The Magical Talents of Versatile Mage

Having read about thirty chapters, putting aside the romance for now, let's just talk about the protagonist's combat strength and the plausibility of the plot. Frankly, the protagonist's initial advantages are quite significant: he's the only son of powerful parents (able to ride a monarch-level contracted beast), possesses various top-tier talents, and has abundant resources (the resources…

Many plot points are completely nonsensical, and there are numerous scenes that the characters in the original work never encountered. These scenes were forced in just to give the protagonist a chance to play the hero and save the damsel in distress, which felt quite abrupt. In some scenes, the protagonist's reactions were so erratic that they felt incredibly awkward to read.

Sometimes you're trying to portray the protagonist as not being a saint, right? But that's not how you express it. It's not like seeing a group of ordinary people being killed in an ancient capital and not helping, then writing a long paragraph about how the world is a dog-eat-dog world, and how the protagonist is indifferent to those who aren't close to them. What's the point of writing that?

The very first chapter is awful. The magic hasn't even awakened, and the cheat ability is completely useless, yet they dare to rush to steal the Core of Earth Fire. They're truly fearless. Even if it were changed to the cheat ability resonating with the treasure, the treasure would be obtained on its own, or the cheat ability would sense something and act on its own, it wouldn't be this bad. 😅

Author, this is just too much! It's so unfair to the protagonist! In the chapter about the demonic system, the protagonist said that the demonic system would become a true magic system without any side effects, but later on, it came down to the same price as Mo Fan's use. Also, the protagonist worked himself to the bone to get a spot, while Mo Fan got it so easily.

Write the plot faster, and stop the protagonist from having so many overly compassionate moments; it's nauseating. Sometimes Mo Fan's aura is stronger than the protagonist's, which is also unpleasant. If he's the protagonist, write him properly; if not, just write whatever comes to mind. Sometimes I even feel like the protagonist is Mo Fan.

First of all, I accept multiple female leads, but you should at least write the emotions of each of them normally. If you can write them well, that would be even better. The emotional descriptions are so terrible; if you can't write emotions, don't write them at all. Just get straight to the action. Either give a simple summary; your emotional writing is terrible, yet you go into so much detail.

Unfortunately, in the end, Jiang Shaoxu failed to win.

I'm posting this here so readers can share their opinions!

Full-Time Magister fanfiction has fallen into a rule-based fantasy, similar to Douluo Continent fanfiction: regardless of any character's background or power level, they all have to participate in the World Academy Tournament. I've found this to be really easy to write—just copy the original work and add a fanfiction protagonist; give the protagonist some bragging rights, and that's it.