Under One Person: the Supreme Lord Returns the Pill

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author just wrote it for himself. The knowledge points of various Chinese medicine literature are too low for ordinary readers and boring. It also increases the reading threshold and has the reputation of "Under One Person". It is better to open an urban medical text and add some special functions. Otherwise, there is no need to write "Under One Person". It is too slow to enter the plot. In addition, the text is boring and the paragraphs are too long. Not many people are willing to read it. This is an online text, not traditional literature.

It feels a bit strange to change the eight magical skills to nine magical skills. Setting Taishang Huandan as one of the magical skills is not as good as setting it to have a magical effect in the hands of a specific person. After all, the thirty-six thieves do not all know the Eight Magic Skills, and the Heavenly Master is the best in the world without relying on the Eight Magic Skills. Although the eight gates of Qi Ti Origin, Daluo Cave, Liuku Immortal Thief, Divine Machine Hundred Refiners, Fenghou Qimen, Julingshuangjiang, Shuangshou, and Tongtianlu include refining weapons, talismans, Qimen, summoning spirits, spells, body refining, and life, only Daluo Cave is unknown. It is true that there is a lack of alchemy among traditional arts (dog head save life. Jpg)

It's just a throwback, it's well-written, and suddenly there are a lot of supporting characters. Even if others write supporting characters, they are because they have already interacted with the protagonist or they are introduced in a short space, but they are still related to the protagonist! ! ! What is the relationship between your Wang Ye Xue Feng and the protagonist? ?

This introduction makes me laugh out loud 😆

The author himself said in the comment area that he is not very good at writing. The eunuch is just around the corner.

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After reading a few chapters, I can't understand what is written.

Everyone can imagine the shortcomings of the indigenous protagonist.

I like to watch the protagonist who has the ability and doesn't have to endure the hardship.

Are there any today? Or tomorrow?

The unstable updates look so uncomfortable!

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Are there any more tomorrow? Or the day after tomorrow?

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