I Ask for Immortality with the Heart of the Sword

It's very well written, keep at it, it will definitely take off.

I feel that the future plots will become more and more urgent as I write them, and I have also consulted the old author Wanding for advice. I believe everyone can also feel that the development of the entire story is becoming more and more routine. As I write further down, I feel that everyone will know the follow-up content just by reading the title. The main problem is actually that before each part is explained clearly, it has already jumped to the next part. The more questions and loopholes accumulate, the more unclear it becomes. The sense of substitution has already collapsed before it is established. In fact, I can feel that I have been reading less and less every day recently. The plot of the immortal sermon should be 400,000 to 500,000 words later, and it was pulled out to complete the world view. Because the data was too poor, I took it upon myself to mention it earlier, so it seemed very abrupt. Several friends said before that I am suitable for the style of telling stories in a eloquent way, but the problem now is that the writing is getting more and more messy. There is a sentence in Chapter 7 that sticks in my mind. The setting sun burns the glow red. I struggled for a long time on which word to use, and finally settled on "burn". After writing 150,000 words, I slowly realized that the words used for details are not unimportant. What is important is whether the story is attractive enough. Telling a complete story is the most important. But now that I'm writing it, I'm just formulating the "structure" of each story quickly, but the most important story itself is unclear and confusing, so I'm putting the cart before the horse. In fact, I have written almost 150,000 words now, and I will write another 50,000 words before it can be published on Qiaquanqin. But that would be putting the cart before the horse. I originally came here to tell a good story. This is my first time writing a long novel, and I have encountered many pitfalls. I should review it carefully. I am going to revise and sort out the outline and previous content of this book, and adjust the rhythm. Currently, it is also a free chapter, so I will not list it to deceive people. That's it~ Thank you all for seeing this, I'm really sorry.

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