Gentlemen, It's Time to Enter the Ten Thousand Souls Banner.

The only point of dissatisfaction is that the Incense God Way is obviously the most primitive sacrifice system that has been gradually developed, but it is arranged on the head of the bald donkey I laughed out loud when I first entered Northern Xinjiang, and almost gave up the pit How about the author later add an upgrade journey to further trace the origin It happens to be paved with formations in Northern Xinjiang, and even the world. It is normal to unearth some primitive god relics, and it can be upgraded, right?

I browsed through the starting point list and found nothing that suited my taste. I saw this book in the daily guide. After reading a few chapters, I felt that it was very suitable for my taste, so I kept reading. So far, the impression is very good, but after a glance at the data, it seems that it is not very good. Author, if you can see this post, please continue to persevere. The book is definitely a good book. The only one on my bookshelf now is yours and The Dance of the Magic Power. Please keep writing, I believe you will become popular!

"Master, I have one last thing to tell you..." "The eighteenth should be avoided, Master!" Chen Ye sat cross-legged on the moldy futon and yawned. The old devil suddenly sat up in the midst of his dying illness: "Evil man! I was a man known as the 'Pinduoduo in the World of Seizing the Body' back then! If it weren't for your poor qualifications..." Before he finished speaking, the candle on the altar table burst into flames three meters high. Chen Ye looked at the third shadow that suddenly appeared on the wall, and suddenly felt blessed: "Are you sure you are running a buy-one-get-one-free sale?" "You just realized it now?" Mo Ci's withered hands suddenly came at him with the momentum of a square dancing lady grabbing eggs, "I'm here as a teacher." What you are growing in your dantian is the newest type of leek in the world of immortality... Ah no, it's soul-seizing silk! " "Be serious!" The old devil's angry voice came from the dantian, "I didn't see that I was... Hey, where are you taking your hands?"

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The writing is a bit outrageous. Every time the protagonist gets something on the front foot, an opponent will appear on the back foot that requires this ability to crack. It's really a waste of time for readers to eat for free.

There seems to be no difference between the Fengshen Bang and the Ten Thousand Souls Banner.

The retreat point is to build your own arena and then carve out the formations in advance. Then let others fight you like this. How great and upright it was originally written. This whole thing is a complete hypocrite.

The difference is that if you lose, you will get the Ten Thousand Souls Banner, and if you win, you will get the Human Emperor Banner.

In this world of immortality, people take jujube pills. No one has ascended, there are no legends of reincarnation, and the incomplete Buddhist scriptures have become heavenly books. Cultivation as an immortal depends not on cultivation, but on human nature and sophistication. The world revolves around the protagonist. I wonder where there is time travel, but it is just the last fantasy of an archaeologist before he dies.

The protagonist emphasizes every day that he has a clear conscience, so he also has a clear conscience about being in two different places, right? Two very powerful girls gave him their resources and knew each other. He also knew that these two liked him. Hey, he didn't refuse either of them, and he didn't even show any guilt at all. Why did he say that he is xxx because he comes from a modern society? He comes from a modern society, but he still fantasizes about three wives and four concubines and has a clear conscience, right? When I saw two girls liking him in the early stage, I could still accept it. It was normal for the protagonist to have multiple suitors, but it was abnormal for the protagonist not to choose one. When Mo Suixin said the sentence "The big deal is to be small for him," I was completely disgusted and abandoned the book. The author is a remnant of feudalism, hurry up and disperse. Of course, this does not mean that this is the only problem. There are many other problems. The author is not willing to give the protagonist any real hardships, and gives the green light throughout the whole process. He says that there are no double standards, but in fact, there is still a vague sense of double standards. The standards of good and evil are based on the needs of the plot. The only explanation is that the protagonist actually lacks a stable moral standard, resulting in a "clear conscience."

Pull the hook and throw it away, the evil way can never beat the righteous way. If the righteous way is a hypocrite, then he will pretend to be a gentleman all his life, and "hypocrite" is a definition word, not a questioning word, and half of being kind is a choice. I would like to ask if you are a demon yourself, and you use yourself to save others, how can you trust others who are also demons? It is good if you don't stab him twice or he doesn't stab you twice. Even if you conquer it, the probability of it betraying you is very high. I believe that you who are also demons should know better than anyone else. Even if there is a very low probability that demons will prosper, it will not last long. As mentioned before, they are all despicable. You despicable person, why do others always succumb to you? Another situation is that you, who is originally a demon, will change to the righteous path, and then massacre the demon, because you are already at a juncture of tea, rice, oil and salt, and a good environment is more conducive to your longevity. Therefore, the demon will basically die miserably in the end, and even if there are a few survivors, they will come ashore clean. So this introduction is unattractive and off-putting.

I don't know why, but what I watched earlier was very attractive to me. I followed it day by day, but starting from the Rogue Cultivator Alliance, it suddenly became boring.

I haven't played Zhihu in five years. I hope you're fine, fat cat.

It doesn't mean that writing novels must be full of ups and downs. You can also write brilliantly in everyday essays and Qing Xiu essays. But the conflicts in this book are all like playing house. The various adventures of the pig's feet are all arranged in advance, the master and the master are cleared up, and the two sects in conflict are like children playing house. Plain as running water, but not like boiled water

The protagonist is like a clay statue in a temple, neither human nor holy. There are too many personal items from the author.

What does it have to do with the protagonist whether the casual cultivator dies or not? What does it matter whether the demonic path is prosperous or not? What kind of character is the protagonist going to establish? Isn't it better to have revenge and cultivate immortality without having anything to do?

Why is it that Buddhism is the bad guy again? I really don't know what's wrong with the statement of putting down the butcher's knife and becoming a Buddha immediately.

There are no reviews for this good book, so I can't understand it. Qidian is also a place that ranks based on seniority. If you are not well-known, you really won't get recommendations. The books on the monthly ticket ranking list make me want to vomit.

The protagonist is becoming more and more holy to the naked eye, rushing to do useless things

It can be seen that the intention of this book may be to create a fair and just world, where people who do bad things will be punished. Suppose first that the "retribution" in this world disappears, and the protagonist builds another one through his own efforts, and returns the world to a bright future? It is not difficult to see that the protagonist created some eighteen levels of hell, thunder and so on, and he also has the word "karma" in his name. But as I write, I abandon my strengths. The more I write, the more I become constrained. The author should be better at writing about kind-hearted characters who use their intelligence and wisdom to unite multiple forces to achieve things they cannot do themselves, but he is not good at writing about battles, especially those with a larger number of people. Compared with the old man, Chen Ye's starting point was too low, which made him poor at the beginning. The master he followed could only follow the instructions and didn't know anything about it, so he was given the title of Doraemon. Old Bone has been a legend since the beginning. Although he calls himself a parallel importer, he is still at a higher level than most people. The group friends he has known from the beginning are big guys, such as Bone Dragon, Headless Horseman, Dungeon Queen... As a scholar who is hundreds of years old, he knows many secrets from the beginning, and he can also inquire through the chat group. His knowledge reserve and information channels are very complete. Chen Ye didn't, so this book has a long paragraph, a few pages of background introduction, and only dialogue, making the book boring. The camp setting has also tricked the protagonist, or the path he chose has tricked himself. Judging from the beginning, he is still quite a naughty young man. While mocking the master, he used the Ten Thousand Soul Banner to save his soul. Later, he even used arguments to break the defense of the Kai Chan practitioner. It's quite interesting here, and it's refreshing enough. Ever since he chose his future practice method, the story became strange. He restricted himself because before he could judge others, he had to judge himself first, and before he could criticize others with morality, he needed to be clean. This resulted in him not being able to do many things. He needs to be honest and not resort to crooked ways to save the country. Character behavior becomes rigid and the story becomes streamlined. Here the author completely abandons his area of ​​expertise. In contrast, Lao Gu is much more cunning, and his unique advantage is that he is naturally evil. If others criticize him based on morality, he can be regarded as a barbarian. He can cheat, cheat, and backstab superficial allies. This kind of layer cake can make it easier for the author to hide information and mislead readers to write a big twist. Chen Ye can't do it. He has gone ashore and stood in the good camp, and he has even stood up for himself. The result is that many plots seem to have no layout at all and suddenly become deus ex machina. There just happens to be something that can solve the problem just encountered, such as the hair of the dream-eating tapir. The story becomes less and less ups and downs. When characters meet, they start to have long standing dialogues. The battles are like playing house, which is not exciting or enjoyable at all. The author not only fails to promote his own strengths, but also exposes his shortcomings...

The writing at the front is really attractive, and the writing becomes more and more attractive as you go to the back. . . How to say it? I can't describe it, it probably just feels like a lump in the back. . .

The world in this book should be the low-martial world in Xianxia, ​​right? There is not even six paths of reincarnation, and there are dozens of talented people from the Qinghe Sword Sect, the largest force in the spiritual world. This world feels like one of the small worlds under the three thousand worlds.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I would like to say something about it. It's typical of starting high and going low. The first 100 chapters are quite interesting and there is still a sense of contrast. It can be regarded as a good novel. However, it gradually started to go off the rails in the end and turned into a cool novel. It is a brainless and cool novel. The protagonist is the smartest, and the rest The supporting characters support the protagonist's intelligence and intelligence. They say that the villains are evil, but the description of evil is not enough. They also say that the good guys are capable of fighting, but without the protagonist, they are completely useless. The character creation is also very stretched. I really don't know if they hired a gunman to write for them. This is too biased.

Is it written directly by AI afterwards? I feel like a piece of shit is being fed into my mouth 😰

This novel looks good in the early stages, but it sucks in the middle and later stages. The protagonist's aura is too strong. All the problems encountered by the protagonist can basically be easily solved. Cultivation problems and the sequelae of elixirs that others cannot solve can be solved by the protagonist just by doing some research. When he was targeted and falsely accused by the Zhengdao Sect many times, a third-party boss happened to help testify and clear his name each time. The protagonist almost never has the experience of truly failing miserably and falling into a desperate situation. The development along the way is too smooth and the character growth is not convincing. The supporting characters are poorly created, and they are basically tool men. The character setting in the book is also very simple. Almost all decent monks are stubborn, hypocritical, and love to target the protagonist. The villains either do evil without any brains, or they surrender directly to the protagonist when they see it. Whether it is the heroine, the protagonist's master, or the disciples of the sect, none of them have their own story lines or personal thoughts in the middle and later stages. The whole process is just to set off the protagonist and promote the plot. The characters are too fake. And then the pacing of the whole book sucks. The early plot is compact and interesting, but after the protagonist establishes the Huangquan Sect, the plot begins to falter. The same concept is often repeated over and over again, trivial sect affairs are frequently written about, and the main plot progresses very slowly. Moreover, many important plot twists are very abrupt, there is not enough foreshadowing in the early stage, and the finale ends in a hurry, and many contents are not explained clearly. This book focuses on determining good and evil based on cause and effect, without distinguishing between good and evil, but there are obvious double standards in the plot. Decent mistakes will be infinitely magnified and criticized, and problems with the protagonist and his own people will be easily forgiven. At the same time, the combat power and magic weapon settings in the book are inconsistent. The ability of the Ten Thousand Soul Banners is easily enhanced later, and the combat power system is seriously broken. Many of the foreshadowings laid in the early stages were not explained clearly in the end, resulting in the logic of the entire book not being rigorous enough. Something like shit😡😡

A lot of foreshadowing was laid but not recovered. In the front, even small things like the annihilation of the Mirage Sect are arranged, but in the back there is a lot of foreshadowing and the final battle and marriage are not directly written. This is unreasonable.

In the next hundred or so chapters, it can be seen that many details have been omitted in order to speed up the plot, and many changes are particularly abrupt. There were also many errata. For example, Demon Lord Fei Lian and Chen Ye clearly promised mutual non-aggression, but later it turned into a master-servant treaty. It's too far-fetched for Demon Lord Fei Lian, a centuries-old demon to suddenly become enlightened and want to atone for his sins and follow the right path. I also want to complain that the image of the Demon Sect in the book is too thin and superficial, even though the basic setting of the Demon Sect puts profit first, leaving moral integrity and integrity behind. But if the demon sect had no rules and regulations, the inheritance would have been broken long ago. The master wanted to treat his apprentice as a furnace and kill him whenever he wanted. The apprentice only wanted to deceive the master and destroy his ancestors. If fellow sects only wanted to fight to the death, and there were only backstabbings between sects without hesitation, it would be impossible for the demon sect to unite and pass on to three generations. You can refer to the Blood Sword Ancestor of Liancheng Jue. Although he is harmful to others, he is good to his disciples. For example, in Journey to the West, the Three Demon Kings of the Lion and Camel Kingdom also developed a strict monster management system. The foreshadowing is very good, and the world view is also very grand. It originally had a lot of potential, but it would be a pity to end it hastily. But at least the ending echoes the title, and it can be considered a sequel.

The final BOSS is the deer from Antarctica. The main character is awesome and has read a whole book. Later, it seems that he suddenly jumped up to fight the BOSS, but in fact he stayed in the mortal world to make soy sauce. 😎 This novel was originally quite good, but I don't know where it fell apart at the beginning. . .

Running away is okay in the early stage, but in the mid-term, the feeling of destiny becomes stronger and stronger. It doesn't feel like cultivating immortals, it feels like everyone is acting together.

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