quite intellectual. There is no need to contact the original plot characters in the early stage. You are already the city lord at the beginning. Just develop yourself honestly. Reasonable plot contact can still be watched. Why do you need to write a lord story if you just want to participate in the plot?

It's so bad. I recruited a bunch of second-game characters with unknown meanings. It's obviously Dou Er's book. If I don't write the main plot of the third game well, I'm going to fix the Holy Grail War and Dou 1😅

Some of the current Douluo novels lick Tang San like a dog and torture Tang San's stallion

It's over after you finish watching the chicken, and then there's a mess. He forcibly created two enemies for himself, and asked the Black Tower to come out to analyze why he wanted to unite the entire civilization. The unity of two extermination kings would be very fast, otherwise it would take more than ten or twenty years. Why don't you live that long? It's disgusting that thousands of boneless people died for your solidarity.

Since the protagonist respects Ma Xiaotao's choice, then don't save people afterwards, because it is her own choice. At least she should be punished for exhausting her potential due to over-burning her vitality and then being punished for being the messenger of death and failing the competition (in the original work, winning the competition only offsets the merits and demerits, and is not recorded in the file)

This Holy Grail War is all about a bowl of vinegar and a plate of dumplings, and then it overturns. The protagonist has no role at all. The reason why the defense is not broken is that the author does not write about him breaking the defense.