Have I Become a Villain Who Quits the Team?

When I see the introduction and title of this book, I subconsciously think that this is a standard toilet paper. The logic of the first chapter is also a bit criticized, such as the protagonist's thoughts on quitting the team and his teammates. But after reading it, you will have another experience - this is a very traditional fantasy novel in terms of character creation, but well written. The author's character creation and the outline of the plot development are basically in the traditional Japanese fantasy style. The plot of rushing to the Demon King's Castle shouting about companions and friendship can be said to be a very traditional light novel. But in terms of specific writing, although it is a traditional light novel routine, the author uses a very natural and mature writing style to express his own feelings. Tell ordinary stories well, and use clichéd character settings to portray personality and charm, making readers deeply attracted by the story. This novel does a good job in this regard, so that even though it is a clichéd story, it can still make people feel as touching as reading a light novel for the first time. ——————A digression from my personal feelings—————— In Qidian, I have read many successful evil novels, including street gangsters, poisonous people, vicious immortals, and murderous ghosts. Even some novels that had patriotic gimmicks but failed to control the pacing in the later stage could still be praised as classics, as well as the piles of rubbish in the author's circle. It really made people feel a little tired. One book after another with great success, but I was really tired of reading it. I don't know when, due to various ingenious evil ways and vulgar "original" plots, there has been a tendency to become mainstream in online articles. There are so many imitators, and it is even vaguely painful to watch them. What's even more disgusting is that in the early stages of this kind of work, the creation rhythm is good, the characterization is excellent, and the writing is online. In the middle and late stages, the rhythm is chaotic and can only be described as weird. The characters are flat and the sensationalism is forced. They all rely on the prepared outline and gimmicks to force the writing, as if the previous work was ghostwritten. In such a reading environment where demons dance and ghosts roam the night, it is really gratifying to suddenly see such a traditional and excellent fantasy light novel. In addition to being happy, I can't help but want to change my taste occasionally. If you are an old bookworm who has lost your taste in reading due to the various wonderful novels in recent years, then this book may help you regain the touch of reading light novels in the first place. As long as the author's updated level is always online, then this book is very good... This word is a bit unlucky, let's use another word. Then this book has the potential to become a mainstay of light novels. As long as the author persists in writing and maintains his level of concentration, it is not impossible to write a work like Crazy Lich in the future. Unfortunately, this book is updated too slowly. The most suitable way to read this kind of light novel is to read it in one go. It is foreseeable that this book will probably have many readers who are interested in reading. I hope the author will not be raised to death... Well, probably.

How can I put it, there is no bright spot to support me in reading

He died of poisonous hair. The first is the book title fraud. The quitting stream only deceives people into it at the beginning, but the rest has nothing to do with the quitting stream. The elf part is just a piece of dog food, and in all likelihood, the author himself turned blue. An inexplicable future fantasy, an inexplicable protagonist and an elf falling in love, a pure otaku fantasy. Now that the elf is gone, it will be much better to get the plot back on track. The connection plot of the Saint in the back is even more outrageous. Who is this thief? He looks down on the protagonist so much. It is clear that the protagonist just killed a legendary baby some time ago, and the church also announced the protagonist's record to the whole country. How dare this thief carry out such a disgusting frame-up against the protagonist? I originally thought it was just a simple intra-team fight, and it was reasonable for the protagonist to be hated by the saint. The result is that the protagonist will be completely discredited and completely socialized. It is completely impossible to understand how this thief dares. As a result, before the protagonist could take revenge, he cut off several fingers. After finishing the matter, he continued to follow the saint without hesitation, pouting with a disapproving face as if he was very sigma to the saint, but in fact he would not refuse the saint's request at all. In short, there are many poisonous points. The author obviously starts writing when he has a few good ideas, but his own level is not enough to control a complete long story.

Wouldn't it be if you quit the team yourself?

Don't believe those who praise you. This book tries to contain some meaning but it's quite confusing.

I haven't read it yet, but after reading the comment section I found a question. Isn't the introduction contradictory? What does your future death have to do with the new player with high potential who joins the team? First of all, it is known that in the future he will die due to the Demon King's combat power, and the Demon King must be beaten to join a new player with high potential, then the normal idea is not to work hard and help the newcomer grow quickly? And if you are not the Demon King who has to fight, then it doesn't matter to the newcomer, right? Wouldn't it be better to just avoid the Demon King later? I haven't read the book yet, but after reading the introduction, I found that it is completely contradictory. If you change the content to see that you will die at the hands of this super-potential newcomer who has just joined the team, it would make sense.

New book friends, please be careful. After it was put on the shelves, an elf appeared out of nowhere, and then he went to travel through time and write about the future. I even doubted whether the AI ​​generated the outline before and after it was wrong. I spent a few dollars and treated it as a lesson and didn't listen to the previous book friends. Difficult to stretch

A little annoying. This kind of bard should be killed.

There are so many male supporting characters, I have no desire to click on them.

Because the precognitive demon has the ability to predict, people with precognitive abilities are wanted. What I see now is like this, but in fact the ability is like a sword. Because the person who owns the sword betrayed, everyone who owns the sword will be wanted. It feels very baffling. Is the precognitive demon the only one who betrayed mankind? Are those who possess the abilities of other traitors also wanted? I hope the author will explain it later.

As you can see from the introduction, aren't all the people who quit the team except for the ones who were dropped from the team, all women?🙂🙂🙂

I think the setting can be changed not to try to take advantage of the popularity of quitting the team, but to be similar to how the male protagonist changes the death flag of the big brother in some brave stories. The plot can be smoother, and the main storyline is that if the devil is really the absolute villain, no matter what, he will still have to face it in the end.

How come you are suffering from Wen Qing's disease? Is it fun to come up with these plottraps?

? It was fine at the beginning, but when I saw the protagonist kill the orc team alone in the third chapter, I was persuaded to quit. Let's not talk about how much you want to blame the protagonist. If the protagonist is so awesome, why would he form an adventure group and be a babysitter when he has nothing to do? ?

Feed Shi before putting it on the shelves, you really are the author, a good mood starts with Akashi 🙂

The most uncomfortable thing about this section before it was released was the description of new parents. Maybe the author wanted to write a "transformation story of a small citizen" like in the famous novel, but before this part of the plot, the author did not describe the new parents in detail at all. It throws out a "silent father" and a "mother who suddenly threatens suicide" very suddenly. The characters presented are very confusing, just like a human-machine written by AI. The emotional changes are illogical and cannot enter the story at all. I just feel irritated.

The male protagonist's ability is a bit like the Brave of the South in King Furong. He is powerful and has predictions. After his powerful abilities are advanced in the later stages, he can become stronger alone and plot with another prophet.

I'm so confused. The author clearly wrote something very interesting before. Why did he write a fantasy so abruptly? Moreover, this kind of reader can see a copy of the fantasy at a glance. It's boring to write it for such a long time. Everyone knows it's fake and I don't even bother to read it carefully.

This is a new book for newcomers. Is there a brave captain or newcomer Al or some other oriental youth name? You can just write the name of the protagonist. Isn't it nonsense to write like this?

Resurrection, my teacher Wanggui😭😭

A two-month pass for 700,000 words. I don't believe you when you say this is a niche novel... I can read it before it goes on the shelves. This book is probably dead.

If you don't want a talented newcomer, wouldn't it be better to just recommend it to a stronger team? The character has to kick people out as if they were being demoted. In order to promote the logic of the plot, nothing is needed to set up characters.

Thank you Shennong, my run was a great success.