Sinners, Exile, and Rust-Colored Sovereignty

Does the male lead have sweaty hands that cause rust when touched🤔

Seeing this, I would like to express my opinion on this book. At present, the framework is fine and the characterization is quite full. However, there are still some flaws in the development of the storyline. If it can be avoided, it will undoubtedly make the book a holy place. Here I suggest the author to send me the saved manuscript. I can teach you how to modify the storyline for free. Don't be ignorant, you're welcome!

Share the most valuable things I bought during the Spring Festival holiday, they are so handsome

Congratulations on the ending (sprinkle flowers) The not-so-long experience has come to an end, and I leave my thoughts here for the reference of those who come after me (spoilers involved) First of all, my score for this book was 85 points until the middle period, 75 points for the penultimate and third volumes, and 78 points until the completion of the book. The character creation of this book is very good (provided it does not involve combat), and the humorous and somewhat "epidemic" language style is well combined with the apocalyptic (?) And wasteland style background. The disadvantage is that the style of this book is rather... Unique? It must be reminded that you will like the parts that hit the airwaves very much, but you will find the parts that don't hit the mark very boring or even boring. The next part is the part where I don't want to express my displeasure. Most of them are my thoughts after reading the book in one breath, and I will talk about whatever comes to my mind. In fact, the end of this book gave me the feeling that many Japanese comic settings are mixed together. What realms are unfolding, the army of kings, the god of war in hell, etc. If you understand it, you should smile knowingly To be honest, I felt that the book was finished a bit fast, and the strength of the protagonist group has not improved much, which also resulted in the final battle being basically a one-man show for the male protagonist. I won't talk about anything else. In the later stage, basically everyone in the protagonist group can expand their fields. Only Yiyu has not been used until the end of the book. The malice is too deep. . . And why is there only Qiu Mei in the wedding scene? As for Yiyu, overall it feels more like Qiu Mei being the single heroine than having multiple heroines. For example, in terms of the protagonist's battle with the enemy, this book was okay in the early stages, but in the middle and later stages, it was a bit too heavy-handed, because there were basically no evenly matched battles in the middle and later stages. The protagonist was beaten violently and then killed back. Especially in the King of the Army, the protagonist was turned into a puppet to cause chaos. This plot actually lasted five or six chapters!? I can't imagine how depressed the people who read it at that time would be. And why do I say take it lightly? I have to mention one thing. The bosses in the middle and late stages are all true CS. They will constantly disgust the male protagonist and the people around him, but when they are beaten, they will give a few understatements and then it will be over? Adam and the King of Law will not be mentioned, especially the King of Fog, who disgusted the protagonist group for 16 games, and did not break the defense in the end. This is the most weak. When I watched it, I felt that it was disgusting that someone else's weapon was dipped in feces, but in the end, there was no pain of being retaliated against. The game analogy is that if you just use conventional means and go through all the trouble to defeat a dung monster, you will not feel the joy of defeating a powerful enemy at all. You will only feel relief. When you think back, you will only think of how big this boss is. As for this series of bosses, one thing I have to say is that the process is a bit too homogeneous. It's all happening one after another, as if you're in heat suddenly, and it's all in the same form. It's a bit boring if repeated several times. There is also the last part of making dumplings. The author's malice was too great. In the end, the only victim was Sister Jiang. I'm really a bit speechless, which is why the final score is a little lower. It's like eating chocolate. When you start to reminisce after eating it, you find that there seems to be shit in it. If everything ends happily, can't everyone be resurrected?

When I saw the Huai Yan Dao Void Scroll, the main character was hidden again, and the Witch Scroll was carried over by Shenyin, I really couldn't resist this one. I feel like this book is written about a group portrait drama. I really don't like watching group portraits, so bye bye. The author's writing is very good, and the writing is not bad, but everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. See you in the next book.

The King of Little Witch Girls!

It's all your fault, I stayed up late again 💀

Where is Shennong? 😃

This book started to decline when the male protagonist changed the map. Every time the map was changed, it slipped a little. Whether it was the author's narration of the story or the characterization of the characters, the male protagonist's sense of existence became weaker in the later stages. There were more and more descriptions of the story background and supporting characters. The increase of female supporting characters and the awkward lines written for the supporting characters. The result is a standard high opening and low Come on, the author wanted too much and ended up not being able to control anything. The background was epic and the characterization of the supporting characters, and the description of the protagonist became increasingly inadequate. The plot could not be grasped, the characters could not be described, the villains lived longer and longer, and the readers enjoyed less and less. The result was a sudden drop in reading and a sudden death. The author's pursuit of perfection led to the book's perfect death.

I feel like this book is suitable to be adapted into a pornographic adult animation like Garter Stocking Angel