
Swallowed Star: I Became a Hunyuan Lord Through My Clones
吞噬星空:我靠分身成浑源领主
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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510Chapters
252Votes
8.8kRecs
66.7kFans
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I have always written about having a deep foundation, but there is no such thing as Devouring. Apart from gene multiples, Devouring only has the understanding of laws. There is no such thing as different foundations at the same level and with the same gene.
I'm going to go to the earth to collect a lot of people. This is so poisonous
This is the strongest early game I have ever seen in the Devouring fandom and the one with the lowest upper limit 😐
The author has great ideas
Before it was put on the shelves, there were several chapters of the Red Dust Heart-Refining plot, which was quite 6.
I read more than a dozen of them, and the writing is really like running water. I didn't mention the development after comprehending the laws. Later, I directly integrated the three laws in the genius battle trial tower, and then I didn't mention the weapons the protagonist used, what identity he cultivated, and soul defense and other techniques. 6
About the protagonist's route
In fact, I decided on the training route that the protagonist would take at the beginning, and the arranged Jin's clone was also predetermined. As we all know, Swallowing Guaxiao is basically not as good as the original work. The cheats I arranged for the protagonist are not big, but they are still special. It is not an invincible flow system, but it is still invincible in the front, because the protagonist is promoted very quickly, at least in the original universe, he is the fastest to become the master of the universe. But this is not the protagonist's real talent. His talent is divided. The protagonist waits until Jin World comes to the Universe Sea, and when he enters Jin World and merges with that clone, he will be his original self. At that time, his understanding and talents will be greatly increased, especially his soul talents. To put it simply, the route I designed for the protagonist is Dong Bo Snow Eagle. In space, the soul is the strongest. When the time comes, he will become the lord with the ultimate state of semi-chaotic source and soul. And he is also extremely talented in the law of fusion. The arrangement of Ruoxi is also based on this consideration. The protagonist will exercise his spiritual power. For him, it doesn't matter whether he is weak or strong. By the way, let me explain here. The chapters are a little unclear. The plot arranged now is that after Ruoxi was defeated by the protagonist with a sword, she wanted to surpass him, so she set up her opponent in his appearance for several years in the reincarnation battle, and then the protagonist's strength was far beyond her imagination. Mu Qiang is human instinct. She targets the protagonist, but finds that the gap between her and the protagonist is getting wider and wider. Then she changes from chasing to admiring and secretly falling in love. I think this plot has been arranged very reasonably. And the protagonist I wrote doesn't have any feelings for her now, and wants to pursue the avenue. Even before Dao Helu has expressed the protagonist's thoughts. I don't know how book friends understand that Ruoxi admires the protagonist because of this situation. The protagonist now has no expression for her secret love and even has a sense of alienation. Isn't this plot arrangement unreasonable? I just said that in the future, the protagonist may be arranged to have a spiritual transformation because of her. This process will not be affected because she is weak or strong. There are many ways to touch the soul, and I will not say it must be love. It may also be pity, death, touching, etc. There are many ways. Secondly, this is just a backup foreshadowing, which may or may not be used. As I said, there are many ways to touch the heart, and Ruoxi may not necessarily be used. Also, as I said in the story about Dao and Love, the world that swallows the stars is a world that is not suitable for falling in love, so even if Ruoxi is the heroine, I will not write too much about her. But again, if you don't write too much, you can't leave it out. You can't just suddenly have someone appear and suddenly become the heroine. Finally, I would like to thank you all for supporting this novel. The plot is originally a discussion process. If there are any unreasonable parts, you are welcome to comment. I will try to modify the places that can be modified, but some parts may not be modified due to plot reasons or too many chapters. I hope all book friends can understand
The main body accepted Luo Feng as his disciple, and then promoted his clone to become the disciple of the God King. What is your relationship with Luo Feng? Should you call him senior brother or apprentice? In the beginning, it would be better to let the Lord of Chaos City take Luo Feng as his disciple. The same teacher, Lord of Chaos City and Mountain Guest 😰 is really speechless, and the concept is really unpleasant.
It's really hard, how to write a fanfic without having to think too much
After reading the free chapters and some of the chapters on the shelves, I found that the writing method is the same as writing a martial arts novel, and is not suitable for writing Swallowing Starry Sky. Of course, the creativity of this novel is still good. The start of Jin World is equivalent to a high start. Everyone in the original universe is first-class. There is no shortage of inheritance and no treasure.
The more I write, the less interesting it becomes. Several chapters of Red Dust Refining the Heart are not finished.