The Outcast: I Can Rotate Magnetic Fields!

The biggest taboos in fanfiction are indulging in wishful thinking and treating supporting characters like NPCs or idiots. Instead of going to the original novel, the beginning of the story involves a child protagonist becoming sworn brothers with Wang Yaozu, a 70-year-old man from the Quanxing sect, and learning his methods? Author, do you also think your readers are fools?

Let's change the map later. One person's combat power is too low. Electric current can easily push them aside. Oga, with tens of thousands of horsepower, can take a nuclear bomb head-on without getting hurt. This nuclear bomb is tens of thousands of times stronger than Little Boy.

Could there be an electric current driving it within 50 chapters, no, 100 chapters?

"And cats are very intelligent primates," right? That's ridiculous.

Making witty remarks, taking things for granted, causing the character to collapse and the premise to be untenable. Because he was an only child, he wasn't allowed to learn any skills. Because they weren't allowed to go to prestigious sects, they learned skills from the Quanxing Sect.

This book is incredibly padded. It skips essential content and pads the word count excessively. The protagonist spends all his time learning techniques, which are ultimately useless. He uses every technique he can think of in a fight, only to be slightly stronger than others.

It's incredible that he was born after only meeting Zuo Ruotong once. At the same time, there is a feeling of energy in the body. With Lao Zuo being so strong, can't you tell that you have other teachers? I didn't see any sincerity in Ni Sheng's demands at all. He was full of petty scheming and petty tricks. He was respectful to his teacher on the surface, but his heart was filthy and treacherous.

It's all so drawn out and rambling, with no real focus. All I see is that the protagonist is rich, wants to learn how to reverse the eight directions, and eagerly gets thrown into water to be poured over his head. Even after that, he keeps dawdling. The fourth chapter starts with a breathing technique—I don't know what you're breathing, but I'm about to run out of oxygen.

Why learn so much stuff? Does that have anything to do with the title?

Another self-indulgent fanfiction