Douluo Peerless: the Eye of Defiance

It's really too bland, and the plot is also written in a mess. It can't convey the evil feeling of the Holy Spirit Cult, but it's written like a good one. The first 40 or 50 pictures are purely for self-interest, and the plot has no development. The Sharingan is written, the system is abstract, and the emotional scenes cannot be seen. The plot is practiced fiercely, and the characters are the same. But the author's attitude is indeed good, but the attitude behind it is really unknown. He was poisoned by the front. Who will appreciate it? Don't write casually. When I read your comment, it was just that my brain was crazy at that time and I didn't think much about it. This is not good. If you write a novel like this, it will really make people unbearable. The future is promising, look forward to the second book (show hands)

I don't understand why the body and mental strength are almost at the level of a Super Douluo, but they still need to hide the soul ring configuration? If you don't pretend to be cool, why would you write a fanfic? ! In the original work, Huo Yuhao dared to pretend to release six hundred thousand year soul rings, but this fan is not as good as the original work. The relationship aspect is even worse. None of the heroines are pursued by the protagonist. They are all cheating. Doesn't it look cheap? Each and every heroine also has a harem mentality, they seem very deliberate and have no tension at all. Halfway through, I really couldn't stand it anymore.

The martial soul sharingan is written in the introduction. Don't you want to trick readers into reading the sharingan?

If the author has a next book, he would suggest either a person with a small talent and a small background who can lead the system, or a person with a big talent and a big background. You two are piled together. Uh, so invincible.

If you adoptive fathers have any thoughts or criticisms, please tell me. The author has a good attitude, and as long as his family is not involved, he will basically be fine. The heroine can also ask for what she wants, but Ma Xiaotao is exempted. The ending of this character is doomed from the beginning.

If there really is a "pie in the sky" cheat (system), then why bind a mediocre character, a waste that is even inferior to ordinary people? If it is such a good thing, who will get us normal people? So I would rather believe that the system is just a bait for some kind of existence, a "parasite" that domesticates people into puppets. The system issues tasks and the time traveler completes the tasks, which is actually training and assimilation. Still the same thing, if there really is a god-making tool called "system", why should you be chosen? The popular point is: in Douluo Continent, there is no need to write system articles. Originally, Douluo Continent is just a fantasy floor tile, and the protagonist has to rely on the system to defeat Buddha, which feels very lame. The most important point is that the system will alienate the protagonist's efforts and abilities, because in the eyes of the reader, everything the protagonist has is given by the system, and the protagonist is of no use, just like a giant baby. In other words: "If this system is bound to a pig, it can also achieve this kind of achievement"

Generally speaking, the previous logic does not make sense at all. It is written that the main character's martial soul was broken because of Ma Xiaotao, but you have to consider the real situation. You were picked up as a baby, awakened twin martial souls, innately full of soul power, dual extremes, and ruined it just for an evil fire phoenix. You look down on Shrek's people. Isn't it better to train you than to train Ma Xiaotao? Moreover, Mu En is about to reach her end of life. Is it possible that he won't protect the protagonist? I must be mentally ill to cancel the double-click twin martial souls for an evil fire phoenix that I don't know when it will reach its ultimate limit. It feels like it's just to force a conflict.

Do you want to take a look at what you wrote at the beginning? The protagonist was picked up by Shrek, and according to what you said, it means that everyone in Poseidon Pavilion, including Mu En, knows about it. You said that Yan Shaozhe chose to sacrifice a genius who was adopted since childhood with an innocent life and full of loyalty for the sake of Ma Xiaotao? Yan Shaozhe dared to do this and smoke it like a top 😰. The stability of the sacred fire is obviously greater than that of the evil fire phoenix. The innate soul power of the Poseidon Pavilion elder and even the pavilion master

It's funny. Shrek is brainless except for Munn. Doesn't Munn have any brains either? The sacred and fire attributes are expected to reach their limit. The sacred attribute can restrain the evil soul master. Why doesn't Munn accept his disciples? Munn knows that the academy is going to die out. There is a sacred spirit that cannot be cultivated properly. He also agreed to remove the evil fire from Ma Xiaotao. The spirit is broken, a fool's plot.

The pinnacle of multi-female protagonists, the school belle's personal master, you can go and see how natural it is for people to have a harem. You don't call it a multi-heroine anymore, you call it a moron 🙂

After reading the previous twenty chapters, the author made the protagonist too invincible, and the world is also biased towards the protagonist. Tang San can still see the loss of luck. You must know that Tang San has always been paying attention to Lao Huo. It can be seen from the collection of Huo Yun'er's soul. The protagonist is so talented that if he cannot accept him as a dog, he can only kill him. Moreover, the protagonist has a destructive attitude towards Shrek. You must know that Shrek and Tangmen are the only places on the mainland where Tang San can absorb faith. Under such circumstances, Tang San will definitely let two dogs kill the protagonist. If both dogs fail, then Tang San will most likely kill the protagonist directly. Many Dou Er fans cannot control the intensity of the protagonist within a reasonable range.

The writing of the real male protagonist is really a bit ugly. In his previous life, an innocent young man went through two years of torture. Not to mention that he has mental problems, it is not a funny comparison. Moreover, the writing is so crazy that it feels like he has never seen a woman before. The emotional handling was not well written, it was very blunt, not as good as a single female protagonist.

I really don't understand. What does the author mean by the main character? I was tortured for two years. Come out like a normal person. Do you think you have correct views just because you are a modern person who traveled through time? He was tortured for two years and almost got killed, so nothing happened after he came out. He just talked about killing Shrek every day. No action at all? I will put you in Myanmar for a year to reform and transform, and your three views will be shattered into pieces. Not to mention being tortured for two years.

There is another thing that I don't understand the most. From a simple perspective of Dou Er, Shrek is like a double-edged sword. He has bad things, but he also has good things. He is not as evil as you wrote. From your book, it can be clearly felt that Shrek is not as good as the Holy Spirit Cult. I'm really speechless. No matter how bad Shrek is, he can't compare to the Holy Spirit Cult. A top college in the world is worse than a top terrorist organization in the world. The Holy Spirit Cult eats human flesh, drinks human blood, and absorbs human souls for cultivation. Even if Shrek's Ma Xiaotao has killed a few students, can he compare with the Holy Spirit Cult?

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There are many female protagonists, some are original, she works as a nanny for Huo, and gives Wang Donger to Huo

The more famous opportunities during the Tang Sect period of Dou Er Peerless: The Remnant Soul of Electrolux, The Soul-Eating Carving Knife (Gold of Living Things), The 100,000-year-old fairy grass in the eyes of ice and fire, Snow Emperor's embryo, Ice Emperor's sacrifice, The power of destiny of the auspicious beast three-eyed golden eagle, The Wanzai Xuan Ice Essence and the Ice Divine Crystal of Earth Dragon Gate, The gold of life in the body of the golden generation turtle in the Star Forest, The god-level soul bones and relics of the Dragon God in the "Dragon Tomb", the soul bone attached to the right palm of the Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear, and the left arm soul bone of the Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion (fixed soul skill Ice Explosion).

After it is put on the shelves, it will become Huo Yuhao's nanny article.

This novel is well written, but with the addition of an additional system, it becomes unreadable.

With all due respect, what you wrote above has proven that you are not suitable for writing this kind of thing.

Isn't it a bit poisonous to ask the maid to give Huo a bath?😥

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The story about the main character's process of becoming stronger through cultivation was quite interesting, but as soon as the plot entered, it got really annoying.

The first part was okay, but after the competition, when the competition was going on, to be honest, it was a bit delayed. I was thinking that it was you who defeated Ma Xiaotong in front of everyone, and then directly revealed your identity, instead of directly saying it later. It wasn't cool enough. Anyway, it didn't look good after the competition started, but it looked pretty good in the front.

What's that thing in front of? Someone please explain to me, no, I don't dare to look at it.

I can't see a little bit of the Naruto settings

I can't stand it after reading the first chapter. I really can't stand it. I worship an evil soul master as my teacher. If anyone else can do it, I can't stand it. I really can't bear to worship an evil soul master.

When getting along with Zhongli, Wuhuo and Yuhao, the author wrote that it was normal to have secrets of one's own. Why, when Electrolux came, I didn't know how to hide it and just let him explore the memory.

Why is the world consciousness kite not in the heroine? Isn't she the heroine?