People Are Fighting for Defeat, and They Are Expected to Become Emperors in Advance

There aren't any big highlights, but the strength aspect is a bit overemphasized, which is much worse than Xiao Yan in the original work.

That's it for this book! It should have been written down. It doesn't matter whether you write about the Great Master or not. Ask for leave, ask for leave, or ask for leave, let's be a eunuch! It doesn't matter if the money is wasted. It looks so gross like this!

In fact, after watching so many Dou Po, I have two attitudes toward Xiao Yan: either not to be his enemy, but there are only so many resources in the world, and there are only two ways to use city and land resources. If you don't have a system or other methods, you can't become Dou Emperor. If you really write about fighting, don't treat others as good. Because Dou Po is a fantasy world, not Douluo. In Dou Luo, ordinary people are fine, but as long as they don't mess with big shots, they are fine. But it is different in Dou Po. Because in Doupoli it was truly devastating. In Douluo, if you see that even the gods can't defeat the city wall, don't have that salty mentality when writing Douluo. Just be an ordinary person. But as long as you have talent, you can't have such a mentality, because that is a fantasy world, not the world of Douluo. It's okay for you to have this mentality in Douluo World. Because that world is not a destructive one. But Doupo doesn't work. In Doupo, people are destroying the world. If you don't provoke others, others may come and kill you. Even the strong man's residual power can affect you. Therefore, one cannot be a licker in Time Travel Po, and the other two cannot be a nanny. In order to defeat the three time travels, you have to do whatever it takes to become stronger. Mercy can't accept girls, but I can do it, because if you time-travel and break through Dou Di, you still wear the virgin's cold male god, that's too disgusting, because if you ask a normal person who has really time-traveled, who doesn't have three wives and four concubines? And I feel that even if you accept women who have no talent, such as Yafei, etc., As long as the protagonist has the strength, no one dares to touch him sincerely, as long as he is pregnant with the protagonist's child. That Dou Emperor bloodline. The deepening strength will increase gradually. Yes, anti-inflammation means that as long as there are interests involved, don't hesitate. If you can kill him, kill him. If you can't kill him, run away. As long as you don't have the ability to deal with Gu Xuan. It's better not to kill him. If he really wants to kill him, it's better to let him attract the firepower of the soul clan. It's better to wait until the protagonist has the strength to fight the saint before killing him.

Definitely one of the best among Dou Po fanfics. The writing is smooth and clear, and there are basically no poisonous points. I support it! 😆

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It's okay, it's above average among Dou Po fans. The biggest problem at present is that the author sometimes has some ingenuity. For example, when Canaan College obtained the two fallen heart flames, we all thought that he would either give them to Cao Ying, one of the female protagonists, who has practiced Fen Jue, or trade them with the old doctor for gold coins. In the end, he chose to give both to the academy. The reason was that the bigger one was disobedient, so he used it as feed for the smaller one. How should I put it? I always feel that the author has a kind of rebellious mentality when writing this paragraph: Can you guess the plot I wrote?

What I wrote in the beginning was pretty good, but it became more and more outrageous. When it came to solving the Fallen Heart Flame in Canaan College, it was outrageous. To solve a Douzong-level Fallen Heart Flame requires three one-star Douzun-level self-destructions. The younger one sent it to the academy to understand, and the older one also sent it to the academy. He fed it to the younger one. He also said that it was useless to come. He couldn't give it to anyone in the northwest continent, so couldn't he give it to Cao Ying? Do we have to give him away in this northwest continent? What do you think? Is your brain sick?

You can still watch it earlier. In the comment area, I saw that the protagonist gave Cao Ying the strange fire and burning skills? Is this too difficult to stretch? Even if she sends Fen Jue and Strange Fire, it won't be her turn 😅. Isn't Xun'er ten thousand times stronger than her? What kind of scene does Cao Ying have? The original work didn't even mention her as well as Nalan 😒. Is it really for Cao Ying? Then I won't subscribe 😅

It's time to strengthen the protagonist. Now he doesn't have a single ultimate move. I don't understand why we need to create an inverse version of the weak chicken setting with ice attributes. With this kind of original anti-inflammation, there is no difference between beating the protagonist and beating a dog in the same realm.

After reading a few pictures, let's briefly talk about the protagonist's combat power. In the original work, he was a wild dog who was kicked to death by Xiao Yan in the same realm.

The main character's combat power is really low, and he has basically no ability to fight across levels. The main function of prepaying advanced heaven-level skills is battery life. Shouldn't this be the basic attribute of heaven-level skills? Moreover, when you are at a low level, you often use high-level fighting skills, which will lead to a lack of fighting spirit. What is the use of strengthening the endurance now? If you can't beat it, you can't beat it. And haven't you tried pre-propagating fire attributes before? It just doesn't work for the time being. Isn't it good for high-level Dou Zun now? Wait until the Dou Sheng day lilies are cold. . Now that the remnant picture of Pure Lotus Demon Fire is back, who can I give it to if I don't need the protagonist? He has been emphasizing that Cao Ying has no ambition and no one else has fire attributes. Do they need to resurrect the Pure Lotus Demon Saint for him to use?

I really can't see the future of the protagonist. Xiao Yan had the strength to defeat the Nine-Star Douzong when he was a Little Medical Immortal Douzun, and he was still an alchemist. It would be good for the protagonist to be able to defeat the Three-Star Douzong with the same level of combat power. He still relies on himself for training. How can he show the highlight of the protagonist next? Follow the female supporting character and shout "Come on?"

The protagonist has been suppressed, and the upgrade is not as good as the original Xiao Yan, so Xiao Yan and the Soul Emperor can only be stuck. Otherwise, at the protagonist's speed, the Soul Emperor may have become the emperor without even breaking through the Battle of Saints.

It was okay in the front, but the author let himself go later. At first, I saw that the protagonist was an ice attribute and not a fire attribute. I thought that I would not overwhelm Xiao Yan to grab the Burning Jue. After all, becoming an emperor has risks, multiple helpers, and multiple insurances. But the result, oh, to be honest, the protagonist gave Qinglian Earth Heart Fire to Cao Ying. I didn't think it was a small problem for growth and future planning. But when I saw the Burning Jue, I didn't want to say anything. Well, brother, people are interested in alchemy rather than cultivation. There is no improvement in alchemy if there are too many strange fires. As a result, you have to create a practice of burning to disgust people. Then you might as well become an alchemist from the beginning. Don't tell me that for the sake of the little medical fairy, why don't you give Xiao Yan the back-up? I'm really speechless. I don't understand. Do Dou Po fans have trouble with Fen Jue? Will they die if they don't practice?

Will the author overwhelm the protagonist? You must know that Xiao Yan has been promoted from the third level of Dou Qi to Dou Emperor in 22 years. In these 22 years, he has broken through 11 major realms and 108 minor realms, averaging two major realms and 4.9 Minor realms a year. Is the protagonist faster than him or slower than him?

After you became the emperor, you destroyed the Soul Emperor, and then the 8 Ancient Emperor Jade fell into your hands. It's not you who has the final say when the Ancient Emperor's Cave will be opened. If the strong Emperor Fighter can't open the Ancient Emperor's Cave, can't they just use the Emperor Jade? Pre-predicting the Origin Qi does not necessarily require the Origin Qi from the Ancient Emperor's Cave. You have to tear open the heaven and earth to pour in the Origin Qi. Wouldn't that be enough? I have to give the ancient jade to the Soul Emperor, take away the Xiao family's ancient jade and finally give it to the Soul Emperor. I don't understand this operation. The Soul Emperor can obviously suppress it at will. In the end, there was a battle between two emperors. The quality of this book has definitely declined.

I've read dozens of chapters intermittently, and I can't say what's wrong with this book, but I don't know why, but I just don't have the desire to read on.

What is the difference between what you wrote and the original work? Just change the name of the protagonist in the original work. It is not as well written as the original work, and it does not have its own plot or story. The cheating and cheating are forcibly tied to the plot. You are not the only one with these resources. You have to follow the original plot.

Even if you choose a thunder attribute, you won't be complained about for so long.

At first I thought I would use Doupo's skin to write my own story, but it turned out that I just pirated Doupo. Taking Xiao Yan's path left Xiao Yan with nowhere to go 🙂 and then I really didn't see how well the golden finger was used.

I don't know why some Dou Po colleagues are restrained. First of all, the rise of a strong man must have a lot of help. In this corner of the northwest alone, there are eighth-level alchemist Dou Zun Soul, ancient tribe's divine bloodline eldest lady, colorful sky-swallowing python, disaster poison body, Qinglian Earth Heart Fire, two residual images of the third strange fire, Emperor Jade Heaven-level fighting skills, etc. How can you rise without striving for these? There are also those who talk about snatching the heroine. Unless the fan protagonist does not set foot in the Northwest Continent, it will definitely stir up the situation and affect many people's life trajectories. The problem is that the Northwest Continent has too many plots. If the fan does not go there, it is better to write original works. This is like the fan who blocks the sky and does not get involved in Beidou.

I read a lot of comments saying that the author overwhelms the protagonist, and I think it's okay. The protagonist is now 22, a five-star Dou Zun, and Xiao Yan is one year younger than the protagonist, and is now a junior Dou King. In the original work, Xiao Yan was at the peak of Dou Wang, and had just refined the fallen heart inflammation. The current level of anti-inflammation absorbed is not as high as that in the original work, and the time of absorbing the strange fire is later than in the original work. The level of Fen Jue is too low, which makes the current anti-inflammation practice too slow. When the level of Fen Jue rises, the speed of anti-inflammation practice will not be slower than that of the protagonist. The flaw of this book is that the protagonist casually tells the information he received in advance, but the protagonist does not explain the source of the information. Now it depends on what the author writes later.

The protagonist of this book does not seem to care about the importance of intelligence and intelligence sources. He intentionally or unintentionally embodies a feeling of "I know everything" in front of others, creating the character of a prophet. Zixiao Pavilion is engaged in the intelligence business. But have you ever thought about how the protagonist would explain it if others inquired about the source of the protagonist's intelligence? For example, in the latest chapter of the protagonist, the protagonist directly talks about the old Dragon King. If Zi Yan asks how do you know, how will the protagonist answer? Even if Zi Yan can be fooled, the protagonist takes Zi Yan to see her father, and the old Dragon Emperor asks this question, how can the protagonist be fooled? If he didn't fool him well, wouldn't the old Dragon Emperor suspect that the protagonist is a pawn of a powerful force and deliberately get close to Zi Yan? When we arrive in Zhongzhou, if Zixiao Pavilion continues to engage in intelligence business, what will happen if unreasonable forces like Soul Palace come to ask questions? The information given is too accurate, what should the big forces do to find out the protagonist's details? Of course, the author can use high-dimensional power to prevent these situations from happening, but when I think about it carefully, I think it is quite intellectual and quite awkward. I still hope the author can handle this kind of detail well.

Even the combat power is suppressed. In this rhythm, the protagonist of the Soul Emperor and the Fighting Emperor is still fighting for the Saint. The anti-inflammatory is even suppressed, which is also awesome.

The future is vast, the future is long, and the future is promising The author must read this comment! This book is considered to be one of the top two or three Dou Po fan fiction books I have read. I think I am quite picky. Dou Po fan fiction generally has problems such as tampering and disrespecting the original setting, erratic emotions, rough details, and impetuous progress in terms of strength and progress. However, the author of this book is different. At present, it seems There are several major advantages 1. The writing style is good enough, the words and sentences are comfortable, interesting but not overly frivolous (some Internet articles are full of Internet terms and modern words, which is very damaging to the sense of substitution in Douqi Continent) 2. There are details of life and some background shaping of the Dou Po world, which makes it feel immersive, as if you have really entered a flesh-and-blood Dou Po world. This is the benefit of carefully laying out the world view. I implore the author not to be greedy for more and quick, and follow a stable The dynamic speed and pace slowly shape and describe the characters, plots, scenery and experiences along the way, customs, local wealthy families, love-hate entanglements, competition for interests, and delicate human hearts. Without these embellishments, simple systems and plug-ins cannot bring the excitement they deserve. 3. The emotional description of the relationship with the heroine is relatively delicate, relatively less deliberate and frivolous, showing sincerity in the ordinary, cultivating feelings through small things, and witnessing each other's character and building mutual trust from the events they have experienced together, instead of using hard resources to replace the down-to-earth tempering of feelings. At present, the author's portrayal of Xun'er, the little medical fairy, is very eye-catching, and the interaction is natural and comfortable. (I think Xun'er's emotional leap here is actually a bit insufficient. The jump from simple curiosity to gradual warming is a bit omitted. I think Xun'er was too proactive in the whole process, which is a bit unreasonable. Therefore, there is no key event in the protagonist and Xun'er's childhood to greatly increase Xun'er's life. I think it is not enough to chase away Xiao Yan who attacked at night. The charm of the protagonist from Xun'er's perspective still lacks a decisive deed) 4. The speed of strength control is reasonable, neither too fast nor too slow. The system is innovative and moderate. The combination of skills and the speed of upgrading are very convincing. The intensity arrangement of the skills and fighting skills is also relatively comfortable, which is in line with the look and feel of the original work. (The current problem is that there is a lack of passionate and evenly matched fights. It is true that fan fiction cares about configuration crushing and information gaps. However, if there are enough passionate battles to realize these pre-determined resources one by one, readers will have a stronger sense of gain.) In general, the author still awes and respects the world. It is a wonderful work, and I would not hesitate to praise it I sincerely request the author: First of all, listen to the advice, and secondly, don't rush the progress of the story and the details. This book has a good foundation. It should imitate the stability and thickness of the previous period, draw it slowly, polish it carefully, and never push the progress or have any supernatural developments. Open, your current laying speed should not be too fast. Whether it is the college life or the scenery of the Black Corner Territory, there are many points where you can stop and savor it, and there is also some room for appropriate expansion. I understand that some people may want to see the world, but I personally think that haste makes waste. The most important thing is the description of fighting to break the world. It needs to be vivid and flesh-and-blood. I particularly appreciate the author's description of several companions in the academy. Each has its own characteristics and goals. When reading, other people in this world no longer look like NPCs. This sense of immersion in reading "as if I have really traveled into the Douqi Continent" is very important. I hope the author will be more precise rather than too quick, and polish the story carefully. Finally, I hope that the story of Dou Po will be written longer this time ~ One Million Dollar Man is not enough

I have read more than 150 chapters. To be honest, from what I have seen, if the protagonist is of the same level as Xiao Yan, Xiao Yan can be kicked to death on the side of the road.

I was catching up on the update recently and saw that both the fallen heart flames were left in Canaan, and I was already full of questions. I closed this article and said that I would continue to read it. However, after more than 220 chapters, I brought it up again. What does it mean? I won't ask you to apologize for the plot, but if you stand upright after being beaten, if there is something wrong with the plot and you don't want to change it, then can you just pretend to be mute? After the reader said a few words, he had to explain himself later, and the reason was very lame, stubborn and conceited.

There is almost no interaction between Dou Po fandom and Xiao Yan. Only in the first few chapters, I lived in the Xiao family and didn't have many acquaintances. (Except for one harem member, Xun'er) The protagonist is Hu Xiaoyan, who had foresight all the way and took advantage of the opportunity to enter the harem in advance and become an emperor. (It's hard to comment. If you say it's history, there's nothing bad about it. If you say it's fragrant, it doesn't have much flavor. It makes me speechless that a book can be so bland.)

The pig script has no advantage in its inherent attributes, but it has also been upgraded to have a strong combat power. The fighting power of the women around me is basically higher than that of pig's feet.

The author still has his own thoughts and ideas in writing this book. It is more careful and rigorous, and it is more comfortable to read. I hope to continue to work hard and keep it up (many authors wrote very seriously in the early days, but after reaching Douhuang Douzong Zhongzhou, they began to neglect thinking and became more and more sloppy). Every time you enter a new map, you still have to think about it. On the basis of fully respecting the original setting, write something new of your own, which can be self-explanatory and let readers and audiences see that the author has his own serious thinking and mature and systematic ideas. At present, I am optimistic about the author's work. I hope you can stick to the level of the opening chapter to the end.