Douluo: Mortal from Blue Silver Grass

After reading the free chapters, I subscribed to less than ten chapters. Let me briefly describe my views. The biggest feeling is that the author can't grasp the key points. The language cannot be said to be concise enough, it can only be said to be crazy. For example, there is a chapter in the front where he invites people to have a meal together to study soul skills. Then he describes what the elders put on the dining table looks and tastes like, and then writes about how the people look and feel. Finally, towards the end, he only clicks twice on the question, which is an invitation to study soul skills, and then disappears after clicking it. The focus is very biased. The second biggest feeling is that the author is writing. In short, he piles up the words first, and then writes about what is and is not (describing what concentration, eating, mood, the hard work of picking and collecting medicines, the appearance of clothes, how handsome the equipment looks, etc. Etc.) Collect the number of words together, and then describe the main theme of the essay (what exactly does this chapter do), add a little bit of inheritance and cooperation, and it becomes a collaborative essay. Even looking back at the previous chapters, I feel that it is a bit of a thesis. It is first-rate for exams but not like a novel, which is very strange. The third biggest problem is that the priorities of the characters are not clear, and a lot of ink will be spent on the supporting roles and even the supporting roles. However, unlike the group portrait, the character appears repeatedly and has a role. Instead, the character disappears after writing this paragraph about him. Important characters such as A Yin were not seen for a long time after his first appearance. However, based on the previous inference made by our readers, A Yin went to the village where the protagonist is located, which is very counter-intuitive. The last point is that the main plot is not promoted. The author may feel that each paragraph of the description is a fragment of the protagonist's development and progress. However, as a reader, I think that I used a lot of pen and ink to write about the branch skills that the protagonist clicked and then tried it and evaluated it. It is indeed good. It is not that I shouldn't write these things. I can only say that it is not worthy of so many descriptions. In short, the author is a newbie writing a book, and there is a lot of room for improvement. Maybe he will write better in the future, but for now I personally want to put it on the bookshelf first to see if the author will reset the previous chapters when his writing becomes more mature. In short, the seedling has been raised (˘ㅂ˘)

I thought that the female supporting characters in the role column were all the harems of the protagonist, but it turned out that you really played a single female protagonist. There is no harem in Douluo Continent. You are really a breath of fresh air. I am really convinced.

Wolf Thief, a species that combines soul beasts and humans in the original work, can explode soul bones, and its appearance is very similar to Catwoman. It can be approximated as an incomplete awakening of the martial soul. A second setting can be made so that he can absorb soul rings and soul bones. In this way, there will be a situation where there is no bottleneck. The soul beast has no other bottleneck except the 100,000-year catastrophe. In other words, Wolf Thief can keep practicing without losing levels. For example, he has a soul ring but a soul power of 70. And because it is a soul beast, after one hundred thousand years of cultivation, you can choose to be reincarnated and cultivate again, and live a second life. Wolf Thief is both a spirit beast and a human being. In Dou 2, both human spirit beasts can enjoy the luck of the other. It feels like a weird t1 mechanism.

First, there are no useless martial spirits, only useless soul masters. This sentence is combined with the context. The premise of Yu Xiaogang's words at that time was that he already knew that Tang San was a twin martial spirit, and Tang San was only a few years old. What he said was equivalent to telling a child that anyone worse than you in the future will be useless. Is this what he meant? Tang San's Clear Sky Hammer was born with full soul power. There are a few talents on the mainland who can match him. Don't others work hard enough? You're just talking nonsense! Secondly, he shouldn't have chosen Tang San as the person to prove himself, because Tang San has the Clear Sky Hammer martial spirit and his innate soul power is at full level. He doesn't need too much hard work to achieve great achievements. If he had to choose, he would choose Ji Juechen from Dou Er, who had an iron sword with innate soul power of level 3. After decades of choosing a twin martial soul, I can directly say that his motives are not pure! Third, he was at least more than 10 years old when he was expelled from the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus family! He awakened the martial soul at the age of 6, and there were several years in between. Is it really just because of poor talent that he was discriminated against? Please refer to the fourth point, poor talent and not diligent enough, so he is looked down upon by others. Is it normal? Besides, for more than 10 years, he didn't know whether his father was discriminating against others or not? Yu Yuanheng said that his father often missed him and talked about him. He was afraid of being discriminated against by his tribe and didn't go back to see it. Why didn't he ask his nephew to bring a message to his father to comfort him? Just bragging about students and asking his nephew to put down his pride. The team of Tiandou led by him would not be able to win. Dad didn't even mention it, he is such a filial son! Fourthly, Luo Sanpao is a beast spirit! He was still the leader of spirit fusion skills during the Golden Iron Triangle period. After practicing outside for so long, he should practice his physical fitness and combat skills even for his teammates! As a result, the level 29 mandala snake cannot beat the 400-year-old mandala snake. The 400-year-old spirit beast is at most equivalent to a spirit master who has just reached level 20. He ran away from meeting him at level 29. It is true that he has cultivated to level 29 at level 0.5, But is this the limit? I don't think so! He was born into a top-level beast martial soul family and stayed there for more than 10 years. How could he not know that the greatest advantage of a beast martial soul owner is physical fitness? He didn't know that body and soul power complement each other. ? It can be seen from the training method he taught the Shrek Seven Monsters that he knows? But why is he in his 40s and still in such poor physical condition? He himself has not implemented the saying that there is no useless soul master. He himself is not a hard-working person. If he has been working hard since he was young, With strong physical training, he might have already broken through level 30! He is said to be a theoretical researcher, but he is over 40 years old! He is not willing to practice occasionally? Are you sure he didn't study theory because he was afraid of hard work when he was young and wanted to take advantage of it? Fifth , his theoretical data comes from Wuhundian and civilians. It is too much to say that researchers do not need to teach! Theory also needs practice! Many of our current research workers are mentors, and occasionally take time to guide students and make contributions. But has he been teaching for decades? Researching 24 hours a day for decades? He only knows that observation, working behind closed doors, is seriously out of touch with reality, and the published theories do have merit, but it is ridiculous to say that they are rigorous! I can even say that he is just making a summary based on the amount of data reserves! Look at Bibi Dong, he can solve the problem of twin martial souls on his own. Yu Xiaogang also stayed in the martial soul hall, and the two of them have been together for so long, and they don't even know! Sixth, he discriminates against civilians with poor talents. He took Tang San to hunt the first spirit ring and showed disdain for the civilian spirit masters who formed a team. Would he help if he didn't form a team? His teammate Flanders had run an academy for so many years and only recruited monsters. He didn't know it? Did his brother persuade him? Flanders didn't write clearly when enrolling students. Admissions standards, persuading people to quit without refunding tuition fees, cheating common people for 10 gold coins, did he persuade him later? After the finale , and even in the next few movies, Shrek still only recruits monsters. Has he ever changed it? During this period, he His identity is a teacher, right? This is called teacher ethics? Liu Erlong is more reliable than him, and the academy he runs only recruits civilians. Unfortunately, Flanders used it for free, and it turned sour later. As Tang San's teacher, did Liu Erlong's husband give any advice? If so. However, it is estimated that there will be no such thing as Jiang Nannan selling herself to save her mother. She became Shrek's core disciple at the age of 12, and sold herself at the age of 14 because she had no money. This is outrageous! Seventh, let's ignore other emotional issues. After being deceived by Tang San for a while, he agreed to form a spiritual couple with Liu Erlong? I vomited, his second uncle's biological daughter! As a man, I will tell Liu Erlong directly and let her give up completely. It is outrageous that she has been hung up for decades without making it clear! He still can't hold on to the key, and there will be offspring! Close relatives can't get married and have children. This is the bottom line of human beings, and my three views are completely ruined! Eighth, is it useless at level 0.5? Are you feeling inferior at level 29? I have never seen level 0 people outside in so many years? I have never seen anyone without a martial spirit? My brother Tao can meet several of them every time he goes to the countryside. It can be seen that there are countless Douluo people with zero innate soul power or even no martial spirit. He is well-informed, he has many years of experience, and he is a coward when he is several decades old. If he has low self-esteem, he is weak, and if he cannot see, he cannot see through it! If he had low self-esteem because he was discriminated against when he was young, I sympathize with him, but when the plot begins, he is already a 45-year-old man. He didn't know whether he was a mutated beast martial soul or a dragon martial soul? As a master of theory, his soul skills were all just farts. Even if he is a domestic pig, if he hunts subdragonic soul beasts as soul rings (with his status, it is not impossible to do it if he really has to lower his body), he can still have a certain fighting power if he trains hard! Hundreds of years of soul beasts are not just picked up and beaten casually! Maybe it can make up for the dragon's power, and the martial soul has evolved a little. ! This setting of the Third Young Master is outrageous! In this world where power is paramount, the choices Yu Xiaogang makes at various times are inconsistent with reality. Just because he is discriminated against and has low talent, can he be overshadowed by a sentence of inferiority and cowardice? Please forgive me for not agreeing.

The writing before the Ice and Fire Volume was okay. Although the writing was poor, it was still readable. There was not much poison, 3 and a half stars. The Ice and Fire Volume was not good. It started to make nonsense. The appearance of the soul core was quite reasonable. The problem appeared in the chapters where Tang Yuehua, Ning Fengzhi, and Yu Xiaogang solved the martial soul problem. It was extremely poisonous! 🤔 I don't understand how the author wrote it. It's so pretentious and has some logic but not much. Showing off without logic will only make people bored! Looking at Dou Yi, you don't have to abuse Tang San. After all, Dou Yi's Tang San is still okay, but Yu Xiaogang has to stand at attention at level 29. He has no responsibility or responsibility, and the theory is also a mess, not to mention the different types of awakened martial spirits. , The initial physique is different, and there is no accurate statement about the age of the soul ring at all. Just adding the type of soul ring is really speechless. Adding a soul ring requires a degree of compatibility. To put it bluntly, as long as it is a soul ring, it is fine. The problem is the compatibility! There are other things that give people the impression that "people need to drink water" 😅, there is no need to wash it away. Since the protagonist is engaged in theoretical research, it is really off-putting to show a scholar's rigorous academic attitude and praise each other for a person who is nothing. A few polite words are all it takes, do you really admit that you show respect? 😰 I immediately returned the book after seeing this, and immediately lost interest. Our green hills remain unchanged and our green waters always flow. See you in the new books! 🙏

Before falling in love with Ah Yin, he already had three women, this. . . . . , I am sure it is not a virus from mainland China🦠

The language should be refined, there are too many meaningless adjectives. Although I don't really care about your word count, please give it enough. Six chapters a day, but the plot progress is like a turtle crawling, so what's the point of your explosion?

Rooting, growth, photosynthesis, parasitic seeds, green grass ground, and blue silver grass don't need to worry about flowers and fruits. Five skills are enough to develop. To be honest, it's a bit bland and not to my taste 😁

There are too many useless words in the 50 or so chapters. Reading in short distances will have no impact at all. Too much nonsense will cause serious damage. Also, if you build a blue silver network and tell people when you meet them, everyone in the village knows that they can also find out in the town outside, but it feels too simple? Isn't it because Dou Er doesn't have to guard against the troops directly under Tang Shenwang (evil soul masters)? It feels like the protagonist is the native, and his grandfather and father are the time travellers.

Bibi Dong A Yin Tang Yuehua

Looking at the comments section, the author also read the Blue Silver Grass Guide before opening the book. The plot is too light, and it overlaps with that one. It's very boring to watch. I started reading the table of contents when I saw the end of the second chapter, and then stopped reading. I looked at the table of contents and found a few interesting chapters, clicked on them, and then scrolled to the end. The plot advances too slowly. Unless Dou Yi is this kind of mortal farming story, otherwise he will be a big water ghost if he exceeds 500. There is simply not much to write about, unless we get rid of various soul skill development theories, experiments, force formation, and other things that have a little to do with self-cultivation but have little to do with it. Otherwise, Douyi won't have much to expand.

The title of this novel can always seduce me, but after reading more than 100 pictures, I will feel a little nauseous. Let me talk about the protagonist created by the author first. The protagonist can be said to be a childish thinker, not like a time traveler, more like an aborigine. The author's entire novel layout is based on Blue Silver Grass Strategy, but the protagonist of Blue Silver Grass Strategy is a genius. The protagonist described in this novel is more like a mediocre person who is not open-minded enough. The protagonist has clearly completed the industrial layout, selling perfume, and hooking up with Qibao. Logically speaking, you can directly go to the Advanced Academy. If you have money in the Advanced Academy and pass the soul power level, you can get into it. You also have to go to the military camp to gain qualifications. This kind of main line is exactly the same as the Blue Silver Grass Strategy. Can't the author have his own ideas? As for going to the military camp To collect data, to be honest, with the character of the protagonist, you should not take the upgrade route of the self-created stream, but the adventure stream, or the farming stream. There is a big sense of division between your current protagonist's personality and what the protagonist does, and the whole novel has a tasteless feeling.

The heroine is Ah Yin, right? It's almost a million words, and it seems to have appeared three times. Those supporting characters have indeed been written all the time, putting the cart before the horse.

The author said that the book is very easy to read. I think this is inseparable from the plot of the author's book. At present, there is no direction at all about what the protagonist in the book wants to do. It is just a plain description of establishing an herbal alliance, making perfume, and practicing medical skills to save people and build connections. This misses a very important point that makes online serialized novels attractive for reading: short-term goals! There is no short-term goal for the protagonist. Readers cannot find a sense of satisfaction in the book, and there is no content that makes them smile when reading ordinary novels. This is the biggest shortcoming and the most easily overlooked problem for new writers. In addition, the protagonist has been practicing in the countryside and has no access to higher-level knowledge in the soul master world. He does not go to the soul master academy. This lacks many ways to design small short-term goals. If this problem is not corrected, it can only be said that if you can watch it patiently, you can barely follow it, but if the plot continues like this, it will inevitably become a glitch. Because these contents can even be summarized in one or two sentences, they will not attract readers to follow them.

I personally think that there are three main steps in activating soul skills: Soul master (raw material soul power) → soul ring (processing soul power) → soul master (application of soul power). That is: the human body provides soul power to the soul ring, the soul ring performs key processing on the soul power, and then the human body receives the processed soul power to produce specific effects. At least in Dou Yili (I have only watched Dou Yi), no one was unable to use soul skills due to physical injuries. This is enough to prove that the human body does not involve the key transformation of soul power, otherwise there will definitely be situations where the soul power is unable to be used due to injury to the meridians. So I think the soul master is just the sending and receiving end of soul power. But I'm not saying that the protagonist's self-created soul skills cannot work. I think it is possible. It just needs to analyze the steps of soul ring processing of soul power from scratch. If the protagonist develops a way to observe the running route of soul power in the soul ring in the future, it will be simpler. In the future, he only needs to find a way to replicate this running route in the human body. —————————————————————— Digression: Looking back, I feel that the soul ring is like a shortcut to cultivation developed by a high-level civilization that specially modified the rules. Perhaps a long time ago, soul masters needed to practice their own martial arts and soul skills like cultivators, but a certain force developed a "soul ring". As long as it is refined, one can directly skip the training steps and directly master the soul skills in the soul ring! Through this convenient technology, as long as the cultivation level reaches the standard, strong people can be produced in batches. That force quickly accumulates strength and eventually rules the world. After further development, they even analyzed the development of the world and carved the rules of soul ring generation into the world, allowing automatic soul ring generators such as "soul beasts" to be born in the world. The soul beast may be the result of the biological transformation of that force!

I read more than 300 chapters at Qidian. Com and then read them on QQ. The first 100 chapters of the plot are pretty good, but the mid-term viewing experience is relatively poor. The plot has no ups and downs and feels too bland. There is no place to lift people's spirits. Many things that are not too important in the mid-term are written in too detail. It could be streamlined. In terms of characters, the amount of the heroine's plot after reading more than 300 chapters in the middle period is not as much as that of many NPC characters who are introduced in one stroke. The emotional changes are also very strange. It feels like a novel without a heroine to me. The middle part of the plot is a bland story with no emotional catharsis, which kills the reader's enthusiasm.

It is as difficult as the protagonist upgrading himself. As for others, such as Tang Hao, although his talents and resources are indeed higher and better than the protagonist. But when he first met the protagonist, he was only about 34 years old and had already mastered Contra. It's really too much and doesn't match the original work. At the age of 44, he relied on Ah Yin to reach the level of a titled Douluo. 2 The same goes for Liu Erlong. Obviously Flanders only got the sixth spirit ring, and Liu Erlong is already the Soul Emperor, which is beyond the mark. Also a reminder to the author here, you have now given Yu Xiaogang a new direction. Let him have a new future, but don't overdo his cultivation. After all, according to the theory you gave him, his martial spirit has not awakened at all. Even if he explodes two rings and reabsorbs it, if he wants his martial spirit to truly awaken without fairy grass, he would have to have at least six or seven rings like you to truly evolve and wake up. And now that he is older, the cultivation speed of half a level of innate soul power cannot be changed. Even if he absorbs the soul ring again so that the martial soul can break through the soul master, plus the family resources, he is 50 years old, and he is only over 40 levels above the sky. Don't write his cultivation as Soul Emperor, otherwise the protagonist's efforts will appear ridiculous and pathetic. Moreover, this character is not very likable in the first place. If you write him with a higher cultivation level later, there will definitely be a lot of criticism and a small number of people will be discouraged. The main purpose of my writing this article is to remind the author that when he meets those plot characters later, please write their cultivation level at a lower level. Don't always elevate others because it really makes the protagonist's efforts pathetic and ridiculous. Anyway, his cultivation level is lower than that in the original timeline. For example, Flanders' 78th level cultivation level was obtained only when he met 12-year-old Tang San. Before reaching that timeline, please write down his cultivation level at a lower level

After reading Chapter 30, you seem to be writing about a real mortal. In the story about the mortal next door who cultivates immortality, he is not a mortal, but the protagonist, who eventually becomes an immortal. When you write this, I feel like you are really a mortal.

1. The sharpest plants: sisal, agave, batata, yucca 2. The most toxic plants: curare wood, baby's eye, gallbladder, Aconitum navicularis, oleander, Nepenthes, poppy, castor, water hemlock, scorpion grass, foxglove, white snakeroot, oleander, datura, poinsettia, amanita, nux vomica, African acacia 3. The hardest plants: iron birch, oak, "Broken Axe" heavy white shield tree, guaiaca, East African black and yellow Sandalwood, waxwood 4. The most resilient plants: Populus euphratica, Jianglong wood, ramie, bamboo, pine, wintersweet, jute, hemp, Selaginella 5. The explosive plant: bomb tree, also called iron watermelon 6. The most tenacious plant: lichen, roll Cypress, Populus euphratica, sea buckthorn, Japanese knotweed, Welwitschia, pineapple, phoenix (also known as rooting on the ground) 7. Hallucinogenic plants: corpse-scented konjac, black-feathered jade cactus, psychedelic mushrooms, fly fungus, cannabis, paradise blue, wormwood 8. The most parasitic plants: Cuscuta, yellow silk vine, cordyceps fungus, Ophiocordyceps hemiformis, crab slave barnacles, strangulation fig tree 9. The thickest plant: Baiqi chestnut tree 10. The tallest plant: Australian almond eucalyptus 11. The largest plant: General Sherman tree

Do you have any good plots? It's not about the big aspects, but what plots you want to see the protagonist encounter. For example, you can mention where you went, what happened, and who you met. Or make up a character yourself and I'll write it in. Whether it's plot or characters, you write it down below and I'll find a way to add it in. You can refer to it when you are stuck.

Civilian Style Martial Spirit: Wild Dog (Hound) Innate Soul Power: Level 2 Golden Finger: A radar-like ability in the mind that can display soul beasts within a hundred miles radius (the displayed color corresponds to the color of the soul ring) Starting to flash represents the state of the soul beast, and the faster it flashes, the more advanced the state of the soul beast Direction: Form a soul hunting team with the core of Golden Finger to help others hunt for soul rings (most of the soul hunting team's time is wasted on the way to find soul beasts, and even if they meet, there is a high probability that they will not meet the requirements) The protagonist's first few soul rings can be picked up by Gold Finger to get a good optimal soul ring configuration (yellow, yellow, purple), mostly civilians (white, yellow, yellow)

It comes from your advertisement in the Blue Silver Grass Guide. Don't be too impatient and exaggerated like the guide.

This is a bit like the Blue Silver Grass guide, I hope it doesn't end badly.

Why does it sound like the Stitch Monster from several novels? Some of the plots look like parts of other Douluo fan novels.

I think the most important point in these two chapters is the protagonist and the force he founded, the Shenmu Sect. What do they think of the Ice and Fire Medicine Garden? Do you think the medicine garden belongs to them, or do you think everyone can come and get medicine in this precious land? If they think the medicine garden belongs to them, then why don't they send someone to guard it? (If the ninth ring is not empty, then the eighth and seventh rings are also empty?) Even if you don't keep it, you have to set up a sign to mark it as yours, right? If you think the medicine garden is a chance, everyone can take it. Then the protagonist shouldn't attack the Tang family with those two fairy grasses. (At the same time, many of the previous chapters have the idea of ​​treating the medicine garden as one's own, which should be changed.) There is another point that I think is also very important. How does the author view the protagonist and the protagonist's sect's strength? You must know that the protagonist has created many, many skills before. (Emphasis added) Logically speaking, although the protagonist is level 98, his strength should far exceed the level 98 level of a normal Douluo. After all, the protagonist is smart, can create martial arts, and has various genius treasures. I can't have the same combat power as a normal level 98 person (referring to Tang Hao) if I have skills and resources, right? In addition, if the protagonist passes on the skills, then the Shenmu Sect should be the same as the protagonist in the same realm and have advantages over ordinary Douluo people.

If you have any favorite plots or ideas, you can suggest them and I will find a way to add them.

Ah, it's rare. It's similar to the Blue Silver Grass guide.

Personally, I feel that the pig's trotters creation technique is a bit complicated, and the Ming Dynasty sacrifice is a bit hasty, but it doesn't have the aura of the protagonist's halo and tyranny. Overall, it is the only one among Douluo fandoms that I keep up with. Come on, author!

Level 2 innate soul power feels a bit low. 😐

What is the male protagonist's status? Will he be weaker than Tang San?