The Road to Eternal Life Starts from Yitian

It's obviously well written, but the rating on the external website is not high. The main reason is that the force level is too low. It's funny to fight with bandits after practicing magical skills (you shouldn't kill a hundred people with one sword energy instantly). The invincible one is still so cowardly to the emperor. The protagonist doesn't have the perspective of an extraordinary person at all. I read the author's explanation on the external website (I'm afraid) Bai supported me), I just want to say that divine grace is like the sea, divine power is like prison, just show your power (no emperor is not afraid of death), but a man who is about to become a god bows to mortals (this is the first time I see such a protagonist), his character is too bad, he is just a child with a knife, this is a big poisonous point, I hope the author pays attention to it.

What are women doing in male videos? Damn it.

Well. . . . Nowadays, system books are no longer popular, and it is a system that can communicate. How should I put it? Nowadays, when readers read books, the more powerful the protagonist's cheats are, the less they want to read them. The bigger the cheats are, the more readers will think that the protagonist is more useless. If the cheats can still communicate like this, it will be even more boring. . .

Transformation is not the poison, the poison is the protagonist's poor state of mind. I completely can't understand why at the end of Yitian World, the protagonist is "afraid" of Zhu Yuanzhang and is so respectful to him but still feels so guilty.

Why did I run from Tomato to the starting point?

Can the author reply to your female channel? First of all, the protagonist's strength has reached the level of transcendence and sainthood. Second, when facing several mortals and bandits, including the emperor, he behaves like a coward... Just like the old novels written by female channels! He clearly has the strength to overcome the tribulation and destroy the country in one strike, but he is afraid of the emperor

What age has it been? You still write this kind of transgender literature, which makes you alienate yourself from readers.

The protagonist seemed to be mentally retarded. He persisted for 5 chapters and eventually died of poison. . .

What kind of perverts are watching?

Three Golden Chapters, what is this about? What year is it, it's 2025, and there is such a thing as system missions. The protagonist falls into a place called Lijiazhuang. This village is not big, with only a few hundred households. Is this human language? Do you think it's modern? In ancient times, it would have been good to have dozens of households.

Guo Jing's ability to learn the Taixuan Sutra is ridiculous. Shi Potian is a genius with extremely high understanding and a pure heart. Guo Jing is far behind.

Abnormal, sometimes crying, sometimes feminine, abandon the trap

Everything you can do belongs to yourself! It's so cowardly that it doesn't have any character at all, and it doesn't have any fairy spirit at all. Instead, it smells of wretchedness.

There are too many poisonous points, friends who want to watch it should be mentally prepared

It's pretty good. It makes full use of Lao Zhang's talent, but it's too dependent on him. He doesn't venture into the world on his own, and he doesn't have any grudges. The plot is monotonous, and he just went through the dungeon in a daze. Also, the system is really not good. There are too many things, there will be duplication, and the front and back are inconsistent. I'll change the system later, make it simpler, come on!

Does this novel look so weird? Slipping away

Women are not suitable for writing novels on men's channels. They are too small-minded and have no structure. It would be a big deal to spend all day talking.

Why go shooting vultures when you are already in the realm of Yitian? Abusing food? Wouldn't it be enough to go directly to Xue Zhong or Datang as you wrote?

After reading two chapters, 1 is that the system can communicate, 2 is that the writing is procrastinating and the protagonist talks nonsense.

I haven't even started watching yet, but the result is too cheap. This is the starting point. The novel recommended by the Chinese website is rubbish

It sucks. The protagonist's IQ is no more than 60. He is a pure fool and has nothing interesting to watch.

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