The Tokyo Girls Have Serious Problems

After putting it down, I had no desire to continue watching. The plot was terrible, and the characters were even worse. Of all the characters, which one was well-developed? The male lead is a hypocrite, a complete pampered rich kid. He's so narcissistic and self-important that he's utterly unappealing.

First, stack a shell, as shown in the picture. Your writing is absolutely terrible. I rarely say this harshly, I didn't mention the witch or the mental hospital, but I really can't stand this one. Who can stand reading a book of garbage every year? The whole book felt like it was written haphazardly, with no outline whatsoever!

What kind of garbage is this new chapter you wrote? You set up the characters as a cold, arrogant young lady, but the only thing the male lead can't see is the male lead, everyone else can? And the male lead even promises he won't come to see it at 3 PM! Why didn't you write it in more detail?

I've already read these chapters three times. Aside from the cheesy, poorly written, and overly sentimental battle scenes that rely on a thesis defense, Crow's writing in Japanese light novels is a complete game-changer. Other authors' work is simply unreadable in comparison. Seriously, stop writing your crappy battle scenes.

Let me show you an outrageous green-haired turtle; even Tokyo girls weren't spared.

The male lead, four female leads, and several female supporting characters are all flawed in their own way. The arc and character development have become even more broken than the Elden Ring after a long and repeated tug-of-war. The male protagonist is timid and eccentric, afraid to take initiative, terrified of responsibility, with vulgar thoughts and abstract behavior.

Daily Prayer: She is the most special, she is above all else, my God, Kiyono Rin

1. See above love: I initially liked "Love at First Sight" because of her aloof and cool character, but then the author made a brilliant mistake and turned her into a clown. Now I want to bring it up again. I've only ever heard of the "suppress first, then elevate" writing style (it's always good when a prostitute reforms or a prodigal son returns), but the description of Jian Shang Ai is clearly…

You're good at writing books, so why insist on writing about fighting or teenage romance? That's just where you're naturally inclined. 🤔

Has their strength regressed by five years? Interesting.