
Douluo: as Soon as the Piano Sounds, the Hidden Weapon Returns to the Factory
斗罗:琴声一响,暗器返厂
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- Completed
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- 800k Words
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- Male
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- Eastern Xuanhuan
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- 10mo ago
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- Qidian
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Not to mention anything else, just based on the three words Fu Xiqin, level 4 innate soul power is a bit inappropriate, right?
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Thanks to the appreciation of all the viewers, I am able to make a living here. I have read all your recommendations and messages. The most talked about is the number of updates. There is really nothing I can do about it. I am a part-time writer. I have to work normally during the day. I can only update you after get off work. In order to make the viewing experience better for the viewers, I basically control the chapter to more than 4,000 words. I will update it basically every day after dinner. If I have free time, I will add updates to the viewers from time to time. Thank you to the audience for their support.
Can you change the word "boy" in the article, such as "junior generation", "junior generation", etc.? The whole sentence of your sentence "boy" will be ruined.
The introduction said to take it all, but it turns out that Dugu Yan is already with Yu Tianheng. If you want to increase your soul power for others, do you have to raise a woman for others?
The finger stirs up the waves and the world is shocked. I have been playing the zither for hundreds of years. I have cleared my life. Why bother to pick up the string and listen to who? With my head held high for thousands of miles, there is no one in the country.
Fuxi Qin's role is to destroy all the hidden weapons in the world? Fuxi: "I have never been so low."
Is it necessary for Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong to reconcile?
In terms of kindness, apart from the gift of childbirth, Bibi Dong only hurt Qian Renxue From the perspective of Bibi Dong's own experience, Bibi Dong's suffering cannot be said to be deserved, it can only be said that the thunder is louder than the raindrops. If Bibi Dong defeated Tang San, got together with Yu Xiaogang, and had children, would Bibi Dong take the initiative to reconcile with Qian Renxue? She has won everything, so does Qian Renxue, a wicked woman, still need to exist? From Bibi Dong's point of view and her temperament as a ruthless and crazy woman, no, Qian Renxue must disappear. Then why, after Qian Renxue won, she had to become a white-eyed wolf instead of avenging her father's murder because of the gift of childbirth? If you don't kill her with your own hands, just sparing her life will be considered worthy of her gift of giving birth.
Open high and go low
The first part of the writing was okay, but the later part was a mess when it came to the relationship. The protagonist is only 14 years old, after all, he deserves to be in Loveland 😜
What did the author think? He wrote it all in the introduction, and made the relationship between Xiao Wu and Tang San as good as in the original work, and made Dugu Yan and Yu Tianheng a couple. Tang San Xiao Wu could barely bear it. After all, they were young, and the two did not have a relationship until the end of the original work. Yes, they only kissed in the middle and late stages. I really couldn't bear it when Dugu Yan said that Yu Tianheng was her man openly and honestly. Should the protagonist accept her or not? If not, she would become an enemy in the future. If she accepted, what would the protagonist become? A torn shoe picker?
Is this cultivation speed unreasonable?
Awakening his martial soul at the age of 6, he has innate level 4 soul power, rising to level 10 in one year. As a result, it was written that it took 5 years to reach level 26. Are you serious, author? Is it necessary to press down so hard? From level 6 in one year, he was directly pushed to level 3 in one year, and his cultivation speed was cut in half!
When your martial spirit exists specifically to restrain hidden weapons, then the level of this book can be imagined. Who of the serious time travelers would take Tang San seriously and still need to target him?
Don't write about Qian Renxue, she was upset and still controlled by others. Your writing about Xiao Wu and Ning Rongrong is better than this one. I don't want to subscribe to the recent ones.
The author has written this book very well, and the previous one was extremely powerful, and he did a good job in the early stages. The back is rotten into a piece of shit, and he gives away the girl. Numb.
Weird, this is my evaluation of this book. It's like a fairy tale in Douluo's skin. The conversations between the characters are very elaborate. It's not that the writing is not good, but it's not like Douluo.
I want to see how to practice and fight monsters, upgrade and beat people. I don't want to fall in love. Are you so in need of love? Lack of love even more than Tang San
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It's a bit rubbish. The martial arts is written so well, but the main character turns out to be a brainless person. He is so disgusting that he has a swishy astronomical swish every day. There is a heart in it, but he is as gentle and tender as a dead virgin. It is simply a brainless person. It is really disgusting.
Ah, I thought Emperor Qin came to Douluo
Liu Erlong, Tang San's aunt, when will Bo Saixi take over? Receive a reward of one hundred, and put up a post as proof.
Dai Mubai is right, the male protagonist is a hypocrite
Okay, okay, I've read the latest one, and found a good Douluo fanfic. The writing is pretty good, the route selection is pretty good, the pace is moderate, and it won't be too fast. The protagonist is of course very strong, but I still have to give it to Dugu Bo and Dugu Yan later to make up for the fairy grass, otherwise It's always a bit uncomfortable, I just give it when I have to give it to them, I've eaten them so much and given it to them, the stronger they are, the better. I still remember all the introductions. The progress is also good, I don't want to be fast, I just want to collect most of them slowly and reasonably. Come on, author, it's pretty good, I really like it.
She always has long slender fingers, a gentle smile, and warm eyes. The writing is full of the astringency of literary youth, but the style of writing is that of more than ten years ago. The protagonist has a warm and masculine image, and he often talks to himself. Did the author travel back in time from 10 years ago?
I understand everything. . .
Chapter 30 is available. . . Industrialization novel😒
It felt fine in the early stage, why did it go directly to the harem in the later stage??? And Qian Renxue is the kind of queen
I thought it was Fuxi Shen Tianxiang and Qin Sheng Yu Qingjue
"The pupils are shrunken, and there is a faint smile at the corner of the mouth" 😵😵
This way of writing makes people have a headache. . . When you are halfway through your speech, you have to add an action to hold the cup in the middle before starting the second half of your speech? It's understandable if it comes suddenly. . The key is this in every sentence. . . . Occasionally, it's called cupping, and every time I say it, it's just a bad brain.
I personally think it's better to have a single female protagonist
Is it really a full collection? It can't be achieved by taking over orders, right?
Is there no one complaining about this level? Da Shi said that people with innate soul power of 4 can be upgraded to level 8 at the highest. In one year, level 4 will have full innate soul power. Six years to level 10 from level 1 and level 2 are considered good, and it takes about a year to reach level 1. Innate 3 and 4 are between 1.5 And 2 levels, and reach level 10 in about three to five years. It takes about two years for those born with 5 and 6 to reach level 10, and about level 2 in one year. If you are born with a talent of 7 or 8, it will be around level 2.5-3 Per year. Level 9 is about 3-3.5. The full innate soul power will be around level 3.5-4 In one year. The Ning family said that you were an innate genius of level 5 or 6 when you reached level 10. This is more than just a genius. You can be considered a genius among geniuses at level 5 or 6. Can you be more rigorous with your upgrade?
Author, do you want to write about your next book? Douluo I make up the future. A light screen goes on top, and then you make up the future and the past in the dark. Then realize the future and the past in the present. You can also make up some inheritance secret realms and trial secret realms. You can also make a clone while saying something, and then reveal his future on the light screen, or travel to other worlds and then come back. You can also make up some. After 2000, the master of the Noumenon Sect created a impeccable golden body and various combat skills. Then create a heritage space, and everyone will compete for this heritage. I also want to spoil the future, a 72-pillar demon god will come to Douluo Continent directly. Then the Eternal Throne came, and someone imitated the Eternal Throne and built other thrones. The system of cultivation in this world was broken, and the divine realm was swept away by the turbulence of time and space. Then a large number of clones were divided, and eight demon saints appeared in the soul beast clan. Six Saint Kings appeared in the human race, and 72 demon gods appeared in the demon race.