The Mechanical Master of a Certain American Comic

After reading two hundred chapters, I can confirm that the author's emotional drama is really bad. The harem is the most difficult to control, because it is easy for all the female protagonists to be homogeneous and marginalized. However, the author did this and homogenized all women. Japanese light novels have brought new templates to the harem, such as Tsundere, Genki, Sango, Married Woman, etc. The characters are templated, and you just need to fit them in. However, if you remove these templated things, you will find that these women actually have no characteristics. Personally, I feel that the harem is a very difficult thing to control. True love is not produced in a streamlined manner. The author may have added a lot of things in his mind but did not express them, so this situation occurred. I think the harem is very toxic, and it is all vases. I don't reject the harem, but I hope I can write about it well, instead of writing about vases. I don't know how many people have played The Witcher 3. The depiction of two women gives the Polish guy a headache. Normal, modern, intellectual women will not share men, just like we will not agree that a wife has a husband. Therefore, if you want to write a harem emotional drama, you really need to be excellent. This is not a cheap label to attract readers, but a test of the author's writing skills. In addition, the author felt that it was off topic after making the robots be the same as humans. What is the meaning of such machines? In fact, it feels like "XX Summoner is in Marvel". I don't know if the author should read it or not. I'd still be a little unhappy if it was deleted after writing it for so long.

In fact, I'm curious. Many American comics like to use Orientals as protagonists, but they also like to include plots in which Orientals are discriminated against. Is this self-abuse?

Forget about the military setting, it was very popular back then. However, at first I instantly recognized Tony as a shithead and confirmed the Marvel world. Later, I turned a blind eye to other Marvel characters such as Doctor Strange and Daredevil, as if I had never heard of them. I was so familiar with Iron Man before and knew the Avengers world. If I knew it so well, you can't tell me about the others?

By the way, the protagonist's ability to see people's emotions is a bit questionable. What color would it be if the person's emotions were too complicated for a moment? It's colorful but it's transparent, or the emotion is too deep and the color of his face changes. Does the protagonist laugh? Also, if a person with a bright color and too serious emotions suddenly appears in front of the protagonist, will it blind the protagonist's eyes? Will people who regulate their emotions too much have no expression on their face, only a natural monochromatic mosaic...

The plot design is so embarrassing... The protagonist is not short of money, dislikes trouble and knows that Hell's Kitchen is full of troubles, so he goes to Hell's Kitchen to rent a house. Obadiah approached the protagonist to discuss cooperation. The protagonist analyzed a bunch of benefits of cooperation, and then said: Sorry, I refuse! There are also some small details that are painful to read, and I can't stand it for more than ten chapters...

I didn't like this book very much. Anyway, I really couldn't stand the previous book. Marvel's Endless Superpowers, Claire breaks in and kneels to Claire's father. In order to accept his daughter, he was imprisoned by his father-in-law for torture and electrocution research. He is also eager to protect the heroine's family and prove himself like a dog. From there it can be seen that the author does not know how to write about emotions. After reading the comment section of this book, I found that I was right.

The radioactive ones can do that and so on, and their function is to communicate with the fire source plane to obtain the fire source energy. Then I remember that magic is about communicating with dark dimensions to harness dark power. Is it theoretically possible to communicate with the source plane of fire?

And the most poisonous thing is that many losers in reality have traveled to other worlds, and after persisting in becoming beings who can breathe in seconds, there is still no heroine to follow a group of men. Why are you such a loser in modern times if you are so perseverant and will not be tempted?

What is it like to read a eunuch novel : My money was wasted again.

I read seventy or eighty chapters, which made me feel sick to my stomach.

Have you ever understood it? Just write blindly

The author has no outline at all. He writes whatever comes to mind. None of the decent villains have an IQ. No wonder they are eunuchs.

What kind of rubbish book is this? What is it about?

How can I put it, they are both the source of fire, but the Cybertronian Star God Downey next door is much more powerful.

Stop! ! ! This isn't Cybertron at all! You didn't look for the official data settings at all, you were just talking nonsense!

Gu Yi was not born when Hela was sealed. Does she know Gu Yi? "It turned out to be the learned master." Thor, a 1,500-year-old brother, has never seen Hela. Gu Yi, a Ming Dynasty man, is about 600 years old?

No wonder Eunuch, the plot has not been arranged at all. Before Iron Man came out, the Extremis virus came out first. I was so anxious.

It's just a group of gay guys who only watch the heroine and ruined the atmosphere of Qidian 🤓

The most suitable development route for the protagonist should be an armed robot, an intelligence unit, and a logistics production unit. Needless to say, the first two have already been manufactured by the protagonist. It is best for the latter one to create a scientific research type robot and let him manufacture equipment for the protagonist. Otherwise, it would be too wasteful to rely solely on fire source control. If it goes a little higher, an assembly line can be created to specialize in the production of the kind of robots in the Terminator, the T800T900, with its own independent power as backing. When the time comes, do whatever you want, and the power system will not collapse.

There are some details that aren't written well enough, like saying um, Daredevil Matt by his first name in front of others.

Why not give the protagonist an angel gene engine?

Does the protagonist lick Agents of SHIELD? Just lick it and stop watching it

After reading more than seventy chapters, I can't help but complain. It's okay for the protagonist to have a harem, but two minors are a bit perverted.

The first one is me. Come on, author. Take good care of you

It's not that good. In the first chapter, I was directly persuaded to quit. The characters didn't match and the mechanism was weird.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

Coming to Marvel with the Fire Source, it is basically a collection of movie universes. The ideas are quite interesting, and the character creation is not bad. The interaction between various robots with unique personalities and the original characters has continued to influence the direction of the world. It is quite interesting, at least the ideas can be considered qualified. The problem is that apart from the imagination, the plot is not attractive enough, the writing is okay, the protagonist's personality is okay and acceptable, and there is no problem in watching it for a long time. What is currently involved is mainly related to Iron Man, Hulk, Avengers and mutants. The protagonist's ability is not so much the source of fire as mechanical control, various black technologies, relying on black technologies to conquer the world in Marvel. I suggest the author work on the plot, it's not gripping enough. . . . It's easy to chase and then give up.

It is said that the assassin's hidden sword is placed in that position for concealment. The protagonist will not be idle to assassinate. Besides, wrist guards are quite conspicuous in modern society. Why should we give up the huge advantage of hitting people with fists and open our palms? Wouldn't it be better to put it on the back of the hand or Wolverine style?

The pace is too fast. Ten years of scientific research results are compressed into one year. The plot is ten years compressed into three days. Even if the protagonist is assisted by an intelligent robot, it is too exaggerated. ❤️🤭

Analysis of "The Mechanical Master of a Certain American Comic" (1) The protagonist himself is the inheritor and supreme master of Cybertron's mechanical civilization. He has the ability to use the energy of the fire source to create products of Cybertron technology, and to activate intelligent sequence mechanical life forms, the so-called Transformers. The Smart Sequence Transformers are rare units to a certain extent among the protagonist. In game technical terms, they cannot be mass-produced as heroic units. The upper limit of the Smart Sequence will increase with the energy limit of the fire source energy.