
The Eternal Divine Mind of Swallowed Star
吞噬星空之永恒神脑
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- Completed
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- 2.0M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 6mo ago
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- Qidian
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After reading more than one hundred and sixty chapters, let me complain. The previous plots are okay, and the settings are not wrong. But here comes some outrageous plot points. First, Marquis Poyu became a foreign spy, and also killed many core members who came for training. As a human immortal, becoming a foreign spy only means one possibility, that is, she is enslaved by the soul. It is clearly stated in the original work that she had someone kill Luo Feng because she wanted to take revenge on King Zhenyan, and it was also because of King Zhenyan that she was not killed later. If she was a foreign spy, she would never survive. Even if King Zhenyan owed her a debt, he would kill her, because the powerful man in the universe understood that soul slavery cannot be saved. Moluo dared to pursue Luo Feng in the Magic Mountain openly, and Bo Lan and the others who came to the Magic Mountain for some unknown reason joined forces with Po Yuhou's men. Po Yuhou sent people to hunt down Luo Feng. Before he was exposed, he could still be a native hunting down the company's genius, which was within the scope of normal trials. But Moro's pursuit was different. The company explicitly prohibited the company's geniuses from killing each other. Luo Feng could pass on the evidence as soon as he opened the virtual universe video. This was ironclad evidence, and Moro was dead. In the past, Morrow always tried to trick geniuses at critical moments. He did not let those geniuses use the virtual universe to leave evidence. If there is no evidence, they can still argue. If there is evidence, it will be over. Unless he was enslaved by a foreign race, I can't think of a reason for him to do this, but if he was enslaved, the foreign race would never waste the value of this chess piece like this.
Shennong (Impressions of Chapter 200)
I couldn't stand it after reading two hundred chapters Poisonous points: 1. In a time realm of the Black Dragon Mountain Empire, I got the unique Time Phoenix in the original universe (unique only 1000 times the genetic level), and then directly met the Lord of the Ice Peak, and then it was a journey of cheating without any scruples, boring 2. The heroine Ai Chen Caili In this section, Ai Chen is portrayed as a good girl, but it is just a gift, and her behavior with her mother-in-law is disgusting. She cannot agree to be together without money (10 million mixed yuan). Bah 3, Chapter 189, portrays the heroine as "the kind of best friend on the Internet who tricks behind the scenes", and wants to introduce a girlfriend to Rong Jun, and even Luo Feng, who has a wife and son. What's more important is that Ai Chen himself makes the protagonist love himself all the time. Backhand, she introduced her girlfriend to her best friend Xu Xin's husband, Luo Feng. I really couldn't stand it, and I wanted to continue reading, but when I took a step back, the more I thought about it, the more I felt sick, so I left. Advantages: After thinking about it, it is not easy for the author to write so much, and he cannot just talk about the poisonous points. 1. Go to the big level and level up a clone. The protagonist is far ahead. It's cool. 2. The earth is handled very well. It enters the universe in twenty chapters. Let all the foreigners immigrate to the outer world and establish the Chinese Universe Kingdom 3. The protagonist uses the prophet well and is decisive in killing. He takes the Locke Divine Water when he should. 4. The protagonist must repay the favor and gets the favor of the third princess of the Black Dragon Mountain Empire, giving her the chance to change her destiny against the will of heaven (Luo Feng's same model of the Twelve Peak Bloodline Starry Sky Behemoth has three clones, and a bunch of Hunyuan units are weak)
Let me analyze this book and the protagonist's cheating. The protagonist's Eternal Brain is a mechanical treasure. As for the grade? It is not said yet, but it can be inferred that it is at least the God King level, or even the Hunyuan level. The first one fuses a computer, giving the protagonist huge computing power. Powerful computing power does not represent physical properties, but if the computing power is excellent, it will be absolutely fast to comprehend various things. The second one merged with a mechanical spacecraft and had a mechanical clone. And gained an understanding of the laws of an immortal-level mechanical race. The protagonist only needs to continue to unblock memories and continue to learn to continuously improve. . Ten years later, Bolan can easily be defeated in the Universe Competition and remain in first place, no problem at all. After all, this is an immortal level of law understanding. As for what the third clone is merging with, I thought it should be merging with the earth. The earth itself is a special kind of treasure created by the mountain guest. The earth can be transformed into a planet-like life form, or it can be directly refined into treasures. It can improve your understanding and state of mind. The fourth clone should be fused with the blood blue crystal to directly gain insight into the laws of the Golden Beast God. You can also directly transform the Blood Blue Gold into a Gold Beast God. It's absolutely fine to wait until the protagonist becomes the master of the universe. Refining the Wu Kingdom's cosmic boat in the Cosmic Sea into his own clone. All the treasures there belong to the protagonist. And with a little repair, the world beast can be easily dealt with. For the fifth clone, you can choose a world beast. For the 6th clone, you can choose the original universe. For the seventh avatar, you can choose the continent of origin, refine this world into your own avatar, and directly become a world-class Chaotic Source. The only flaw of the protagonist is that the mastermind of the Eternal God Brain is easily destroyed. But the problem is that this is a Hunyuan level treasure. I don't think those immortals, those true gods, can destroy Hunyuan level treasures. I think the most terrifying thing is that the protagonist's eternal brain can fuse with anything to become wind-sheng, and there is no genetic restriction at all. There are no other restrictions, this is the most terrifying thing
The son must be used to it, wouldn't it be embarrassing to recognize his father just after traveling through time?
I heard that the heroine is Ai Chen, so I came
I hope the heroine's plot will be more detailed than the original work, otherwise the main character will always die alone after being devoured, and I will always feel that there is something missing
Devouring the big stage, don't come here if you are a small person. What do you think of the big person? Luo Feng has been the master of the universe for more than 200,000 years. If you are a small person, please go after him.
There is an earth chapter, but the pace is very fast and it is very comfortable to watch. It is not written in a slow and fussy way. It is a standard cool novel. Even if it ends within one million words, it is still worth reading.
Ai Chen! ! !
The writing is a flaw
The plot is okay, but the writing is too poor and there is no sense of immersion. On the other hand, there are some small settings that are different from the original work, but other problems are not big.
The author's aesthetic taste is really poor, and the pictures he sends are particularly ugly.