The Focalors Familia Begins in DanMachi

The first one I have read the most, with nearly 300 chapters, and a fan value of 3,770. Summon a black tower. The black tower in your writing can be limited by materials. Silkskar, who was born a spider, a spider that lived for 29 days, the creator of phase spirit fire and phase transformation technology, has accelerated the development of the entire spider civilization for thousands of years. People with such conditions You will not be limited by materials, but your black tower will be limited by materials, but I didn't say anything at that time. After all, I am a Douluo fan. If you really write two or three chapters like this, it will be over. This is the one I remember the most, and other problematic details are forgotten The second book, I didn't see the charge, the protagonist's time martial soul can absorb any soul ring They all automatically change their time attributes, and they dare not expose their time attributes for fear of being too shocking. The original Tiansha Lone Star martial spirit can kill relatives and friends. The soul-breaking gun comes with a ten-thousand-year soul ring. Any soul ring absorbed by Jiuxin Begonia is healing and has only one soul skill and can only be passed down to one person. The ghostly martial soul is resurrected from the dead to form a martial soul. Tang Yuehua's jade ring is born naturally. You can't practice with a domain. In the third part, there will be a fallen angel martial spirit with nine rings that can open the door to the plane. Except for the rare time attribute, your martial spirit currently has nothing worthy of being called shocking. Even the original Dou Er has a time-based martial spirit called Cao Jinxuan, so where is the shocking? The third book, the first detail is about the rare skill of the protagonist, which brings out a bunch of monsters in the memory. In less than a day, the Adventurers Association already knows that the monster is called Qiuqiu man, and the recycled material is called Qiuqiu mask. I just think of this as an identification skill. The second detail is in Chapter 36. The protagonist and his party are surrounded by a group of Qiuqiu people, and the Qiuqiu people shout "Qiuqiu" to the protagonist. , I really can't stand it. When you play the first three maps of Genshin Impact, Mond Liyue Rice Wife, none of them can avoid the Qiuqiu people. Except for Yunwan, I can't think of anyone who has played the game who can tell that the Qiuqiu people call "Qiuqiu". It's invincible The idea is quite good, otherwise I wouldn't click in every time, but I can't see any improvement in your writing level and detail processing 😅

After being summoned by the protagonist, whether it is Funina, Robin, or Tifa, I feel that they are all 3D customized high-end leather-covered people, or other creatures with the appearance and names of these characters that I am initially very fond of.

The impact of the protagonist's talent on the maze is not limited to everyone. The monsters he defeated have already been earned by others. Even the holy relics can be used by others, which is really a bit unpleasant.

This author has an old problem. The settings and everything are very novel, but he just likes to be a monster. The early stage is fine, but in the middle and late stages of writing, he likes to add a lot of miscellaneous things. The first book is a bullshit Holy Grail War. This one also has a son's earth line and is conscious. Forget it, a puppet of the protagonist appears and kills only a few main members of the Loki Familia. What is this outrageous writing trying to express?

The plot after the appearance of the young master is inexplicable, and there is also a plot where a clone of the protagonist kills all the Loki family members except the main character, what is the plot like with your butt?

Just like the title, Young Master and Otta can't beat the capable Otta with their skills. The protagonist's clone is more powerful than the protagonist. The protagonist has all the magic skills in the clone, and is even better than the protagonist in terms of skills. And our protagonist is invisible in these ten chapters while serving as a camera and doing commentary while watching his teammates fiercely kill him because of lack of information. The protagonist is too strong. 😅

Robin

I hope this book of yours can be compared to the book "It's a Wrong Place, Starting from Picking Up an Elf Girl". After all, you can write dramas well, but don't use it as a camera. When recruiting girls, you need to look for those with big breasts, and don't have too many female characters.

Chapter 264 begins with the story about the Loki Familia, fighting with the young master who suddenly appears, and for how many chapters, what does it mean that a clone that imitates the protagonist appears during the fight? If the protagonist dies in the dungeon, he will imitate...

It's really hard to see that the latest chapter actually has a monster called Tide. Does the author really not understand how ruthless the fight between the two sides is? The title of your book is based on Genshin Impact and then you add Mingchao content into it. Do you want to get traffic from both sides, right? I hope you don't screw yourself up 😅