Song of Starforging

Then I discovered that the castle of the world lord would stand up

In the end, the introduction cannot be changed to when the Alliance fleet arrives, the planet will be comforted. The angels will collect species and send them to the Museum Tianshu and then destroy a heretic on the Earth-blasting Star. Listen to my advice, extreme xenophobia should be added. It's enough for all Asians to unify canning processing and reform it

How should I put it? Your profile is quite attractive, but is it a bit slow to take off? I can summarize the content of almost 7 chapters before you in two chapters. In the first chapter, the protagonist wakes up from the spaceship that is about to crash, and then meets his childhood sweetheart, learns the details of the spacecraft, determines that it is inoperable, and decides to escape separately. In the second chapter, the protagonist is awakened by the AI, has successfully reached the ground, and escapes successfully. After sorting out the situation of the spacecraft, he finds the first native, learns the language, and understands everything. Would it be better if the third chapter is directly connected to Chapter 9 or 10? The previous descriptions of the crash of the spaceship felt unnecessary and too watery.

It can be called a masterpiece of farming, but it is a pity that it was born at the wrong time. Nowadays, farming literature is becoming increasingly lonely. It has been a long time since I have seen a farming novel with rigorous settings and meticulous details. This book is undoubtedly a work that goes against the times. In this book, I have experienced for a long time how I originally felt when I came to Lingao, especially in the deduction of industrial practice. The logic of industrialization construction is clear, interlocking, and the details are very meticulous. If it were the era of the rise of the Industrial Party, it might be possible to continue the glory of Lingao. The setting of the worldview is very unique. The author has created a strict and deducible magic theory system. When I was watching "Arcane Throne" when I was a teenager, I was immersed in the fantasy that "knowledge changes the world". But after a lot of reading and knowledge accumulation, I found that the evaluation of "fantasy disguised as science fiction" is actually appropriate. Knowledge and cognition are directly fed back into the material world through a certain function. The squid has hidden this process, which makes the logic of magic no longer scientific, at least not materialistic. In "Release That Witch", Ermu regarded magic as the core of energy and productivity, reshaping the positioning of magic in Chinese-style Western fantasy. This affected all subsequent farming novels, but Ermu focused more on the world and society. In this book, the author tries to use mathematics to express the existence of magic and its influence. This is also the design I have been looking for. Regardless of the outcome, the courage to try is worthy of admiration and recognition. Mathematics makes the magic system more reasonable and complete, but it also makes it boring and obscure. Obviously this part is a bit too difficult for most readers. Although the author has stated that no mathematical foundation is required to gain experience, it is always a pity for readers not to resonate with the author. In short, this is a work that has a certain reading threshold, but if you can keep up with the author's ideas (and have a certain mathematical foundation at the same time), you will get an unprecedented experience.

Overall, it's well written, but it's very strange. As far as I'm concerned, it looks dry and tasteless. It just lacks a bit of flavor and doesn't suit me very well.

It should be called - Technology vs Magic instead of science

There are some theoretical data and formulas, which look unclear and powerful, and have a high-end atmosphere. However, in the plot, the deus ex machina, the combat content, and the humanistic style are briefly mentioned, and the Spring and Autumn writing style is really skipped too much. The infrastructure content of Zhongtian novels seems dry, which is much better than that of Xiaobai novels, but it does not provide the reading experience that a novel should have. The plot is uneventful and uneventful. The above is obviously a good quality ration, but it is still far away from the fairy grass.

I suddenly remembered this when I saw the magic theory experiment record✘

I hope this book can be a long one

I thought about it for a while, and now the male protagonist can't relax at all. He is in a state of excitement about the drastic changes in his life, so he is highly concentrated and will not have any mood swings. It may happen after it slowly stabilizes. As for Ye Xinglan, a Xinghuan person is a rationalist. Jiujiu is AI, completely devoid of emotions (at least for now). As for Aaliyah, the princess who lost her country is still a long-lived species, has experienced a lot, and is unlikely to be sentimental. So there seems to be nothing to stimulate emotions