I’m in Swallowed Star, and I Awakened a Pay-to-Win Cultivation System

Having grasped the essence of wind, why would you want to grasp the essence of fire? Without other clones, isn't this putting the cart before the horse?

What kind of garbage is this? It's just like that other prehistoric novel, *The Devouring Book*, which overpowers the protagonist and writes him as a complete waste. If you gave that cheat to Luo Feng, he'd be a million times stronger than the protagonist.

Possessing an old man's body—no special talents, no powerful physique, really not picky!

What are the advantages of a prophet?

This book is dead, and yet the Venerable One still covets your secret manual. Your secret manual is really that amazing, like the Nine Tribulations Secret Manual, I can't even describe it. Any tips that can be written down or spoken aloud are rubbish. If my training is this bad, who would want your secret manual?

The protagonist's cultivation technique is constantly being threatened by one thing or another. If you ask me, it would have been better to just let Chaos take him as a disciple; at least then he'd have a powerful backer.

You wrote so well about your gradual progress at the beginning, but then all you wrote about was your lousy swordsmanship. You relied on swordsmanship to advance the main plot. Have you changed your character?

It turns out they don't share the same consciousness as the original; I suggest making changes.

Upgrading is too slow; in the early stages, the Devouring system can be built up simply by accumulating resources.

The primordial being sought to seize the Heavenly Dao, but absorbing its merits was impossible. A computer downloading an electronic wooden fish could accumulate trillions of merits in a day. A smart assistant operates tens of thousands of times faster than a computer. One day of this accumulation was enough to achieve sainthood.