Hogwarts: My Teacher Is One of the Four Founders, So What?

The book is actually quite good, but the mistake in the review greatly affects the experience. I dare say that most people who read online articles don't even care about whether they have used it incorrectly, let alone opening the comment area just to read everyone's comments. There are only a few comments in the comment area, and when I open the comment area, it means that the correction is wrong. At least I feel very alienated.

That god who gets everything day and night, I clicked on the book review to see interesting netizens making fun of the plot, sharing their opinions, and criticizing the quality, not to see a self-satisfied psychopath who mentally strengthens others.

There is a "crazy man" in this book. He is behind every sentence in every chapter. He has destroyed the atmosphere of many HP fandoms. Every time you click on a chapter review, you will not be surprised to receive his mental attack. There happened to be a book friend who posted a post earlier, and finally I couldn't stand him anymore, so I will also post next to inform the author, hoping to deal with it.

I thought it was a boring pretentious story, but I patiently read it after 10 chapters and found that it was actually okay. However, the author was too eager to let readers know how powerful and talented the protagonist was, which resulted in a somewhat poor narrative feel. Grain, has the potential to be better

Overall rating: Grain. Score (out of 100 points): 62 points, passing. Note: The book review contains spoilers, please do not read if you mind. Advantages: 1. The writing is good, at least there is not an exclamation point in every sentence. This is an excerpt from Chapter 25 of this article. From this excerpt, you can see the writing style of this article: This morning, Lavender Brown asked Parvati Patil to go to class together, but did not call her. She even heard what Lavender Brown whispered to Parvati. "Look at her, she is always keen to point out people's faults... I was clearly talking to her last night!" "Does she think she can become the best student in Gryffindor? Stop talking, everyone knows that Ryan Elias will definitely be the first, even the Sorting Hat knows..." Although Parvati later pointed out quietly that Ryan was not entirely a Gryffindor student, Hermione could no longer listen. 2. The naming of the protagonist and other original things can also be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it, and it is quite thoughtful. Example: The name of the giant squid is Shaqa'a'a, where "Shaq'a'a" comes from the Arabic word for "brave". 3. The protagonist has very upright views, so upright that he cannot even be considered a dark wizard. This is relatively rare in "Harry Potter" fan fiction. This is an excerpt from Chapter 14 of this article. From this, you can see the integrity of the protagonist: Ryan walked up to Malfoy and spoke softly. "First of all, magical animals such as the sand... Giant squid that have lived hundreds of years ago are as intelligent as any wizard - calling them 'animals' is a manifestation of extreme lack of education, just like you like to call other wizards 'mudbloods'!" At the same time as Ryan said this, Pansy Parkinson's pretty little face not far behind Malfoy became visibly pale. At the same time, Draco Malfoy's two followers, the two chubby little wizards, also reached out to draw the wand. But... "They were all petrified." With a wave of Ryan's hand, their bodies instantly stiffened and they hit the ground heavily. 4. This book does not discredit Dumbledore, it is not too brainless. This probably doesn't require an example, so I won't attach it. If you have any questions, please mention them in the comment area. Disadvantages: 1. Almost all the highlights of the original characters are given to the protagonist. This is an excerpt from Chapter 25 of this article. In the original book, Hermione Granger easily turned a match into a silver needle: She bit her lip and kept waving her wand at the match in front of her. She had already previewed the "Basic Transformation Guide", and she should have been able to do this simple transformation a long time ago. But the match in front of her just refused to obey. Sometimes it becomes like a small metal stick, sometimes it becomes smaller at the top and larger at the bottom, but it never really turns into a needle. But at this time... "Don't let your bad mood dominate your spellcasting, Granger." Hermione heard the voice from ahead. She stopped her wand, raised her head and saw Ryan's light blue eyes. "I'm sorry?" She said softly, still obviously not in a good mood. By the way, she saw the match in front of Ryan that had turned into a needle. She even saw that there were fine and elegant patterns on the needle. "Emotions." Ryan repeated his words patiently, just like he used to teach the little wizards who were admitted to the school by the four teachers at Hogwarts. "Emotions can affect your spells." He pointed to the weird-shaped needle with a large head and small body on Hermione's desk. "Good emotions are of course wonderful. They will make some spells have better effects, and even become the source of some spells." "And bad emotions... Of course they will exist, and they will also have a strengthening effect on very specific spells - but remember, don't let it dominate you." 2. The protagonist is too Mary Sue, which is no different from the ancient novels ten years ago. Example: "Then, please sort the hospital for me." Ryan said. At the same time, curiosity arose in his heart. In fact, although he is a student of the Big Four and even one of the founding participants of Hogwarts. But he himself has never been assigned to any college. As a disciple of the Big Four, his role at Hogwarts at that time was more like a dean and an outstanding graduate. So he was really curious as to which college he would be assigned to. However, the facts were obviously different from what he expected. "Oh, Sorting... Of course." There seemed to be more joy in the Sorting Hat's voice. "The four masters have already arranged your academy... Yes, there is no doubt about the result." The inner dialogue ends here. The next moment, everyone in the entire auditorium heard the sorting result finally announced by the Sorting Hat very clearly. "Hogwarts!"

Just think of the protagonist as a time-traveler who has never seen HP, because the protagonist is more like a time-traveler who doesn't know anything about the HP world than a native.

This novel irritates me every time I read it. The beginning is very good, but the author is sloppy. It's full of riddles and no clues at all. It would be great to know that the riddles are solved in the end and the identity of the heir is announced, but what's wrong with you? Is it too late for you to solve the riddle? Before it was solved, a group of people mocked the protagonist, and the protagonist retorted, and then mocked, and then retorted again. The plot, which was obviously very enjoyable, made me feel very frustrated. Big fire. Obviously the identity of the heirs of the Big Four is a good innovation, and the beginning is really amazing, but the author just wrote it, the noble protagonist slaps everyone in Hogwarts, but it still gives people a feeling of being rejected. Everyone knows something, but the protagonist doesn't know it. If he asks, he won't tell you at the right time, and then it will be a mess and it will be delayed. Moreover, the author has a general understanding of the coolness of the identity of the descendant of the Big Four. The branch at the beginning does have a lot of big ones, but it doesn't work in the later chapters. It just gives people the feeling: Oh, this person is the descendant of the Big Four. He is so awesome. I can scheme against him and compete with him. Feeling. I feel like your identity is not as shocking as Dumbledore's son. The protagonist first apprentices to the Big Four before enrolling in school. This was supposed to be the plot of Hogwarts welcoming his master. However, in the plot, when the four deans first knew the identity of the protagonist, it was written as follows: the protagonist enters school, experiences events, obtains the treasure of the Four Giants, and becomes a successor. It just gives people the impression that the protagonist is the descendant of Xin Yun'er who obtained the treasure but was not personally recognized by the Big Four. I feel uncomfortable all of a sudden, so I've been looking forward to it for so long, so you just give me this? The summary of the 🤔 team is: the beginning is very good, and the identity of the successor raised my expectations, but it was a little watery later on, and it was not as exciting as I imagined. Summing up the food and grass, it is not poisonous, but it has not reached the grass jelly yet. (Maybe it was because the beginning surprised me, and made me have too much expectations for this novel. I thought I had found a fairy tale, but it turned out not to be as grand as I thought. The idea that fairy grass should not be like this made me a little angry. Personal opinion, normal discussion, rational discussion)

There has been no update for 5 days. It's such a waste of my 2200 points. What a rip-off.

What did you say when you put it on the shelves?

Duan Ping, that magic man, really makes me laugh every time I see him😅