I Was in Douluo, but I Was Defeated at the Beginning?

There is nothing left to write about the theme of Laojiao Dou Yi, and there are still many themes to be developed in Dou Er. Write another Dou Er. Learn from the lessons learned from the last time you wrote Dou Er. Don't have anything to do with the guests anymore, especially the evil crazy woman who collects shit beetles. Heart, can't you write about Huo Mie Tang, a shithole, and provide a few themes, 1. Angels walking on the Star Luo Line (the Heavenly Soul fights against the Soul Beetle and he can't go there, and the Sun and Moon Evil Spirit Master's base camp can't go), 2. The Soul Beast Line in the Dragon Valley, turned into a dragon egg, and was investigated by the Dragon God After reading the memories, he and Jialin hatched and were born in advance, and got the inheritance of the Dragon God. In the 3rd Sun and Moon Royal Line, he set up the inheritance of Zihuang, the ancestor of the Yalong, in the Secret Realm of Destroying the Sky Dragon. The protagonist just needs to be named Xu Tiance. In 4th line, he became the grandson of Zhang Peng, the Dark Demon. The evil tiger spirit uses a living carving knife to attract Electrolux and disguises itself as a bright white tiger. The 5-father, loving-son and filial path is first reincarnated into Xu Yunhan, and then by accident, he returns to Huogou to get Tianmeng. If you get Electrolux, the second martial spirit must be Frostmourne.

Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, Dugu Yan, and Ye Lingling will not follow the same old path again. Recruited by Qian Renxue, the hero saves the beauty, Zhu Zhuqing, the fairy grass code, Dugu Yan, and a nanny Ye Lingling. If you follow the above routine again, reading this way will be very tiring, and you will feel like you are going back to the previous books. Better change it. And there are so many female protagonists, let's add Shui Bing, Huo Wu, and Zhu Zhuyun too. One more is never too much.

The protagonist is someone else's golden finger, right? Most of the content is about improving other people's talents. Douluo will die quickly if he writes a group portrait.

I hope there will be severe revenge on Bibi Dong and Hu Liena later on ❤️ 😍😁

As title

Angel God, Qian Renxue

The pace is so fast, I got to know Dugu Bo before Chapter 30

After the Chrysanthemum Ghost breaks through, you can go to the Enshrinement Hall to enshrine Kouga. What a great offering. Don't talk about things. It's still high-definition and expensive. Not to mention Dongzi's jealousy. Qian Renxue is also the heroine. Just in time to drop by Tiandou to protect the protagonist. Don't you want to follow the dragon? The same goes for the protagonist Qian Renxue. If you are afraid that Dongzi will cause trouble. You can make her think about Anzi and Hu Liena. One anus can hold Dongzi to death. Not to mention Hu Liena. She is also considered half a weakling. Do it this way. The protagonist's sense of security has greatly increased 🙂

I am also an old book friend. I have read all the author's books except for the one about soul rings. These few books written in the past two years always reach the end, giving me the feeling of wanting to wrap things up quickly.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong's Q picture for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan in Picture A, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

Now there are still people writing about the beginning of the waste stream?

Big Cat Zhu Zhuqing

Little Snake Girl Duguyan

Douyi has nothing to write about in the Tang San era. You can write about the Tang Hao era, and the Qiandaoliu era is also fine. The upgrade cannot be slow or too fast, because normal Douluo knows those treasures, and try not to worry about Bibi Dong (don't save) and Tang Hao (in modern terms, these two people are self-inflicted), Dou Yi 2. In fact, noumenon sect, Xingguan Xu family, Longmen, descendants of Wuhun Palace, Sun Moon Empire, evil soul masters (this can be included, but it is more difficult to write) can be used. Over there, at most write about those who were forced away, but don't post it. Don't save Huo Yuhao. Looking at him, unless you can save him when he is just born, it is basically impossible. Dou San is difficult to write because there is Tang Hao. You can write about the self-rescue of the last consciousness in the plane and it must be in the upper age group. You can try to teach Tang Wulin because the protagonist is quite normal at the beginning. Later, he should be the Golden Dragon King, Old Tang, and the Tang Sect has the influence of shit. Dou Si does not need to read garbage.

Have you read the review to see what it says? After reading a chapter, I realized it was the author's usual rubbish counterattack and I couldn't read it any further.

The writing power of this book has declined a bit. The martial arts are quite novel, but the characters are not particularly consistent with the original work 😐

I hope the author won't write about the Blue Lightning Overlord Sect and the Qibao Glazed Sect in such a mindless way. Their family has a big business. Dugu Bo is a loner. There is also the ability to destroy clans and annihilate clans. Those who are barefoot are not afraid of those who wear shoes. In the case of being unable to defeat Dugu Bo. They don't dare to take risks. Don't write these little villains so brainlessly. That doesn't look good. Moreover, Ju Gui had a breakthrough after taking grass jelly. Just take advantage of the situation and go to the worship hall to make offerings. I don't want to play with Dongzi anymore. The worship service is small and noble. You don't have to suffer from Dongzi's arrogance. Moreover, Dongzi chilled the hearts of the people below. I'm afraid it would be too difficult to win over people from the Elder's Hall. It just so happens that Qian Renxue is the heroine. Didn't Ju Gui have the idea of ​​​​following the dragon? You can let them come to Tiandou as the protagonist and Qian Renxue to protect the way 😏

Give up your reputation. With this example, there will be no other way to recruit people in the future except forced recruitment.

I feel that the emotional line is much better than that of Struck by Lightning and Zhu Wu, and it's not embarrassing to read.

I just read the original article and found that the eighth ring of Zao Wou-Ki is purple and Zhang Wei is invincible

I have read all Laojiao's books. Although each of his books has received many negative reviews, the results of each of them are not bad. The main reason is that Laojiao's book can hit the sweet spot of most readers. Weird readers are, after all, a minority. [Overall feelings after reading Chapter 180] The style is still the same, the plot logic is relatively reasonable, it does not make people feel too brainless or nonsensical, and the scale is well grasped. In the Douluo fandom, Laojiao can be considered the leading author. [Let's talk about two shortcomings of this book] 1. There are too many interactions with Qian Renxue in the middle period, which makes people feel a bit watered down and drags out the plot. I don't know if it is a breakthrough in Laojiao's attempt to write emotional scenes. After all, what Laojiao is criticized for most is that the emotional scenes are written too perfunctorily. If there is a woman, you can immediately like the protagonist, and it will not exceed two chapters. But I personally feel that it is not necessary, or it can be done incidentally when promoting the plot, and it can be written separately, especially after the protagonist and Qian Renxue massage for almost ten chapters, I feel a bit watered down. Of course, the starting point is the same. 2. This book is the same as the previous one. There are not many bright spots in terms of creativity. Whether it is compared with the book "Ailei Strikes" or the "Stealing Home" book, it is not even as good as the "Slash Douluo" book. Let's not talk about the "Douluo 2" book. However, it is still much better than the previous version. Whether it is the martial arts aspect or the plot, the previous version had a somewhat hasty ending. That's all. I hope the author's subsequent plot can be a little brighter. How many books have you written about a plot about exercise equipment? If you want to trick Tang San and Yu Xiaogang, can you get some snacks? 🤭

Except for Wuhun Evolution, I have actually seen them all 😥😥

I feel that the protagonist's martial spirit fits the twin gods of the sun and moon very well. It's just that Douluo doesn't seem to have these two gods. But these two powers are still quite powerful in Douluo. It is said that the brain congestion of the Dragon God is the foundation of his body created by absorbing the essence of the sun and the moon. Especially the body. Split into a golden dragon king that possesses the power of the physical body, it can chase the Buddha and jump up and down. The second choice is the two gods of water and fire. Then use an external force of the level of the Ice and Fire Dragon King to push it. It is also a yin-yang route 🔨

It's a rare good book. Read it and make your own decision. It's very well written.

I would like to ask if there are any good book recommendations for the heroine Qian Renxue

No one knows this author better than me. All the female protagonists of this author fall inexplicably in love with the protagonist after just one or two novels. I knew the result without reading this book.

Why did it stop? Can you tell me something?

The writing is not serious and the progress is too slow.

When writing fanfics, it's best not to tear apart the original CPs, especially those that reach the ending, and don't always talk about being anti-Tang Dynasty and anti-master. Many people just write without reading the original novels, not to mention the comics. The key is that the protagonists behave in the same way as the original protagonists, and many are even worse than the original protagonists.

The sun's golden wheel is invincible in defense, and the moon's golden wheel is invincible in attack.