Wuji!

The book is seventeen years old and represents only my personal opinion. Updated so far, in fact, for the comments about palace fights and intrigues criticized by many readers, I think this book is outstanding. It is true, human nature is true, and these descriptions also improve the three-dimensionality of the characters to a certain extent. People in a dormitory have their own characteristics, very three-dimensional, not facial makeup, and to a certain extent, this kind of writing has It's worthwhile, writing fantasy mixed with a little talk about human nature, but this degree is just right, and the current grasp is quite good, but it is not enough; in addition, the portrayal of martial arts is much weaker than the character interaction. After all, this is a fantasy novel, let alone fighting. Regarding the advancement of martial arts, it only throws away the setting and lacks detailed outlines. The next novel must make up for this weakness to be more brilliant.

A good book that is rare to see in a year and worth recommending. If you perform as usual, it will definitely be a big hit🔥.

I finished reading it in one sitting. The plot is slow and occasionally has small climaxes. It's really good, but it's just too little.

This book is a rare masterpiece among similar books (martial arts literature). The characters are meticulously depicted, the human world is rich, and the plot is ups and downs and reasonable. It is a real group portrait novel, unlike many similar online articles that only describe the protagonist's fights and killings, and the continuous use of methods to become stronger. Advantages: Supporting character portrayal, protagonist's inner choice Disadvantages: The feudal social background and crude cultivation system make the plot a bit monotonous. In the foreseeable future, the protagonist will repeat the same strategy as before and continue to become stronger. After all, state is the foundation, and the protagonist may continue to be stubborn. (This shortcoming is fatal when chasing updates) I hope the author can write more attractive and novel plots in the future.

I don't know how to say hello, I don't even have the desire to see it, just keep raising it!

Come on, keep updating. I saved more than 50 chapters for a month and finished them at noon.

The protagonist leaves his wife and daughter behind and embarks on a new path. Just now it suddenly occurred to me that this gave me the feeling of being like Xiaozhi. Every time he goes to a new area, he leaves all his Pokémon behind and replaces them with a new batch 😁

Very well written. Come on, author. I am really disgusted by those "gods". They are useless snacks that can't survive a day without the system. They can't catch up with others even if they hang up once. They have to open a hundred or a thousand times.

I found that this book had not been updated in the bookshelf. When I opened it, I realized that a month had passed, and I realized something was wrong. If I had known, I shouldn't have ordered the second volume, it would have been a waste of my money and time. The first volume of this book has a very pure taste, the feeling of a little person starting from scratch. The wife he married was also very unconventional. She was not a eldest lady, but just a little maid. The couple worked together, with the male protagonist outside and the female protagonist inside. During the period, they kept describing how loving they were and how kind the protagonist was to his wife. Although the protagonist is successful, he marries an equal wife inexplicably, claiming it is for marriage and to balance the power, so I tolerate it. The second volume was even more outrageous when he went to the city. He didn't want his first wife, nor did he want his concubine. He had already strived to become a strong man among the congenital, and he was inexplicably married into an aristocratic family and became the son-in-law - it was really outrageous. I have only heard that the protagonist becomes a son-in-law when he has nothing in the early stage, and relies on his father-in-law's family to make a living. Later, if the father-in-law's family is good to him, he will take them away, and if they are not good to him, he will kick them away. I have never heard of someone who started from scratch when he had nothing, struggled to a certain stage, and gained a certain level of strength and power, and then suddenly ran away to become a son-in-law, and even left his original wife in the countryside. What kind of martial arts version of Chen Shimei is this? You said you left your first wife in the countryside for safety. In fact, who can't find out that she is your wife? If you really want to provoke an enemy, can she hide from you? In fact, it is inconvenient to pick up a young lady with your original wife, and it is inconvenient to be your son-in-law! When I left for the capital, I stopped acting. I took the eldest daughter with me, but the original wife continued to be left in the countryside without any care. She didn't even send a letter, didn't take a look on the way, and didn't leave any pills or anything like that... Don't make any excuses about having to cut off contact with her to avoid danger. I didn't see the protagonist encountering any danger. I only saw that the original wife had been left in the countryside by the protagonist for more than ten years. Let alone anyone, he didn't even send a dime. You only have three wives and four concubines, and you still engage in this kind of operation of getting promoted and getting rich and abandoning the wife who is a loser... To me, this book has completely changed its taste, so I will just put it on the bookshelf for a while. After a while, I remembered that the good guy has not been updated for a month, which is a waste of my time and money!

I have basically been following the whole process until now. It started to feel a little weird when I entered the secret realm with Shangguan Yunchang. Then after I moved into Shangguan's house, I no longer felt like the previous chapters. In the latest chapters, there was even a badly written routine of pretending to be a god and holding a meeting, which made me give up immediately.

The logic is okay and the plot is solid, but there are too many explanations and inner thoughts. The plot doesn't advance much after one chapter, and there are a lot of psychological activities in the explanations.

I was one of the first to read the book. The reason why I gave up the book was that I had a petty spirit at the beginning and no grand world view. I naturally couldn't continue writing this way.

Xiao He succeeds and fails also. The biggest problem of this author is that he is petty. Your advantage is that you are good at writing about human affairs and sophistication, but you have to understand that when the protagonist is incompetent, writing about human affairs and sophistication is very good and attracts readers. But I have written hundreds of thousands of words, and I still keep writing about all kinds of human ways and sophistication. This fantasy world view is that the strong are respected. If you don't have the strength to talk about human relations and the world, who has the strength to talk about it every day? ?

Still remember the promise you made when it first came on the shelves... Where did you learn from the pain? It's a waste that I've been following up on updates for so long since the new era. I took the postgraduate entrance examination and studied for a while. Looking back, I just died.

This book by the divine author is bad and has been blocked.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates one hundred thousand words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I heard that calves born in sheep pens will not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that we have inherited the etiquette and skills of our ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say. However, Poujie cannot get royalties and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when serving people, the words have often been very intense. If they are not intense, they will not be able to touch the heart of the person doing the work. Strong words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it.

I think this speed is okay. This is obviously not about writing fast articles. Slow work will produce fine work. Come on, author, don't be affected.

Before I added this book to my bookshelf, I read it in one go and it felt very smooth. It was a good book and it felt very refreshing. But after I joined it, it was over. I only updated two chapters every day, and then I was crazy about it. Just like the comments, many people said it was watery. In fact, this is not a shortcoming. Like the author, You can write as much as you want, but you should at least advance the main plot every day. For example, it's okay if you write two pieces, but you can at least write two more to cover the main plot, or you can write two pieces and one piece at a time like this to improve the supporting characters, or write about other world views, or other random things. Write the main plot in one page, don't write two pieces like this every day, then what do you think, brother? Seeing that it has been 9 days since April 1st after your protagonist broke through the realm for the second time, you have updated Chapter 16. At this time, you will talk about those wheels. To repeat, the main line seems to have not advanced much. In fact, many times you just think about it and it doesn't matter. This is not a shortcoming, but the problem is that you have more and you need to update more. You update two chapters every day and you still do this. What should you do?

The book is very good, but it is water, and the inner drama is real water.

It's a eunuch! ! ! ! It's a pity, but I still like this Gou Daowen novel. The protagonist Zhuang Jin has unlimited golden fingers and a cautious behavior. Unfortunately, because of the author's family hereditary disease - heart disease, the novel became a eunuch. The update was suddenly stopped, the leave request note disappeared, and it is not known whether the author is still alive... I hope the author is safe and sound, and I look forward to the completion of the novel! ! !

The author cannot do more than one update a day. Just like Zhuang Jin will need more and more martial arts resources to progress, as the author updates more, the readers' desire to read will become stronger. At least two updates a day can barely satisfy it! The author doesn't think about it?

I gave up the book when I saw Chapter 176 of the first volume. It was a wise move on my part.

The main plot can be done quickly. You are a genius character. The plot needs to be advanced. At present, the innateness is not yet reached. There are still many realms in the future. Get out of the novice village as soon as possible. It is possible to become a god.

Such a great setting, such a great book, I'm speechless

I feel like the author doesn't want to write, maybe he really has a physical problem 🙂🙂🙂

I didn't finish reading the first book. Some people said that the second volume of this book was average, but I personally felt that it really got better in the second volume. It really looked good and entered the stage of exciting writing. The first volume felt that the foreplay was too long but it was okay. However, the controversial point of this book is that it is not a mindless exciting novel, so it pays a little more attention to details. Therefore, the shortcoming of this book is that there are too few updates. When will the author release more updates? ? ? I saved it for a month and finished reading it in two days. I also voted for your monthly subscription.

Finally read another book, I have been in a state of book shortage. I feel that the author has written some of the experiences he has learned into the novel. It is not the kind of world view shaped by children, but something that he also feels the same way. Moreover, it is also mixed with Marxist philosophy, and the primary and secondary contradictions are written out. There is something, I bought it with my monthly pass. It may be that you really need experience to write words that are smooth and attractive.

Your book has been copied again. If you don't mind, I will copy it too.

The monthly pass is given to you. When can the protagonist go back and see his three previous wives?

The author will update quickly, and I will give you 10,000 points