
Fulian: Become a Disciple of Celie at the Beginning
芙莉莲:开局拜师赛丽艾
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 821k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 12d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
60Monthly votes
45.2kRecommends
119.6kFans
262Chapters
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All Kinds of Spiritual Two-Dimensional Fans
Mainly recommending various fanfics, mainly One Piece, Pokémon, and Naruto, but also others. What's important is that it's interesting enough.
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Daily Life, Fun, Group Portrait
I have included some books that I have read and thought were good. If you ask me if this book is not good, then I can only say that I thought this book was quite good at the time. As for whether it will be good in the future, that is not up to me.
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There Are Many Books to Read
Recommend some books that I want to read. There won't be any books with poor writing.
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Very well written
The rhythm of the book is just like the rhythm of the comic, bland but with a hint of main plot advancement. There is a saying that Fulian is not suitable for writing fics because the main plot is relatively short and mostly consists of interludes of memories and branch plots. Therefore, if the author wants to write it well, he still has to create some new branch plots. Only after writing the branch plots can he have the motivation to continue reading. Here I recommend a writing method like Jasmine's, which not only strengthens the strength but also introduces some new maps and new stories. Writing this type of story requires the author to control the rhythm. If it is written well, it will not be boring. I hope the author will work hard to create a masterpiece
What? Someone will be replaced later. No need to read it. This book is useless.
What do these newly updated chapters have to do with the title of the work?
Reminder
Today's Book Friends Circle is corrupt and full of traitors. This is due to insufficient updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? Qidian is strong because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop updating, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can earn tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference! There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and there are six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when people perform affairs, their words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who rarely update, delay updates, or are late to update have no time to feel sad about themselves, so they are drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors feel sad and do not learn from it, and future authors feel sad about it. In ancient times, there were half a hundred old women who spent several years polishing the iron pillars every day until they finally turned into needles. It is said that there was a bird spirit who spent his whole life just holding branches to fill the sea. Everyone who saw this article liked it, and everyone who read it said good things about it. Now that laziness has become a disease, can it be said to be reasonable? With only one or two chapters, can it be said to be wise? Is it allowed to have free time without thinking about updates? Sad husband, how cunning can the author's scheme be? It just adds to the jokes.
Feed three times in a row💩
1. After Simmel got off the bus, a middle-aged nobleman appeared out of nowhere and attempted to accost Sellie. He was so angry that he wanted to take revenge. Can you use your cerebellum to think about how you could afford to offend someone with such strong magic power fluctuations in the same car as Simmel? 2. An old beggar who tried to rape an aristocratic girl was beaten up by the male protagonist and dared to report it to the patrol team 3. How did the male protagonist feel when he saw the elder brother of the aristocratic girl whose body was picked up and went to take revenge on the old beggar, "ignoring the discomfort of acting wantonly under public power" It was really disgusting every time.
This book shouldn't lead to a harem, right?
I feel that it is really inappropriate to open a harem in this worldview🤔 There seems to be no harem characters in the original work Okay, I show my hand, I just want to watch a single girl😭 I just ask, if it is not a single female lead, I will go on my own, and I will not argue with the harem gang.
It's a bit boring. I haven't seen any improvement in the main character in such a long time. When I see Sai Liai, I have wretched eyes, ice cream, and self-professed affectionate confessions. It's good to occasionally write these things as a diversion, but if I use them all the time, they become stinky and long-lasting. The imp NPC appeared inexplicably, and in the later stages, Goldfinger became increasingly invisible. The protagonist, apart from cooking and watching ice cream, only asked Celie what to do. It felt like there was no difference if he was replaced by Zhu Bajie. Describe something about learning magic. Even if it is not magic to increase your strength, you can learn something from Celie based on what you see and hear. The protagonist may have learned something during this period, but you haven't described it or mentioned it at all, so you can't show it at all. The update is not stable yet, so give up as soon as possible to let readers out of the fire pit.
Are you doing obedience training? Can you train a group of obedient readers? Filter readers?
The master will be assassinated
The manga master will be killed, and I don't even know who did it. If the offline method is unreasonable, I declare that this will be Juju Kaisen No. 2
This book feels wrong after being updated.
Has the author changed? After the update, the overall feeling is weird. The original strategy of Ten Thousand Years Old Dengchong Master Rebellious Disciple suddenly shifted to the internal fighting in the empire and the purification of the Holy Church. The performance is that the system has disappeared. In the past, the protagonist would glance at the entry when he saw someone. Now there are so many new missions that he has not seen a single entry. The daily kindness disappears, as does daily exercise. As if to make a break from the previous plot, none of the old characters appear or are mentioned. It gives me the feeling that newcomers can't write like the experienced author, so I might as well start over from scratch.
The pigeons are silent, the pigeons are shorter, and there are piles of excuses, which are signs of eunuchs.
Post a few fanart pictures, many of them are too big to be posted.
It's too watery. I have no idea what the author is writing about.
After reading 30 chapters, there is no main plot, it is all daily life, and there is still no daily activity. I write repeatedly, get up, find a teacher, wait for the assessment of students, study, eat. I have written 30 chapters and there is no progress in the emotional line with the heroine. It is too watery. It is better to read the original novel.
The extra chapter was a bit confusing. I had never watched Fulilian. After reading the two major extra chapters, I realized that it was about another disciple. It was originally for the protagonist (male and female), but in the end, I didn't get the two big chapters 😐
Suppressing combat power
I'm so embarrassed in this battle, I gave this system to me, and my operation is really better than the protagonist's. It's really a failure. The most taboo thing in novels is to make readers feel "I'm good at it." This means that the protagonist's operation is too bad.
The new light novel book deserves the title of No. 1
Why are there so many formulas and intellectual texts nowadays? In particular, simultaneous time travel has been criticized. Fanfiction is hopeless.
Saeliai Source: TAO
Damn it, I think I'm apprenticed to Sai Wen
Okay, it's almost time to leave. I just squeezed out the toothpaste updates before, and then I have to ask for leave. I will ask for leave until the 18th. After four days, I will start reading in half. Before, I was just squeezing out toothpaste. Can he continue writing after cutting in half?
So can you cut books? 😅 This update is also unstable. If we want to cut it off, let's talk about it as soon as possible and let's leave as soon as possible.
Seriai
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In this updated state, the author couldn't be an elf, right?
This author is like Schrödinger's cat. If you don't look at him, he may live, but if you look at him, he may die.
Don't stop updating
😓
A good hand was beaten to pieces by the author, it's amazing 🤭
Send three more
Depend on! Who will steal my first update, meow? !
What kind of fairy?
Although, I am somewhat sexually repressed
What is the meaning of this paragraph that suddenly appeared in front of me?
It was stable for a few days and then stopped. No, buddy, are you a genie in your schedule?
I couldn't stand it anymore. I thought I was dead after two months of interruption, but I didn't expect that I was alive again.