Chat Group: People in the Heavens, I Am the Bull Demon King!

I really don't understand. The Bull Demon King is the only demon king designated by Journey to the West who can compete with Wukong. The two fought against each other and alarmed the existence of all the gods in the past. You said that he might be taken away as a mount at any time. If you want to write about the Great Desolate World, you should be bolder. Don't say that Journey to the West is a Middle Thousand World that cannot bear the quasi-sage or above, and at the same time talk about the Lich War here. What will happen if both sides want to take advantage of each other? Are there any viable prehistoric novels on the site now?

When I saw Chapter 11, the idea was very interesting, but the writing was too abstract. First, I wrote a lot about the background, but these settings were all guessed by the protagonist. It's almost like this: I came to a foreign city and I didn't know the prices. I saw that the banknotes they used were relatively small, so a cake must be 3 yuan and a bowl of noodles was 10 yuan. Since it is a throwaway setting, this cake must be really 3 yuan, but the plot... How does your protagonist know? In the novel, the protagonist believes that the current Journey to the West is a world of Zhongqian, and the mystery is also Zhongqian... Why do you think so? Since you have divided Jinxian and Daluo Taiyi in Journey to the West into two realms, how do you know that Journey to the West is Zhongqian? Klein guessed the identity of the protagonist. The protagonist thought the other party was very smart. The reason was: the protagonist said his surname was Niu. Klein asked the protagonist if he was the Bull Demon King... Huh? After that, I kept throwing out various settings, and then the most outrageous one came. The world view was introduced through the protagonist. The source of the information is: the protagonist has been recalling the memories of his past life for 170 years! Because I have recalled the 170-year Journey to the West novel and related materials, Wu Chengen understands Journey to the West better than the protagonist. Huh? ? You have traveled through time, do you still think the original plot is reliable? Of course, analysis is not truthful. But the protagonist is extremely convinced that his guess is correct. Huh? ? ? From a third-party perspective, since it is a novel, these settings must be true, but... How does your protagonist know? Of course these questions can be answered. For example, the protagonist has verified it based on some clues, but but not written... As a result, all the characters now show: I am thinking this is the case. The protagonist has been a Shilipo Swordsman for 170 years, but...With 170 years of imagination, he has completely seen through all the secrets of the world of Journey to the West. Although I have never seen the Jade Emperor, Dou Mu or even Sha Seng, my understanding of myself is not as good as the protagonist. Huh? ? ? ? ? ? Originally I only wanted to write three or five sentences, but ended up writing more and more. Finally, to adopt the argument from a previous post, why are you writing private stuff here for your own pleasure?

The novels you write are nothing but private goods, and they are so awesome. Do you write books for pleasure or to make money? There are so many private goods but no content at all, why are you still chatting with cheats in the group?

Oh my god, as soon as I entered the book circle, I was filled with conspiracies and conspiracy, and there were also people who had second wounds in their brains. It scared me to death! 😱

The protagonist is unlikable, his wife is hot on the bed, and he wants to be a demon king, so why not just defect to the West? Goldfinger gave this trashy protagonist a fool's errand. If the plot and scheming described are better than those of the protagonists in other books, wouldn't it be funny? With such an IQ, I can't be fooled to death.

The book looked average, but I was entertained by the young man in the comment section who was fooled by a third-rate narrator.

What does it mean that Yanzhu has something to do with Dou Mu Xingjun?

There are too many poisonous points. 1. The protagonist's butt problem, the butt determines the head, people who are not from my race will have different minds. You can maintain the bottom line, but you can't ask other people to be like this. The protagonist who is not human inside and outside is disgusting 2. There is a wild boast in terms of realm comparison. Zhu Tianwen must sort out the realms of each world, try to be impartial, and don't brag about the realm of a certain novel. It really follows the description of the original text, and there are too many outrageous settings. Which world do you think is awesome? (For example, some small world lords can break through the void and travel through time and space before they become immortals; while some high-end prehistoric beings, Daluo Jinxian, can break through space; according to the description of space between the two, can the creatures of the small world be comparable to the high-end prehistoric Daluo Jinxian?) 3. Do not create private or secondary settings. Fan fiction can be changed in various ways, but the basic framework settings cannot be changed.

In the original work, Red Boy is the money-distributing boy of Guanyin. Unless Lao Niu can become the Immortal Emperor, I can't think of a better position than the money-spreading boy. As the past incarnation of Sun Wukong, Lao Niu's family can have any status. . . The protagonist is here to scare himself and do whatever he wants.

The original work of Journey to the West is interesting enough. There is no one who doesn't read the original work to read conspiracy theories.

Come on, this is not a novel, but a brother who was deceived by the anchor and became possessed.

This book has a messy plot and lots of illicit content. How can it be ranked so high on the new book list?

I told my wife and children that I would come back from visiting relatives in half a year at the latest. Guess what, I have been meditating on the six-character mantra on the Flower and Fruit Mountain for 130 years, and then I thought about watching the monkeys. After watching the monkeys, I forgot something, and it was time to think about my wife and children. Alas, it turned out that I forgot about Shuiqun, and then BYD wrote a few new members to write two chapters. There is no plot, it is all Ruozhi's extreme analysis and groove's life and death. I talk a lot about my other personal life, so I'll talk about something no one else talks about.

I'm speechless. I'm trying to make money by writing this kind of useless plot. I came to the starting point to read novels, not to watch young people study in college. If you are so patriotic, hurry up and join the army. 27 Years is coming soon.

The writing is okay, conspiracy theories are conspiracy theories, it doesn't matter, but it's too outrageous for you to keep talking about the setting. A 2/3 photo is all talking about personal stuff

No, private works are private works, even if you write fan fiction, you can't make things up out of thin air and slander them out of thin air. Let's give people the things that were not written in the original work and tell them in a realistic way.

This is my 40th chapter👍🏻 I really can't stand it anymore

Either you write about the orthodox Journey to the West, or you write about Journey to the Ancient West, but the results are mixed together. You also set the Ancient Journey to be more NB than the orthodox Journey to the West. How can a grandpa be like a grandson? The setting is to use the orthodox Journey to the West, and there is still a wave of harassment.

In my opinion, Cthulhu should be a group of failed experiments, just like Nuwa created humans, Styx created Asura, ugly men and beautiful women. Cthulhu represents chaos and nothingness and has no rules. It is more like a failure of a powerful man to exile the void.

Why did you enter the palace? This book is of a very high level, and it's not that old people can't find it. I was quite critical of it at first, but later I realized that I was naive.

Pure stream of consciousness, the author is immersed in his own world and can't extricate himself. The plot is hardly advanced. The whole article is written about the setting, either the original setting or his own personal setting plus some meaningless psychological descriptions of the protagonist.

Not very good. It's almost all the author's explanations and conjectures, and there are very few plot scenes.

The first chapter of the novel is a very important starting point. 😵

Have you cut it? It's getting more and more wet I want to read it when there is an update. If you can't continue writing, don't force it.

To put it simply, I want to follow the trend but I can't write with that flavor. After reading more than a dozen of them, it's just the author's boring inner drama to make up the word count. It's a system problem. He can write thousands of words, so just take it as it comes. It's all nonsense.

When did another chapter come out and the author came out to say something? This is too bad of character.